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MY DREAM, MY LIFE. A kriyaansh and swaron ff (Page 20)

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Posted: 25 April 2015 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
Yup we can understand. ..
congo 4 ur sissy marriage. ..
from my side do wish her happy marriage life...

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Posted: 26 April 2015 at 10:17am | IP Logged
okay soo being in a vry bad moodDead
maine aj bohot bada comment likha bt damn woh gayab ho gayaAngry
nw i dnt want to write everything all over againCryCryCry

jst can say
its was amazing as usual
u r jstt fab
i mean i jst love ur writing
u r a brilliant writer

P.S- sorry to disappoint u bt m in a vry bad mood n dis 10th sucksDead
 sorry once again :'(
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Posted: 29 April 2015 at 3:59pm | IP Logged



"MY CONFUSING FEELINGS"

Yesterday we got married... MARRIED, it's a big big term, a big relation, and that was definitely showing it's effects on me, I was married to Reyaansh, now I completely belong to him, this surely scares the hell out of me, I mean he could do anything to me, as if I'm some kind of a property... but deep down I knew, that he'll never do anything that'll hurt me, or make me do something which I don't want to do, it's just that, I can't accept this, as I don't trust him, and I can't trust anyone so easily, might be that's the reason, why I don't have many friends, People think I'm the Tomboy Kria, who doesn't believe in relationships like friendship, but in reality, relationships scares me, as it requires trust, and to trust somebody means you have to put down your guards, you give that person all the rights to hurt you, to hurt you badly, but in Reyaansh case, it's different!! Because, it wasn't my wish to be in a relationship with him, it was God's wish, and I know whatever He had written for me, would definitely be for my good, I trust God, and I trust Him for my life, if he has chosen Reyaansh, then I'll surely give this marriage a chance.

Kehte hain:

Khuda ne iss jahaan mein

Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya

har kisi ke liye

Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara 

Maano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye


Before Shar's marriage, i used to be so scared of this marriage thingy, because Ma always used to say, that in a marriage, it's always the girl who had to compromise, she had to leave behind her dreams, her thoughts, her opinions. But now that I'm married, i don't feel like this, might be it's because I'm married to Reyaansh, it seems as if he knows all my insecurities, and one by one, he is vanishing them, I don't know, how he is as a person, but right now, what he is doing for me, it makes me feel as if all my wishes are being full filled, as if no tension can even touch me, Oh!! It's a great feeling, and for once... just for once, I want to give it's credit to Reyaansh. 

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta 

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta

Kaise hum jaane, hume kya pata

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta

Tu humsafar hai

Phir kya fikar hai

Jeene ki wajah hi yehi hai

Marna issi ke liye


Kehte hain:

Khuda ne iss jahaan mein 

Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya

har kisi ke liye...


He had completed all the formalities for my admission in one of the best universities of the city,  now I only have to go there and study, without the tension, that Ma Pa would be upset. It all seems like a dream, just a month ago when my results were out, I was feeling so depressed, i thought that my dream of studying further, would remain a dream only for the rest of my life, but now I'm feeling so happy, as if in a dark night, Reyaansh had suddenly started fireworks lightening my whole life. Our future is always a mystery to us, but now as I see, I'm really looking forward to solve it, because the future looks good, My Life... looks good!!!

hmm Meharbaani jaate-jaate mujhpe kar gaya

Guzarta saa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya

Tera nazaara mila, roshan sitaara mila

Taqdeer ki kashtiyon ko kinara mila


Oh!! How I used to dream of living my life in London City, but had never expressed it to anyone, as I knew nobody would understand me, as they thought it a very alien wish, but for me, it was my most deepest, dearest and passionate desire, and now just being with Reyaansh, it's going to be fulfilled, I just wish he comes out as a person, I always wanted my husband to be. I soo want to thanks my stars for putting me in such a relationship whichm from its starting only, is bringing so much happiness for me. I wish life always remains as good as it is right now.

Sadiyon se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye

Teri sohbat mein duaayein hain ussi ke liye

Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara

Maano mujhko banaya tere hi jaise kisi ke liye


The car stops at the airport, breaking the chain of my thoughts, we've come to see off Reyaansh, he was going back to London for the next two years. I was feeling so down, I mean, yeah! I was married to him, and he is leaving, but I shouldn't be upset because of that, I wasn't emotionally attached to him, but nevertheless, there was this sinking feeling inside me, but I let it go. He was meeting everyone, for the last time, he was upset, it was clearly written on his face. 

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta 

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta 

Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata 

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta


Then he came to me, the pain on his face, it was irking me, I soo wanted to go ahead and clear those worry line from his forehead with my fingers, but I stopped myself, but I stood still, still as a statue, he came forward, took my face in both his hands, and instantly, unconsciously, my eyes closed, i don't know, why his touch had this effect on me, he was cradling my face in his hands, he leaned a bit and kept his lips on my forehead, and stayed like this, he was breathing heavily, and I could feel the pain he was going through, it felt like eternity when he left my face suddenly, fetch his bag, and rushed from there, as, if he'll stay for one more minute, he'll do something, he doesn't want.

Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fiqar hai

Jeene ki wajah hi yehi hai

Marna issi ke liye


 He was speeding towards the departure gate, but just at the end, he turned, looked at me, then narrowed his eyes, as if focusing on something, and a huge actual dimple wali grin, which was missing for the whole evening, spread across his face, and then entered the gate leaving me in utter confusion. What. The. Hell. Was. That.?? I mean why did he smile, but immediately got my answer, when I turned to see my face in mirror, there were tears in my eyes, i took one on my fingertip, and thought that why was I crying, why was this affecting me, and above all, why the hell was he smiling watching me cry, this was really getting on my head, ever since this Reyaansh had entered in my life, everything had become so damn confusing!!

Kehte hain:

Khuda ne iss jahaan mein 

Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya

Har kisi ke liye...


                                           I LIKE IT, BUT I DON'T
                                   I WANT IT, BUT I DON'T
                                        I'M FINE, BUT I'M NOT
                            None of it matters, but it does!!!


Edited by resplendent26 - 30 April 2015 at 2:41am

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Posted: 29 April 2015 at 4:11pm | IP Logged
HEY GUYS,
I'm sorry, for this late update, as i was busy with my sissy's engagement, see the irony of the situation, i was writing about kria sister's engagement, and my own sister got engaged, so sorry guys for the late update.
wanted to clear out a few things about the update,
  don't judge kria, because she is still not in love with rey, she is on its first stage, that is to trust.
  i know guys, this update was not as satisfying as guys deserve after such a long wait, but trust me it was important to show kria feelings!!!
  and don't worry, next updates will be much much better!!! i promise!!!

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Posted: 29 April 2015 at 5:35pm | IP Logged
Nice update. Waiting for more

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Posted: 29 April 2015 at 10:10pm | IP Logged
Chottu update pout
but
gud 1
beautifully written
luv d way u xplained kriya insecurities 4 marriage life & emotion...
luv d airport scene
Update soon huge 1 on kr only

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Posted: 30 April 2015 at 6:22am | IP Logged
party time...
u updated
and my kriyaansh married...
loved the way her wish r being fulfilled
rey is removing all her insecurity one by one
and in last
that emotional kiss
ans sweet smile
she is so confused...

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Posted: 30 April 2015 at 9:41am | IP Logged
  First things first! I want to apologize for not commenting on your last update at that time. But I surely will comment a big one for this update.
  Now starting with the update, I just love the way you enhanced your capabilities for the portrayal of people's emotions and their inner turmoil. Kriya in a confused as well as happy mood was emoted so well that I actually imagined those expression on her face. And the song! It just so aptly fitted in with the update of yours as if it was made for only this update. Well on a selfish behavior, I was expecting Khuda Jaane but one does not always gets what she desires for but still, this was an ingenious update. Although it was a bit rushed as I was anticipating for the whole marriage fiasco for KriYansh just the way it was for SwaRon but obviously a bit different in its portrayal. Well it matched the way you described the insights of Kriya so I would accept it the way it is.
  Well, talking Reyansh I am still stuck for with his sudden decision to marry Kriya and I am counting on you that you would, sooner or later, describe that why this decision was so abrupt. I ope you would clear the air about this confusion battling in my head. Leaving that to you, I must return to Reyansh - The Ideal Husband, he being a complete gentleman fulfilled all of the wishes of his lady love with utmost care and affection. It seemed pretty cute to me the way Kriya was confused about her newly aroused feelings for Reyansh. But the highlight of the update was the "Forhead kiss" of that little romantic moment between the two where both never said a word to each other but still their hearts were talking a lot.
  It is truly said that:

  " Action speak louder than words."
  I also loved the way Reyansh smiled when he saw tears in the eyes of Kriya and I know it that Reyansh was seeing the first sight of love or a line of hope for him in those tears.He was happy that after all this time, he managed to make Kriya feel the way he feels for her and I hope that Kriya starts to reciprocate the same love and affection he feels towards her.
  Well again you came up with your famous ending lines but this time it was the best of all the previous updates as it conveyed a lot. The positive in negativity, the light in shadows and the hope in hopelessness were secretly described in these words:

                                                        I LIKE IT, BUT I DON'T
                                   I WANT IT, BUT I DON'T
                                  I'M FINE, BUT I'M NOT
                            None of it matters, but it does!!!

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