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MY DREAM, MY LIFE. A kriyaansh and swaron ff (Page 12)

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Posted: 02 March 2015 at 10:19am | IP Logged
plz update...



waiting...

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Posted: 02 March 2015 at 2:45pm | IP Logged



" I-KNOW-IT-ALL!!!"

"What the hell are you doing here, Mister??", i asked angrily, after realising who he was.
"O hello madam, i should ask you the same question, because as far as i know you don't live here", he back fired me.
"Yeah, i don't live here, but still this is not your home as well ... Oh!! now i get it, you are a robber aren't you? and have planned to rob a marriage house, i was so sure you're 'so-called' corporate firm must have kicked you off by now!!! but the question is why are you so dressed up for your this robbery?",I asked thinking hard.

"Woah Girl!! You are so good at assuming things! I must say you have a strong imagination... But let me burst your bubble, I'm not a thief, I'm now the CEO of that corporate firm of which you were referring, and talking about the marriage house I'm here to attend the wedding of my cousin and last of all thank you for your compliment", he said clarifying every detail but his last sentence was not digestible  to me.

"When did I compliment you??"

"Oh!! So you are suffering from Alzheimer, I'm really sorry to know!!", he said showing fake concern.

"Shut up!! Mr. Reyaansh, and answer me", he was really getting on my nerves now.

"Oh!! Lady didn't you just say that I'm well dressed".

"But I didn't meant it in a compliment way!!".

"Really Ahan!! I saw the way you were staring at me before...your eyes speaks volume", and with the last sentence he was suddenly very serious and came way too close to me.

The situation was going out of my hand, in a way he was right, I was actually staring at him so I just thought it better to change the topic.

"Leave this!", and I made some distance between us.

"You were talking about your cousin wedding...you are Swayam's cousin?"

"Yeah! And who are you?", he asked me.

"You have come for the wedding, and you don't know who I am!!"

"Don't tell me you are the bride ... Oh my goodness!! What had happened to Swayam's choice, but last I remember, your name was not Sharon it was some Kripa , Right??", Now he was testing my patience, and this time I'm not gonna control myself.

"O hello!! Mister, first of all my name is not kripa, for heaves sake!! and secondly, I'm not the bride it's my sis Sharon's wedding. Got it Mr. I-know-it-all", I shot back.

"Okay miss Kria... ", he said giving a really sincere smile, he knew my name, sometimes he seems such a sincere and a genuine person but then again his stupid smirk was back on hiS face "But Thank God haan!! you are not the bride, I wish bhabhi...", I interrupted him.

"Excuse me, Mister she is not your bhabhi yet, she is still my sis so mind it ", and I pointed my finger towards him, but he linked his finger with mine (the time when rey kria are fighting in fire exit, same like that)

"Okay Miss Angry Young Woman, so tell me something, what are you doing here? You should be in the engagement ceremony, Right now".

"Oh crap!! how can I forget", and there  I realized, that Swayam was waiting for his stoll, and this person was just wasting my time.

I tried to move, but realized that our fingers were still linked up. I tried to break free, but he was holding it too tightly.

"Leave my finger, and move aside", I said.

"What??", He was looking so dis oriented.

"I said, leave my finger and move aside!!", I repeated my words, this time with a louder tone.

"Oh!! Sorry", he left my finger, and I rushed past him into Swayam's room, took his stoll and rushed out, but all this time my dress was coming in my way.

"Should I help you??", he asked with a smirk.

"NO THANKS!!", I replied with an irked tone, and continued with my struggle with the dress, it was hooking with every other thing, I was feeling so helpless, if I'd pulled it hard, it'll tear, so I spared a glance backwards to see him leaning on a pillar, grinning widely, waiting for my request.

This guy is the heights of... heights of... I don't know!!! But thanks to my stars, my dress was free, and giving him a I-can-do-it look, and with a victorious smile, I rushed outside. But as I was crossing the gate,  my dress again got tucked with the gate. Oh please Nooo... I turned around, and fortunately, there was this boy who was releasing the dress.

 

"Thank you so much!!!", I said gratefully.

"It's nothing", he answered.

"So Who are you? and what are you doing here?", I asked as now, after Reyaansh, I don't trust anyone.

"Actually Swayam bhaiya send me to find you",  he took the stoll from my hand "you must be Kria di, bhabhi's sister, Right?", he asked.

"Oh!! So you are Swayam's younger brother", I said.

"No I'm..."

"Yeah! Yeah! I'm Kria only", I answered cutting his line.

"And what's your name?",  I asked.

"Siddarth ,but plz call me sid", he replied.

"Very well!! Swayam Siddharth, same initials!!"

"But I'm not Swayam bhaiya ..."

"Okay! now we should hurry, we are already very late", with that I picked up my dress and rushed inside the house.

 

THIRD PERSON VIEW:

As always kria didn't allow Sid to tell her the truth.

Sid was standing there thinking, that what this girl had just imagined all by herself only.

Suddenly someone came from back, and put an arm around him, surprising Sid.

"What Reyaansh bro, you scared me!!"

"What happened, why are you standing here like a statue"

"Bro you see that girl? She just imagined what she wanted to!! Didn't even allowed me to say anything!! She just cut my every line, every sentence, Man!! He replied exasperatedly.

 "Yeah! I know, she is a certified baatcutter, will NEVER listen to anyone, but let it be, let her think what she want, in the meantime we should go inside!! Swayam must be  waiting for us",  and with that they both move inside.

 

                                   "DENIAL AND TIFFS 

       ARE THE FIRST STAGE OF AN ETERNAL LOVE"

 



Edited by resplendent26 - 02 March 2015 at 3:20pm

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Posted: 02 March 2015 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
Hey guys have finally updated the next chap,

I'm not satisfied with my this update, I guess I'm loosing the charm!!

But don't worry, next time will try to give a bang on update!!

Wanted to clear some miss understanding, the institute was Kria's school not college

She was in matric back then!!!

Hope you guyz will like it!! Do reply and tell me!!

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Posted: 03 March 2015 at 1:40am | IP Logged
nice update...
Smile
but its too short...Unhappy

loved kriyansh convo.. Thumbs Up


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Posted: 03 March 2015 at 1:49am | IP Logged
Amazing...
nope this update is also charming as other updates...
wauh... kriya don't cut other talk is impossible our cute sexy batcutter xD...
poor sid lol...
wauh kr kbc was awesome but their nok jok was containing smal part but cute...
luvd it...
update next part soon

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Posted: 03 March 2015 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Bang Bang! As always an awesome update from you and as usual I loved it! The KriYansh meeting was very well penned down and I liked the return of Baatcutter, I was missing that terribly. Got a bit confused with new entry named Siddharth but I guess that will be cleared away in the next update. Well I really like the way Reyansh called Kriya a "Certified Baatcutter", that was way too cute.
  Coming to you, loosing your charm I would like to inform you that the "Charm" never left and its still there, you just need to find it back and I know that you will surely be back with a bang with the next update.
   I just want to ask you that how come do you find that perfect ending line that plays the key for the lock of your update? Do answer this question!

- RJ



Edited by Lawrentian_214 - 03 March 2015 at 1:52am

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Posted: 03 March 2015 at 1:53am | IP Logged
See everyone believe that all ur chapter had has and gonna have charm...

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Posted: 03 March 2015 at 2:08am | IP Logged
Guyz I've a few question for you guyz!!

first of all, tell me should I continue to write in Kria's point of view, or should make it third person!,
as I wanted to show how a girl feel when all these things happen in her life?

Secondly,  should I include some hindi in it, sometimes I think I'm not able to convey my concept properly in English,  if you guyz thinks the same do tell me?

All suggestions are welcome here!!

And last of all,
Take a guess, who sid can be??




Edited by resplendent26 - 03 March 2015 at 3:10am

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