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MY DREAM, MY LIFE. A kriyaansh and swaron ff (Page 13)

shivi_17 Senior Member
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Posted: 03 March 2015 at 1:40am | IP Logged
nice update...
Smile
but its too short...Unhappy

loved kriyansh convo.. Thumbs Up


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resplendent26

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Posted: 03 March 2015 at 1:49am | IP Logged
Amazing...
nope this update is also charming as other updates...
wauh... kriya don't cut other talk is impossible our cute sexy batcutter xD...
poor sid lol...
wauh kr kbc was awesome but their nok jok was containing smal part but cute...
luvd it...
update next part soon

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Lawrentian_214 Newbie
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Posted: 03 March 2015 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Bang Bang! As always an awesome update from you and as usual I loved it! The KriYansh meeting was very well penned down and I liked the return of Baatcutter, I was missing that terribly. Got a bit confused with new entry named Siddharth but I guess that will be cleared away in the next update. Well I really like the way Reyansh called Kriya a "Certified Baatcutter", that was way too cute.
  Coming to you, loosing your charm I would like to inform you that the "Charm" never left and its still there, you just need to find it back and I know that you will surely be back with a bang with the next update.
   I just want to ask you that how come do you find that perfect ending line that plays the key for the lock of your update? Do answer this question!

- RJ



Edited by Lawrentian_214 - 03 March 2015 at 1:52am

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Posted: 03 March 2015 at 1:53am | IP Logged
See everyone believe that all ur chapter had has and gonna have charm...

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Posted: 03 March 2015 at 2:08am | IP Logged
Guyz I've a few question for you guyz!!

first of all, tell me should I continue to write in Kria's point of view, or should make it third person!,
as I wanted to show how a girl feel when all these things happen in her life?

Secondly,  should I include some hindi in it, sometimes I think I'm not able to convey my concept properly in English,  if you guyz thinks the same do tell me?

All suggestions are welcome here!!

And last of all,
Take a guess, who sid can be??




Edited by resplendent26 - 03 March 2015 at 3:10am

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Posted: 04 March 2015 at 12:34am | IP Logged
I like kriya's POV...

but also don't mind if u make it 3rd person's POV...

I would also love to Read it including some hindi...


and about sid

I think He is rey's brother

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Posted: 04 March 2015 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Which u like
kriya or 3rd person view its ur wish both r fine 4 me...
yaa u can include hindi but little and easy 1 as my hindi is weak...
I think sid is rey brother...

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Posted: 04 March 2015 at 10:09am | IP Logged

Res

finally unresWink

hey remember me?Ouch

i no i m vry lateConfused

bt u c examz n  den busy schedule

waise congro itne saare readers mil gai apko

happy for uSmile

so cuming to d chappy

hehe kr ki meet vaisi hi thi jaisa maine socha tha

fighting se bhari padi

n wah wat a flash back

awesome update as usual

i loved it

god dat baatcutter is back

i sooo missed her

new entry sid

i think woh rey ka bhai hai

n yooo sid ka role rohan kar raha hai

dats gr8

I really like the way Reyansh called Kriya a "Certified Baatcutter", that was way too sweet

bt wait wat

 loosing ur charm

dear its ur big misunderstanding

let me tell u d charm never left n ya its still der

nicee update







Edited by -Baatcutter- - 01 April 2015 at 9:08am

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