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New TS: Left Incomplete. Last part on pg 7 (Page 5)

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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 1:25am | IP Logged
interesting... pm plz when u update it

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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 2:23am | IP Logged
nice start Smile
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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 3:39am | IP Logged
wow... brilliant update...
damn this shagun..
ishitha should have let raman slap her..
ishitha is determined to let her feeling to raman..
n raman.. janab ko tho jawab he nahi hai..
he also thought to confess his feelings.. n 
made preparation for the bigg night..awww choo cute..
wats dis new twist..
were is ishita..
hope nothing wrong happens with her
please dont keep suspense for a long time..
please do update soon yaar

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Thanks for all the comments and likes. It means a lot Back with the second update of my TS. Kindly ignore the mistakes Big smile

    LEFT INCOMPLETE, PART 2

But sometimes no matter how much you want something, things don't work out the way you want them to. Isn't it?

Ishita was driving home fast. She wanted to be with him, in his arms as soon as possible. Meanwhile, raman was calling her continuously. She knew why he was calling and chose to ignore it. She was planning to go talk to him face to face. Raman got worried when she didn't respond to his calls. He went to the Iyer's hoping that she came back from the clinic and went to amma's. But he was surprised when amma said she didn't come there.

Raman: Damn it! Where are you ishita. Pick up the damn phone.

He called the clinic and ishita's assistant stated that she left about two hours ago. Everyone was shocked and worried.

It was winter in delhi and most of the people were at their homes at such a cold night so the whole road was deserted. Ishita suddenly applied her brakes when she saw shagun crossing the road. She was surprised as to what shagun was doing so late in the night at such a place. So she followed shagun into a small hut located away from the highway. But she couldn't find a trace of her once inside the hut. She saw a door at the back of the hut and ran to it but it was locked from outside. She heard someone locking the front door too and panicked.

Ishita started banging her fists on the door and screaming. But nobody was there to listen. Suddenly the whole place filled with smoke and she started coughing badly. She took a chair and went to the door to hit it when a flame blasted from the door. The flame spread fast and she tried her best to get out of there.

Raman stormed out of the Iyer house stating that he is going to search for ishita. But he bumped into shagun who was going into the house.

Raman: Shagun?? Where are you coming from? It's quite late.

Shagun: Woh raman, main job doondne gayi thi. Aur kaafi dher ho gayi.

Raman eyed her and went out while she smirked and made her way into thr house. Raman was driving frantically around the roads which leads to her clinic. But he couldn't find any trace of her. He tried calling her mobile again but she didn't respond. He was regretting for not being able to voice his feelings for her. He was feeling guilty for keeping ishita incomplete all these months.

Shagun came out of the washroom and saw that her phone was ringing. It was her friend calling.

Shagun: Haan haan jeet meri hi hai! Maine kaha tha na tumse, that I will kick ishita out of this house. Poor ishita, she is just too innocent. Now she will never come in my way again. She will burn in flames!!!

Adi shuddered as he listened to his mother's conversation. He knew his mother cooks up plans but never in his wildest imaginations had he thought that his mother would go to an extent of killing someone. He slowly made his way down the stairs without making any noise. The whole bhalla and Iyer family was downstairs worrying for ishita.

He saw his only sibling, ruhi crying saying that she can't sleep without her ishima. That ishima always comes back to read her a story and pat her to sleep. Something broke inside him seeing her crying uncontrollably. He had never seen ruhi cry so much. Yes he never even considered her as his own sister. He always hurt her but this time it hurt him to see her crying. Staying at the same house with her had made him realize what an angel she is. She always stood by him and helped him. He flinched back knowing that ishita..matlab ishima is ruhi's life.

Yes, ishima. He finally acknowledged. Ishima was thousand times better than shagun mamma. She don't cook up evil plans like shagun mamma. No wonder why everyone likes her so much. No wonder why ruhi confides in her always.

With these thoughts, adi's tears started flowing non stop. He hated the fact that his own mother killed his sister's mother. And for the first time ever, he decided to make it up for all the times he had hurt ruhi. He wanted to complete the picture of a loving brother which he had left incomplete all these years.

Adi: I need to tell something. Please mujhse naaraaz mat ho.

Toshiji: Adi puttar. We can never be angry at you. Kya baat hai?

Adi: Woh woh..

Mr. Bhalla: Kya baat hai adi puttar. Bataao humhe.

Adi: Mujhe aap sab se bahut zaroori baat kehena hai. Woh...ruhi..Ishima..

Everyone was surprised when adi addressed ishita as ishima. They saw how he was crying and toshiji hugged him tight.

Toshiji: What happened puttar? Do you know where ishita is?

Adi: She is... She is...

Shagun: Adi, beta bahut late ho gayi hai. Aao mamma paas so jaao. Waise aap log itna chinta kyun karrahi ho? Ishita clinic mein busy hongi. Aao adi. Let's sleep.

Adi: NAHIN! I WON'T SLEEP WITH YOU. YOU ARE BAD!!!

Precap: Police finds ishita's car inside the jungle of the highway and finally locates the hut. They inform raman and raman rushes there.

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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 8:48am | IP Logged
heart touching updte...
finally adi reaised his mistakes...
loved hw adi tought mak up nd felt fr ruhi...
i cant wait fr nxt...
updte soonish...
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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Emotional update.
Hope nothing happens to ishu.,
Update soon
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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Superb TS..
Waiting for next part..SmileSmile
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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 10:45am | IP Logged
Lovely TS..
Good to see Adi realized the actual reality...
Sad that IshRa are in pain..
Waiting for the next part..update soon.. Smile

Thanks for the PM :)

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