She bit her lip. "I like it when you have light stubble on. It suits you well. You look..."
"Handsome? Hot? Edgy??" Aahil smirked.
Sanam smiled cupping his face into her hands. "Like a true Nawab."
I guess some things never change. Perhaps they shouldn't.'
My favorite part! This made me laugh, knowing how much we love his stubble
and I also teared cuz of the fact that for Aahil, this is a memory, the past. The separation in your story is even more painful with whats going on in the show.
But yes our Nawab needs thats stubble to look extra sexy, classy and like Sanam said, a true Nawab! Reminded me of many of our discussions
Now about his hair on the show... If only Sanam was around to do something about that too
A special mention to the bond between Imaan and Aahil! I have said it before too but in the scene of her nightmare, it was even more beautiful!
You did such an awesome job writing the father daughter bond!
If only we got to see such mature yet exciting stories on screen! Its so heartwarming!
"You wanted power and money, right? Well I'll show you just how powerful this Nawab can be. You haven't manipulated the son! But the Nawab of Bhopal. And I'll see how anyone walks away from it."
This made me shiver! Although Aahil's reaction on the show made sense and I am glad he remained a loyal and good son till the end, his fury is also understandable! I can expect him to go crazy, lose control and become engraged upon finding out about the deception that basically took a hold over his entire life! Brilliantly described
He couldn't control the burning anger, sadness or devotion and without thinking he reached out and smashed the mirror with one fierce punch which caused a huge sound in the house.
Aahil ignored the pain in his hand that was now bleeding heavily. He kept punching and throwing everything around - Ignoring the red liquor floating on his injured hand.
"Why? I can't live with this pain anymore. I can't!" Tears flowed down from his brown eyes which he couldn't hide anymore.
The way you have wrote it! Omg it was powerful! I could see it happen before me! Its heartbreaking to see him like that
The last bit was just so powerful! The imagery, the words, the pain! Aahil as a broken man touched me so much! His pain can be felt by each and every reader and that is why you should be so proud of your work! You make us feel the emotions so strongly!
I reread that part because it was so strong! Gorgeous piece of writing my love
Now the teaser is quite teasing
Especially the first and last line! So excited for the next part, esp Aahil wanting his Begum back!
My poor baby suffers each time!
I feel like wrapping my arms around our sexy yet adorable Nawab! But only Sanam reserves that right
Lovely update! Probably one of my most favorites, but then they all are, lets just say the entire story is one of my favorites
Hope u do update by this weekend! Waiting impatiently