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MY DREAM, MY LIFE. A kriyaansh and swaron ff (Page 22)

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Posted: 29 April 2015 at 4:11pm | IP Logged
HEY GUYS,
I'm sorry, for this late update, as i was busy with my sissy's engagement, see the irony of the situation, i was writing about kria sister's engagement, and my own sister got engaged, so sorry guys for the late update.
wanted to clear out a few things about the update,
  don't judge kria, because she is still not in love with rey, she is on its first stage, that is to trust.
  i know guys, this update was not as satisfying as guys deserve after such a long wait, but trust me it was important to show kria feelings!!!
  and don't worry, next updates will be much much better!!! i promise!!!

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Posted: 29 April 2015 at 5:35pm | IP Logged
Nice update. Waiting for more

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Posted: 29 April 2015 at 10:10pm | IP Logged
Chottu update pout
but
gud 1
beautifully written
luv d way u xplained kriya insecurities 4 marriage life & emotion...
luv d airport scene
Update soon huge 1 on kr only

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Posted: 30 April 2015 at 1:23am | IP Logged
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Posted: 30 April 2015 at 6:22am | IP Logged
party time...
u updated
and my kriyaansh married...
loved the way her wish r being fulfilled
rey is removing all her insecurity one by one
and in last
that emotional kiss
ans sweet smile
she is so confused...

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Posted: 30 April 2015 at 9:41am | IP Logged
  First things first! I want to apologize for not commenting on your last update at that time. But I surely will comment a big one for this update.
  Now starting with the update, I just love the way you enhanced your capabilities for the portrayal of people's emotions and their inner turmoil. Kriya in a confused as well as happy mood was emoted so well that I actually imagined those expression on her face. And the song! It just so aptly fitted in with the update of yours as if it was made for only this update. Well on a selfish behavior, I was expecting Khuda Jaane but one does not always gets what she desires for but still, this was an ingenious update. Although it was a bit rushed as I was anticipating for the whole marriage fiasco for KriYansh just the way it was for SwaRon but obviously a bit different in its portrayal. Well it matched the way you described the insights of Kriya so I would accept it the way it is.
  Well, talking Reyansh I am still stuck for with his sudden decision to marry Kriya and I am counting on you that you would, sooner or later, describe that why this decision was so abrupt. I ope you would clear the air about this confusion battling in my head. Leaving that to you, I must return to Reyansh - The Ideal Husband, he being a complete gentleman fulfilled all of the wishes of his lady love with utmost care and affection. It seemed pretty cute to me the way Kriya was confused about her newly aroused feelings for Reyansh. But the highlight of the update was the "Forhead kiss" of that little romantic moment between the two where both never said a word to each other but still their hearts were talking a lot.
  It is truly said that:

  " Action speak louder than words."
  I also loved the way Reyansh smiled when he saw tears in the eyes of Kriya and I know it that Reyansh was seeing the first sight of love or a line of hope for him in those tears.He was happy that after all this time, he managed to make Kriya feel the way he feels for her and I hope that Kriya starts to reciprocate the same love and affection he feels towards her.
  Well again you came up with your famous ending lines but this time it was the best of all the previous updates as it conveyed a lot. The positive in negativity, the light in shadows and the hope in hopelessness were secretly described in these words:

                                                        I LIKE IT, BUT I DON'T
                                   I WANT IT, BUT I DON'T
                                  I'M FINE, BUT I'M NOT
                            None of it matters, but it does!!!

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Posted: 30 April 2015 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Okay.. that was a small one but I totally loved it...

Amazing update...

Kriya had tears... awww...

Updatee the next part soon Smile

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Posted: 02 May 2015 at 5:25pm | IP Logged
heyyy me ramya
I was searching fr some good Kr stories
then this story caught my attention
I just completed reading all the parts u updated till now
must say all parts are amazing
mai har ek part keliye comment karna chahthe but can't do right know
I will give detail comment when I come online through PC :)
u are such a good writer
the way u penned down though person POV and normal author POV was brilliant
u got a nice writing skills
I really loved the way u described kriyas feelings and Sharon swayam and reys
I loved this story cmpltly
do update soon and pm me plsss
will be waiting fr the next part eagerly

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