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SwaRon TS: Raising the SummerTemperature [Final Part Pg4] - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
awasome part
plz do update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
ok this was something different... totally surprising infact shocking...
i jus loved it...
 do update asap ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
girl i loveee reading ur work...
all the stories r so beautiful nd hatke. . .
& once again this story is hatke, ekdam alag ..
when reading this its like i watching some hollywood movie..
loved the characterization u did ur every stories...
here this is not the Swayam we knw, he is jerk, garbg but i luv him. .
i cn nvbe hate Swayam & i knda like this jerk Swayu..
& Sharon, my goshh she is sexy, she is bold and i love this Sharon.. the Diva.
so ovrall i loved this & if possible Pelllesss make it a long one plz (puppy face)..
& & the main point that its so cold here, so we need some risetemperature. .
so update, update, update 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
This was seriously HOT!
Want to read like more like ASAP!
Please continue soon and keep writing more of swaron!
Absolutely love your writings ðŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Quite intresting:)
Do update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: i_yatharthk

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aapka achcha hai yaar chitra di aap ek naya post banate ho and then bol dete ho ki comment karo achcha hai ya bura jab ki aapko pata hota hai ki achcha hi hai...
idhar mein phas jata hun yaar comment to karna hai par har bar ek hi comment kare nice, goodone, do continue, different concept...ye sab likh likh kar mujhe sharam aane lagi hai yaar ki ye hai ki inke pass humesha ek naya topic hota par apne pass to uski praise karne ke liye bhi kuch naya nahi hota... dhang se praise bhi nahi karna aata...inn sare praises se to ab justify bhi nahi kar pate post ko aur usse padne ke baad jo amazement hoti hai ki yaar kaise likh lete hai itna sab...


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100/100 for ur comment . . .
its so so so True..
we all r in same boat..
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsome..
diff story...quite interesting..loved it..
update 2nd part jaldi se..cant wait..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Dew..


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100/100 for ur comment . . .
its so so so True..
we all r in same boat..

Thank you so much yatharth and Dew :D I seriously dont know what to say and if I deserve this much of appreciation ^_^ But I love all of you seriously. . .I wqit for all your comments on my every work :) Thank You so much for all your love. . .Truly ^_^
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Posted: 9 years ago
@i_yatharhtk and Dew...
Count me in too. XD

@Chitra: you deserve all out love. :)
Coz you are awesome. B|
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res for actual comment :P
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Haha.. ðŸ˜†
It was super fun to read the whole chapter.
Sharon the sexy diva. she messed up Swayam's home for revenge. ðŸ¤£
I like it. 
And Swayam is awesome as a badass. Whatever avatar this boy takes, he excels at it.
Great writing as always. :)

Happy New Year! 🤗

Cheers.
Nishi.
Edited by Rhapsody. - 9 years ago