Originally posted by: priya_sejwalAmaing ff...
I just read all the chps...liked itAll chps r very well writtenAll couples chemistry, n mukbhi wedding nice...continue soonFabulous work...
Originally posted by: paredi just read all the partsπ...and i like dis ff vry much.β€οΈππΌ...update soon..
Chapter 10
Manik steps out in anger and takes a wood. He approaches a car and breaks the panes.
The owner and boys with Mukti come out.
Owner : Hey pagal what are u doing with my car ?
Manik catches his shirt.
Manik : How can she say that ?
Owner : What ?
Manik : How can she think that without her I can live ?
Owner : Of whom u speak ?
Kabir catches Manik's hand : Use chordo
Manik : What !!! How can I let her go?
Mukti : Manik what happened ? Where is Nandini ?
Manik gains his peace.
Manik hugs Mukti : She thinks that I can live without her.
Mukti : Ok relax she will not leave you.
Manik has tears.
Abhi and Kabir take him inside while Mukti and Dhruv pay the owner.
Manik sits on the sofa.
Mukti goes upstairs to Nandini. Nandini and Alya help Navya to wear a saree.
Mukti : Kya waa now ?
Nandini : What are u talking ?
Mukti : Tum ko kuch nai pata hai naa Nandini ?
Nandini : Tell clearly.
Mukti : Tumare pattidev akka Manik was breaking a car outside.
All are shocked.
Mukti : Haan so tell us.And why ur cheek is red?
Nandini: Mukti who.
Mukti: Jaldi yaar.
Nandini tells the entire scene.
Mukti: Are u mad? I think u don't know how much he loves u.
Nandini: I talk him normally but he is a monster, see. He even forgets our bet.
Nandini steps out before their reaction.
Nandini comes downstairs and sees Manik's blood hand.
She runs to him. She takes his hand.
Manik sees her cheek. He is about to touch it but she stops him.
Nandini: Abhi give me the aid box please.
Abhi takes it and gives to her.
She bandages his hand.
Manik : Nandini...
Nandini : Kabir tell ur friend to reduce his anger.
She steps in the corridor to welcome the guests.
Kabir: Manik, it's Mukti's happiness today so behave normally.
All guests arrive.
Kabir and Navya did a little drama about Mukbhi. They played their first meeting in the hospital where Abhi carried a box with many things and bumped to Mukti. And last scene they showed how Abhi proposed Mukti.
After their performance Mukti runs to Kabir and Navya for hugging them.
Mukti: Thank u so much guys.
Navya : Welcome, always be happy.
Dhruv announces about ring ceremony but Manik takes the mike.
Manik: Hi everyone today I did a big mistake in my life. I slapped my wife who has my heir on her. So I want to ask her sorry for my behavior. My love this song is dedicated for u.
One, two, three!
I am a fool, i am a fool
I am a fool fool fool
Yun be-heart, kyun be-heart
Kyun but very be-heart
I come near, i come near
I come near near near
You go far, you go far
You go very very far
Arey thanda rakh kaleja
Thoda baraf pe ghis le bheja
Sorry le ja, maafi de ja humko free
One, two, three!
Sorry sorry sorry
Pakde ye dono kaan kya
Sorry sorry sorry!
Bache ki loge jaan kya
Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya
Sorry sorry sorry
Bache ki loge jaan kya
I know you love me and you know i love ya
Hai apne understanding to phir locha-lafda kya
I want a big big smile and
I want it only only now
Are! Andar se tu okay hai bahar se khaye bhav
Aise kaai ko atka
Tere ghar ka jhadu katka
Tu jo bole kar denge daddy free
One, two, three!
Sorry sorry sorry
Pakde ye dono kaan kya
Sorry sorry sorry!
Bachche ki loge jaan kya
Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya
Sorry sorry sorry
Bachche ki loge jaan kya?
Final morning, final morning
Don't you break my heart
Automatic guilty feeling
One time over smart
See, see, see can't you see see see
Kitne deep deep deep mere dil ke jazbaat
Hai kaai ko naaraaz
Karle maandavli maharaj
Hum sab aaj ye teri khaaj khuja de free
One, two, three!
Sorry sorry sorry
Pakde ye dono kaan kya
Sorry sorry sorry!
Bache ki loge jaan kya
Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya
Sorry sorry sorry
Bache ki loge jaan kya?
Manik : Nandini Manik Malhotra I really love you. Some hours back I was angry in ur words not in you. If something happen to you I can't think to live without you. U are my oxygen and my reason for living. Please forgive me.
Manik has a lonely tear who flowing on his cheek. Nandini who was sitting comes to him crying.
Nandini : Manik I thought u will not change but u did because if u were the old Manik u will never ask for forgiveness but u prove that I am wrong. I love you Manik. But the truth of life also is that when someone born one day he will die another. Even it's very hard to live without our partner but u have to do. Issliye I spoke like that earlier.
Manik: Please Nandini don't talk like that I will ask ur Aiyappa if someone has to die one day it will be me first.
Nandini puts her hand on his mouth: Not say that.
Mukti: So my Bhabhi know understand why he was so anger.
Kabir: Ok everyone not talk about the past.
Manan hug.
Aliya : come all are waiting for engagement after there is mehendi.
Abhi knees in front of Mukti: My sexy will you accept to spend the rest of my life with me?
Mukti is moved so she just nods with her head. They puts each ocher rings.
Navya : Now the engagement is over all men go out only Satish can stay here.
Kabir: Where Madhubala ji?
Navya: Not my business.
Manik: Mere baat toh sunno Navya we will stay upstairs silently.
Navya and Alya laugh.
Alya: We know u boys so just move out.
Nvya : Idea does a bachelor idea.
Kabir think: After all it's not a bad idea guys. Haan there will be drinks, songs, girls...
Navya beats him: Not even dare Kabir warna...
Kabir: Calm if we meet girls it's not necessary that we will do something bad. So boys chelo.
Nandini taunts Navya: Pagal if they are upstairs we have an eye on them but u flop everything.
Manik smiles with her reaction: Thanks for this idea. Bye.
All four run outside.
Navya : sorry sorry girls.
Precap: Kabir without a tee-shirt wakes up with a call-girl
Manan's conversation about their child.
Originally posted by: sizzysehrishi read ur all update
found itsweet and lovely
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maana damn cuteyrr
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