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Posted: 9 years ago


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Chapter 5



On reaching Mathura, Ketaki gets surprised on seeing the persons there and shouts.

Ketaki- Chachu-chachi..she runs and hugs them.
Chintu (smiles shaking his head)- Oye..tsunami kam se kam Chacha-Chachi ko toh baksh de apne atyachar se..itni zor se hug karta hai koi?
Ketaki (loosens the hug)- Haan mai karti hoon na aapki chhoti behen Ms.Tsunami Chautala..and smirks..waise aapko jealous feel karne ki zarurat nahi hai..aap bhi hug karlo.
Chintu- No thanku tu hi kar hug..saying he touches their feet.
Chacha (shakes their head)- Tum dono kabhi nahi sudhroge har waqt ladte rehte ho.
Chachi- Par pyar bhi utna hi karte hai..jitna ladte hain usse zyada pyaar karte hain.
Chacha- Haan sahi kaha.
Ketaki- So toh hai..our jodi rocks.
Chintu- Jodi rocks ki bachi har waqt mujhe pareshaan karti hai aur phir kehti hai our jodi rocks..though he was teasing her but was happy also to see her back to herself.
Ketaki- Haan toh aap bhi toh har waqt mujhe naye-naye naam dete ho.
Chacha- Bas bahot hua..aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai..ab hotel chale ya pure din yahin khade hone ka irada hai?

Both shuts their mouth.

Chintu- Haan chaliye.


All four settles in the car which Chintu has booked already.

Ketaki- Mujhe ek baat samajh nahi aai ki aap dono toh marriage mei gaye the na phir yahan kaise aaye?
Chacha- Haan par marriage ho gai toh hum wapas aa gaye..humne Chintu ko phone kiya tha ki hum wapas aa rahe hain Delhi..toh usne hume bataya ki tum dono Mathura jaa rahe ho toh isne hume bhi yahan bula liya.
Ketaki (sees him gratefully)- Thanku bhai.
Chintu- Zarurat nahi hai kyunki ye maine apne liye kiya hai.
Ketaki- Matlab?
Chintu- Matlab ye ki one week trip wo bhi tere saath 24/7..ohh god mujhe pagalkhane nahi jaana..isliye maine Chacha-Chachi ko bulaya taaki mai pagal hone se bach jaun.
Ketaki (frowns)- Haww..how mean bhai..par aapko yaad dila doon ki aap Delhi mei bhi mere saath hi rehte ho jab Chacha-Chachi nahi hote.
Chintu- Haan par tab tu apne college aur mai office chala jaata hoon..toh mujhe kuch ghante tujhse chhutkara mil jaata hai.
Ketaki (shocked)- Chhutkara?? Itna tang karti hoon mai aapko?
Chintu- Ye toh tu khudse puchh.

And they keep arguing till they reaches the hotel.

They check-in in the hotel and moves to their respective rooms after getting the keys.
All of them rests till evening and then goes out to have their dinner in a restaurant.
After having the dinner, they again comes back to the hotel and sleeps.


Morning

All goes out again to have their breakfast. After the breakfast, they decides to roam in the local market and shop.

Chintu- Kitni shopping karti hai tu?
Ketaki- Ab aapko meri shopping se bhi problem hai? Thik hai phir nahi karti mai shop..mai wapas ja rahi hoon aap akele hi enjoy karo..and starts to go.
Chintu- Arey-arey kahan ja rahi hai?mai toh mazak kar raha tha..
Ketaki- Toh maine kab kaha ki mai serious thi?
Chintu- What?
Ketaki- Maine aapko phirse budhu bana diya mere budhu-ram bhai..and giggles pulling his cheeks.
Chintu- Mera time aane de phir batata hoon ki Chintu Chautala kya chize hai.
Ketaki- Ok..all the best for that.
Chachi- Uff phir shuru ho gaye..Ab chale? Ya aur baaki hai?
Ketaki- Haan chalte hain.


They roams in the local market shopping and then goes to have their lunch in the nearby restaurant while having her lunch Ketaki heard a couple talking about the fare being held nearby for three days.

Ketaki- Bhai..lunch ke baad mela ghumne chalte hai.
Chintu- Kaunsa mela?
Ketaki- Arey yahan na ek mela laga hai three days ke liye maine abhi ek couple ko kehte hue suna.
Chintu- Acha thik hai chalte hain pehle lunch toh kar le.
Ketaki- Haan.

After having their lunch, they decides to go to the fare but Chacha-chachi refuses to go.

Chachi- Nahi beta tum dono hi chale jao..mai bahot thak gai hoon..hotel jakar araam karungi.
Chintu- Thik hai Chachi..toh hum sab bhi wapas chalte hain.
Chacha- Arey nahi beta tum dono jao aur ghum aao..mai hoon na inke saath.
Chintu- Par..
Chacha- Maine kaha na..tum dono jao aur enjoy karo..hum chalte hain..
Chintu- Ok..

Chachi-Chachi leaves to hotel while Chintu and Ketaki for fare.


Next day

As promised to Lolly for the treat Dolly goes to meet her in afternoon in the pretext of buying some grocery.

Lolly- Arey wah..aa gai madam ki sawari..kya baat hai?
Dolly- Haan ab promise kiya tha toh nibhana toh tha..ab batao kahan chahiye treat tumhe.
Lolly- Batati hoon pehle ye toh bata teri uss khadus nani ne aane kaise diya tujhe?
Dolly- Wo hum grocery lene ke bahane se aaye hain.
Lolly (surprised)- Aaj sooraj kahan se nikla hai? Nani ko chakma de kar aai hai.
Dolly- Sooraj wahi se nikla hai jahan se roz nikalta hai..aur hum chakma dekar nahi aaye hain..hume kuch grocery bhi leni hai.
Lolly- Uff..tera kuch nahi ho sakta..tu toh do pal ki khushi bhi nahi manane deti mujhe.
Dolly- Koi baat nahi ek pal ki mana li na wahi kaafi hai..ab batao kahan chale?
Lolly- Aaj mela laga hai chal wahan chalte hain.
Dolly- Kya?? Par wahan toh bahot time lag jayega.
Lolly- Toh kya hua? Ab itna jugaad karke aai hai toh toh thoda aur kar lena.
Dolly- Par..
Lolly- Chup..tere par aur war toh khatam hi nahi hote..chal ab chup-chap..kabhi apni zindagi ko enjoy bhi kiya kar..and drags her to the fare.


Other side, Chintu and Ketaki also reaches the fare and starts roaming.

Ketaki is dragging Chintu from one shop to another when Chintu's eyes fall on a beautiful girl dressed in baby pink suit having a slight smile on her face trying different colors of bangles and making them to sound. He was just lost in that pure divine beauty but was made to come out of it by Ketaki's voice.

Ketaki- Bhai..kahan kho gaye..help me na mai kaunse sandle loon? Purple wale ya blue wale.
Chintu- Dono ache hai..
Ketaki- Par mai kaunse loon?
Chintu- Tujhe dono pasand hai toh dono le le..saying he turns to the girls side and finds her going but then notices her one of the anklet on the place where she was standing and runs to pick it up shouting..Payal-Payal..


Hearing his voice, the girl turns and looks back at him and notices her anklet in his hand. Then she looks at his face and gets drown in his green emerald eyes. They had a brief eye-lock until her friend comes and takes her from there.

On not finding him besides her, Ketaki also comes to him and shakes him. He comes back to reality and hides the anklet in his jeans pocket without Ketaki's notice.

Chintu- Hmm..shopping ho gai teri?
Ketaki- Nahi abhi baaki hai.
Chintu- Koi baat nahi..kal kar lena..ab wapas chalte hain.
Ketaki- Kya aap kal wapas mujhe shopping ke liye laoge?..she was surprised.
Chintu- Haan..kyu kya hua?
Ketaki- Nahi..kuch nahi.
Chintu- Hmm ok..and they goes back to hotel.


"Apologies for the mistakes πŸ˜› "
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ketaki... Enjoy d shopping :D

V well written faru :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
havnt read yet...tym nikalke aaram se padhungi...
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Posted: 9 years ago
as usual superb update dear πŸ‘ πŸ€—
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Originally posted by: -Shwetha-

Ketaki... Enjoy d shopping :D

V well written faru :)

shukriya 😳
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Originally posted by: designersaini

havnt read yet...tym nikalke aaram se padhungi...

koi nai..jab tym mile padh lena πŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: --Divya--

as usual superb update dearπŸ‘πŸ€—

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shukriya di 😳 πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
chintu ke chacha chachi ki entry ho gayi... wah chacha chachi bade pyare hain πŸ˜³ waise chacha chachi ke bachhe nahi hain kya πŸ˜† 
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ye le behense pareshan nahi hona isliye chacha chachi ko bulaya chuntne πŸ˜†
firse chintuko buddu bana diya isne πŸ₯± ye kabhi nahi sudhregi πŸ€£
oye hoye payal payal πŸ˜³ πŸ€£ 
update achha tha ji 
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Posted: 9 years ago
wah humare chacha chachi bhi aagaye πŸ˜ƒ 
bhai bhabhise bhi mile πŸ˜³ 
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