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MY DREAM, MY LIFE. A kriyaansh and swaron ff (Page 28)

shivi_17 Senior Member
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Posted: 29 June 2015 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
I was waiting for rey's response in the last scene of the last part...
but you skip that scene... Unhappy

Anyways...

At least u updated...
and it  was an awesome Update...
Full of Kriyansh...Day Dreaming
Enjoyed it totally...

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Posted: 29 June 2015 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 29 June 2015 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
O my god it was sooo dam goood update .its I think first time I am commenting as i starded reading the ff when you last updated.I must say you are a superb writer keep up the good work.and update soonish

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Posted: 01 July 2015 at 4:40am | IP Logged
Such a beautiful story. I read all the chapters in one stretch. I really luvd d story. Plz pm me in ur story. I would luv to read ur story

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Posted: 02 July 2015 at 4:28am | IP Logged
Great updateClap
airport scene was awesome
so Kriya is slowly falling for Rey n I'm loving itBig smile
I thought Kriyaansh were married before bt their first night is here...Ermmok
bt it was lovelySmile
the way Rey understood Kriya's feelings..just greatSmile
morning scene was cuteSmile
and hey u didn't continue the scene where u left in the previous update
and abt the teaser i've wrote in the previous comment, my brain cell isn't working more than thatLOL
so pls pls update fastSmile
thank you so much for the PMSmile

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Posted: 05 July 2015 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Update?

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Posted: 06 July 2015 at 12:05am | IP Logged
Update plss

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Lawrentian_214 Newbie
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Posted: 06 July 2015 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
Hey! How are you? Must be really angry on me for not commenting on your previous update and you surely have a right to be mad at me. Well there are some reasons behind that but keeping aside the excuses I just want to talk about the update today.
  Beginning with the description of Kria's feelings, I only want to say that they were very well-penned. I mean, sometimes I am just shocked at how you describe the feelings of a person that does not exist in reality and that too, with so apt points and corners that the critical readers like me tend to take it all being real and concrete.
  Coming to the would-be expression on Reyansh's face when he first saw Kria after what it felt like years to him. He just kept his constant gaze on her when he was meeting the others keeping the best for last i.e. finally moving to Kria. I really wondered that no one teased him for staring at Kria like a child stares a toy as I really expected Sharon and Swayam to do the honors. Anyways, it was still very mesmerizing to read the way Reyansh hugged Kria and the way Kria first fought off her dilemma to respond back or not and finally hugged him back. The best of this whole scenario, for me, was when Reyansh shivered at her touch. Man! He loved her enough to not expect anything in return not even a hug or a mere touch on his body. This bit was really moving!
  Then again coming to your strengths that is writing down people's inner depths and in this case, the portrayal of Kria's nervousness for her first night as wife to Mr. Reyansh Singhania. It was a treat to read the confused Kria as I always found that amusing, be it in the show or in your ff. After this bit, we come to the mature and understanding Reyansh, I mean he is just so perfect for Kria. The way he talked his heart out less than he talked Kria's heart out. He knew Kria so much that he spoke everything that she wanted to say which earned my respect for that man. Who else does this in world, giving space to your wife and saying things that your spouse wants to say but on the contrary you say  so that they don't need to be uncomfortable. Well according to me Reyansh wanted to start a married life with Kria but for the sake of her he delayed that intention (if I am wrong here d0 correct me as this is only my imagination).
  I loved that you did not do the stereotypical thing of making men lay on couch and women on the bed as India and Pakistan on Wagha Borders. It was a very sweet gesture from Kria to let Reyansh sleep on the bed , after all its his bed. Coming to the bed romance I loved how Kria embraced Reyansh taking him to be her teddy bear, it was very cute I must say. Sheepishly I would say that I pictured the whole scenario on Kunwar and Shakti (kya karein aadat se majboor). After that I just adored the forehead kiss on Kria by Reyansh. It was so couplish and sweet!
  In short, it was all in all a complete and heart-warming update as I loved every bit of it because it was transitioned very well with no writing gaps or spaces.

P.S. I just wanted to talk you on phone so let me know when I can call. Want to tell you loads about my  life and hear loads from you. Keep it quick and yes, I just wanted to say that... um... I am... I am kinda proud of you for this ff of yours. Just wanted for you to know this! Great work again!!


Edited by Lawrentian_214 - 10 July 2015 at 10:24am

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