Ek Veer Ki Ardaas - Veera

India-Forums

   
Ek Veer Ki Ardaas - Veera
Ek Veer Ki Ardaas - Veera

~VeeBa OS~ Veera Sirf Meri Hai (Part 1 Added)

mehwishk13 Senior Member
mehwishk13
mehwishk13

Joined: 23 October 2014
Posts: 213

Posted: 30 December 2014 at 6:31am | IP Logged
Hey guys! I'm starting a new OS.. I'm sure everyone (except maybe Shivin fans) are mad at Ranvi right now.. I definitely am Angry so I decided to unleash my anger... In gonna update a teaser.. Read it and plz tell whether I shud continue Smile

~veeba4eva

Teaser
Part 1

Edited by veeba4eva - 31 December 2014 at 11:03pm

mehwishk13 Senior Member
mehwishk13
mehwishk13

Joined: 23 October 2014
Posts: 213

Posted: 30 December 2014 at 6:33am | IP Logged
Teaser


Nihal's phone jerked and fell to the ground as someone grabbed him from behind. He looked back to see who it was but it wasn't who he thought it was..

Part 1


~veeba4eva

Edited by veeba4eva - 31 December 2014 at 11:00pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Alyna098

Alyna098 Groupbie
Alyna098
Alyna098

Joined: 03 July 2014
Posts: 145

Posted: 30 December 2014 at 6:39am | IP Logged
Ow some cont soon

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

mehwishk13

sonmusk Goldie
sonmusk
sonmusk

Joined: 11 May 2013
Posts: 1725

Posted: 30 December 2014 at 6:57am | IP Logged
M i thinking what u want to o.O

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

mehwishk13

mansi_as18 IF-Rockerz
mansi_as18
mansi_as18

Joined: 08 August 2014
Posts: 8270

Posted: 30 December 2014 at 8:51am | IP Logged
pls punish dat dumbo... want to see him tortured

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

mehwishk13

Nikki36 IF-Dazzler
Nikki36
Nikki36

Joined: 16 January 2011
Posts: 2569

Posted: 30 December 2014 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
I hope u make ranvi the murderer and he js trying to frame baldev,

He hates baldev cause he is just so much better than him in every way

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

mehwishk13

mehwishk13 Senior Member
mehwishk13
mehwishk13

Joined: 23 October 2014
Posts: 213

Posted: 30 December 2014 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nikki36

I hope u make ranvi the murderer and he js trying to frame baldev,

He hates baldev cause he is just so much better than him in every way
Wink Smile
mehwishk13 Senior Member
mehwishk13
mehwishk13

Joined: 23 October 2014
Posts: 213

Posted: 31 December 2014 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
Teaser


Part 1


The guy turns Nihal around to face him and then pushes him on the ground. Nihal tries to balance himself on his hands while trying to take in the figure in front of him... It's Ranvi...

"R-r-r-r-ranvi! Ae tu ki kar ra hai! Dekh chal chayegi goli! Ranvi! Door kar ise!"

Ranvi has a confident yet evil smile on his face.

"Chal jayegi? To chalne do na Chachu! Isi me hum sab ke liye bhalai hai! Mere Papaji ka qatil apni asli jaga pohunch jayega!"

Nihal is shocked to hear this. He thought that topic was long over.

"Ye tum kya keh rahe ho Ranvi! Hum to yeh sab bhula chuke the hain na!?"

Ranvi clicks his tongue.

"Nahi nahi Chachu.. Aapko galat femi hui hai, hum nahi, aap bhula chuke hai.. Aapko kya laga, me apne Papaji ke qatil ko itni jaldi maaf kar dunga? Galat!"

Nihal is totally taken aback and hurt by Ranvi's words. His eyes go to the handle of the revolver and he notices that it has Baldev's name engraved in it.

"Ranvi ye to, ye to Baldev ki gun hai..!"

Ranvi looks at the handle as if double-checking it even though he knew it was there. While Ranvi is looking at the handle, Nihal tries to get up but he is again pushed down by Ranvi who this time ties his hands behind a pillar just like Rajveer had done few minutes ago.

Ranvi looks at the gun again and says "Are haan Chachu! Ispe to Baldev ka naam likha hua hai!" Then he comes close to Nihal and puts the tip of the gun under his chin and says, "Iska matlab.. Agar aap ko aaj kuch ho gaya.. To ilzaam.. Baldev pe jayega.." He evilly smiles and gets up.

Nihal's eyes open wide with disbelief.

His voice sounds dry as he says "Ranvi ye tum kya ke rahe ho..Baldev ko phasaane se tumhe kya mile ga?"

"Kya mile ga? Kya nahi milega Chachu!? Mujhe meri Veera waapis mil jayegi. Wo Veera jo uske pyaar me andhi ho kar mujhe bhool gai hai!"

Precap: Nihal is shot dead..


~veeba4eva

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

Alyna098Nikki36

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
veeba vm on kabhi jo badal barse(veeba night romance special)

Author: sanjanabaldev   Replies: 0   Views: 1606

sanjanabaldev 0 1606 27 December 2014 at 12:21pm by sanjanabaldev
SBS : Bansuri says yes for VeeBa wedding/VeeBa Gunjan dance

2

Author: Lady_Bheem   Replies: 12   Views: 4493

Lady_Bheem 12 4493 02 December 2014 at 4:32pm by Surish
Veeba Vm Tere naam ki kalma ...my veeba story

Author: sanjanabaldev   Replies: 0   Views: 1351

sanjanabaldev 0 1351 24 October 2014 at 6:27am by sanjanabaldev
VEEBA VEEBA

Author: florence123   Replies: 5   Views: 3205

florence123 5 3205 09 September 2014 at 5:58pm by a2zahid
Veera Wu: 18 DEC 12 Veera ki veera is grown now :)

Author: -Rashu-villian-   Replies: 8   Views: 5190

-Rashu-villian- 8 5190 19 December 2012 at 1:22am by SACHIKO123

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

  • Please login to check your Last 10 Topics posted

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index