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MY DREAM, MY LIFE. A kriyaansh and swaron ff (Page 2)

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by resplendent26

Originally posted by foramradhika

Originally posted by resplendent26

Hey guyz, i'm back with another chap socha tha response acha aaye ga then post karoon gi but I guess, acha response aane me time leg ga... so posting the second chap and if the response would be satisfactory, I'll post more frequently! Okay enough of my bak bak
Here it goes...

THE PARTY



"Listen, i am looking alright na? Or should I take my dupatta the other way? Kri!!, are you listening to me!!", cried Shar and brought me out of my dreamland. 
"Haan, Oh! Yeah!..you are looking absolutely stunning Girl, why are you fussing about it so much?...Hang on, lemme guess, you are thinking about your Prince Charming being there, aren't you?", I asked with a smirk stuck on my face, and for the first time in my life saw Sharon blushing, she was looking so cute with that hue on her cheeks.
"Aww!!!, Shar someone is blushing and all haan!!!", I started teasing her.
"Shut up, Kri I'm not blushing, and you come on quickly give your face touch up we are getting late", exclaimed Sharon.
"Kria, Sharon come down fast we are getting late", called my mom.
"Yes mom, coming",we replied in unison and quickly gave the final touch ups and left our room.

ME AND MY MUM:

SHARON'S LOOK:

"This party is soo boring yr, can't they get a better host for the evening", I cried with boredom written all over my face.
"And you were being so excited about it", taunted Sharon. And with that I thought all the hopes of getting Shar's Prince Charming here were shattered. But then out of nowhere, a lady came and stood in front of my mum and started staring her, at first my mum ignored her, it was an awkward situation, but when mum finally acknowledged her, a wide smile came on her face and she immediately gave that lady a bone-crushing hug.
   Me and Sharon were so shocked, we were looking at them open mouthed, several minutes passed and the two ladies standing there were excitedly talking and were royally ignoring both of us. Finally when they were satisfied, they spare a glance to us and we hurriedly closed our mouths, that lady  was mum's school times  best friend and the reason behind there soo long conversation was they haven't met after school. Then what? the remaining evening we were getting bored and my mum was busy with her school friend.
    At last, the party ended and we were back to our home sweet home, for me and Sharon it was the worst party we have attended but at that we didn't knew that this party will be the sole reason for all the big changes that were due to happen in our lives. ...

       SOMETIMES IT IS THE SMALLEST INCIDENT 
        THAT CAN CHANGE YOUR LIFE FOREVER!!!


Res

 ll unres later
PEhale dinka chika dinka chikaDancing
 Me firsttt

unres
Cnt believe maine itni jaldi unres kar diyaShocked
Itna chindi sa updateCry
I wnted to read moree
Bt it ws cute
KRisha bonding ws shweet
 Loved d way u added geeta maa as KRisha's maa
dat best friend of geeta maa ll b reyams mom I guess

THankzzz for d pm
 Ab jaldi jaldi update karo n wada wala plzz

Thanks for such a quick reply, its really very appreciative

Wlcm ruby diSmile
n u cn call me radhika or radzTongue

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Radhika,  it was your birthday on 2nd I didn't knew that... but anyways!!!
 
Belated Happy Birthday To You My Love!!! Heart Hug


Edited by resplendent26 - 06 January 2015 at 7:42am

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by resplendent26

Radhika,  it was your birthday on 2nd I didn't knew that... but anyways!!!
 
Belated Happy Birthday To You My Love!!! Heart Hug

Awww  THANK YOU SO MUCHEmbarrassed

This means alot to me
Thankz ruby diHug
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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 3:32am | IP Logged
I have only one word after reading this...
AWESOME Big smile


Read both the parts together and I loved it Big smile

Loved krisha's bonding Embarrassed ...the perfect sis jodi

Poor krisha, their excitment went into water LOL LOL

Their mom meeting her school friend...
maybe from here their love story will start Wink

Love u for making Geeta maa their mom ^_^ :-))

Lovely pic...shakti and geeta maa Embarrassed

Amazing story Clap
Continue soon...waiting for it Smile

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 6:53am | IP Logged
Well dude that something! I mean you're writing skills are improving beyond bounds and I truly appreciate that. I must say that you kinda developed my true interest for the story which only a true writer can do. By the way your idea of making Geeta Maa as KriSha's mom is brilliant but I am hell angry on you that you didn't tell me before. Anyways, keep writing it and tell me as well when you post the next chapter. I will try my level best to keep replying even after I resume my university. The replies can be late sometimes but I promise that I will reply even its late though. Dude you know my circumstance.
  Enough of my bak bak and boring talks with which I AM SURE You would have banged up your head. Keep writing and stay happy!
  Eagrly waiting for the next chapter..

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Will post the next chap when it'll reach page 5, hope you guyz will understand, after all I can ask for this much at least!! Shocked
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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 9:28am | IP Logged
We guyz I think I'm more excited to post then you guyz being excited abt reading it!!Ermm

I'll post the next chap tomorrow

And it would be a bigger one especially for you radz!!,Big smile

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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 10:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by resplendent26

We guyz I think I'm more excited to post then you guyz being excited abt reading it!!Ermm

I'll post the next chap tomorrow

And it would be a bigger one especially for you radz!!,Big smile

YipeeeBig smile
For meEmbarrassed
I ll b waiting
Really excited

Thank uuuHug


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