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Poem: Outside A Castle.

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 8:43am | IP Logged


She walked through the crowd, invisible to human eyes

Staring around, taking in the sound

It was alien to her, all this chaos

For she came from a land frozen with ice.

Men, woman, children ran past her

Not one soul waited to see

That a person stood in front of them

Just walked through her, over their eyes, a cover.

Memories failed to be recalled

frustration took its place instead

Why couldnt she remembere?

Wasn't this the very place she had falled.

A voice rang in her heart, beckoning her to it

crazed, she listened; the memories stumbled around

she pushed through the crowd to the source

the familiar voice, in her brain did fit.

Atlast she reached the gate

the huge castle loomed over her

a patch of grey cloud covered the high turrets

The place where she had met her fate.

A middle aged man ambled into view

cursing the stars with his teary eyes

she looked at him with surprise

memories had been refereshed, all anew.

Courted her the man had, in the past

against the wishes of the King; her father

flowers had blossomed in their life

until the evil spell was been cast

a vile man had told the King

of the unlawful deeds of his daughter

raged deeply, the King had banished the daughter's lover

Causing misery to sing.

The daughter had met her death, in separation

while the man lived alone, crazed.

The King soon lost everything

and had lost his life in desparation.

She stood,frozen, watching him cry silently

how wretched fate could be, she knew now

she neared his ears and opened her mouth

"Come to me" whispered she, quietly.

He looked around shocked

he heard her voice, was he hallucinating?

"My love" he whispered

the next second, his heart stopped.

The locals found the man's body the next day

the same spot their princess had died

amazed at the tricks of fate,

buried him and went their way.

She ran towards him in joy.

In the end, fate had fulfilled its ploy.

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VReSHna IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 9581

Posted: 30 December 2014 at 8:53am | IP Logged
Sad but Beautiful...
amazingly written...

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rosyrkohli IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6122

Posted: 30 December 2014 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Nishi tia is deep gal 
I loved it ...Approve

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Rockingbhardwaj IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 11:00am | IP Logged
great amazing emotional

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Dew.. Senior Member

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Posts: 753

Posted: 30 December 2014 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
its so beautiful...
loved it. . .

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piyu_swaron IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 3:54am | IP Logged
it's emotional nishi..
 written beautifully.. loved it

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