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Friends,I have tried this OS...Hope U all will like it...


Dec 31st 2014

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Karthik entered the canteen as he was very tired of loads of work..He decided to taste a cup of tea, which would give refreshment for his mind n body..He started to make tea by pouring some hot milk in a cup..while adding some scoops of sugar,he casually turned back n saw some sight which made his eyes burning with fire...There seated Meesai n Kamal in a table,deeply engrossed in their talk.


K's mv:mama inga enga vantharu??...vanthathum vantharu...poiyum poiyum antha thadiyanudaya pesanum??...athvum romba mumbarama pesikittu irukaaru...antha thadiyan vera sirikaran naduvula naduvula lesa...ennava irukum??..


Karthik couldnt maintain his rage..Hurridly,he stirred his tea n slowly began to sip to lessen his tension..when he turned another time ,there was no trace of kamal,only meesai was left there...after a min,Meesai got up n came towards K..

K's mv:ivar ethuku ippa enta vararu...pesa kodathavangaltalam pesitu kadaiseeya enta varathu...appadiye poga vendiyathuthana...

Meesai:mappillai...eppadi irukeenga?

Karthik:haan...iruken...

Meesai:onnum illa mappillai..raji vishayathula oru nalla mudivu edukanamnu than inga vanthen

Karthik remains silent..

Meesai:raji padra kastatha ennala paarka mudiyala mappillai...ava vazha vendiya ponnu..aana atha pathi thuli koda kavala padama iruka...

Karthik looked at meesai..

Meesai:enna mappilai paarkareenga...naan solrathu serithana..avaloda kalyana vazhkaiya avale thedikitta...aana athu seriya amaiyalai...neenga rendu perum kandipa eppadiyavathu sernthuuveenganu naanum oru varusham kuduthu paarthen...aana kaalam aaga aaga ,ungalukulla virisal than vanthukittu iruku seratha vida...enaku yaaru mela thappunu solla theriyalai...oruthar valanchu koduthathan kudumbam nadatha mudiyum..aana athu unga rendu pertayum suthama illlai...

Karthik contained his silence..

Meesai:naan ungala kutham sollalai maapillai...rendu perum kaathalichu kalyanam pannikitavanga...aana ippa antha kathal..suthama azhinchu pochu unga rendu perukum naduvula...vivagarathala ungalukulla ulla uravu murinchu poiduma?...aana paartha neenga rendu perum oru mudivoduthan irukara maathiri iruku...

Karthik:mama...

Meesai:irunga maapillai..naan pesi mudichuren..rajiku aduthu naan nalathu seiyanumnu ninaikaren..avaluku innum vazhakai iruku...athanala naan avaluku innoru kalayanam panni vaikalamnu iruken...

Karthik was shell shocked to hear this statement form meesai...He couldnt believe his eyes..he didnt even expect this from meesai,whom loved him the most...

Meesai:kamal thambita atha pathithan pesikittu irunthen..athanala konjam seekarama divorce vaangi kodutha nalathu thambi...

Karthik:enna mama enna thambi nu koopidreenga theedernu??

Meeasai:inime appadithana thambi koopidanum...uravu murai vechu koopidra kaalathalam naam kadanthu vanthutom ippa...athan konjam neram munnadi varaikum ungala mappilainu aasaiya koopitukiten...

It seemed like karthik going to burst into tears...

Karthik:mama...enna neenga..

Meesai:illai thambi...inime neeyum enna mamanu koopida venam... pothum...ellam mudinchu pochu...ennaku ethaavthu neenga seiyanumnu niancheengana,divorcea evalavu seekaram mudiyumo,avalavu seekaram vaangi koduthurunga...appathan rajiku adutha naan nalathu seiya mudiyum..

Karthik coudnt spoke any words..

Meesai:appa naan kilambaren,thambi...

Meesai moved from there without even waiting for K's reply as his heart was broken into pieces on seeing K's face..

Karthik stood like a statue after this convo..he even dono how to react ..suddenly,his phone buzzed which helped him to come back into his senses.

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In KR home..


Raji walked into the house n placed her handbag on the table..Karthik was sitting in the sofa,whose face was reddish due to his extreme anger...Raji noticed his presence,but she didnt react to that..she proceed towards the steps..

K:raji...oru nimisham...unta konjam pesanum

Raji:illai K,nalaiku pesalame...enaku ippa romba tireda iruku

Karthik:enaku ippave pesi aanum

R(stares at k):seri...sollu..enna vishayam?

Karthik:unakum,kamalkum koodiya seekaram kalayanam nadaka pothame..

Raji:enna olara?

Karthik:naan olaralai...ellathayum un appan kitta ketuittu than varen..

Raji:appava?...inimu officeku vanthara?...enta sollave illaiye..

Karthik:ennadi nadikara...unaku theriyama eppadi irukum?

Raji:illa,k,enaku sathiyaam theiryathu..

Karthik:enna itha namba solraya?..neeye un vayala sonnava thana kamala kalyanam pannipenu..appuram enna.

Raji:karthik...pls..

Karthik:enna unmaiya sonna nenju kurukurukutha?...

Raji:karthik...nee romba pesara..enaku oru vishayamum theriyathu...enna nambu..

Karthik:kamalthan venumna,appuram endi enna love panna..enna ippadi paithiyam aakina?

Raji:unakulam ennala bathil solla mudiyaathu...po..

Raji was about to leave..karthik grabbed her hand n tightened his grip..

Raji:karthik...enna panra...enna vidu..enaku vazhikuthu..

Karthik:vazhikutha??...enakuthandi vazhilam unna ninachu...enna intha nilamaiku kondu vanthavale nee thana..

Raji:pls ..enna vidu..

Karthik:appa othuko...kamalaoda unaku kalayanam nadaka poratha..

Raji atlast bursts out as she cant bear the pain..

Raji:aama..athu unmaithan pothuma...

Karthik:che...unaku itha solla asingama illai...(he loosend his grip)

Raji:illai..asingama illai...

Karthik:che...unna poi love pannen paaru...enna sollanum..nee ippadi pattavanu therinchu iruntha unna sataiye panniruka maaten..

Raji:karthik...unaku enna prachaani...naan kamala kalyanam pannikitta...un velaiya mattum paaru...seriya...

Karthik:appa ethukudi enna love panna?

Raji:athan naan panna thappulaye periya thappu...

Karthik:oho..romba santhosam...oru mudivodatha irukeenga pola ellorum...nadathunga nalla nadathunga...

Raji:seri en kaiya vidu...naan maadiku ponum

Karthik:ethukudi maadiku pora..orediya enna vittu poira vendiyathuthana..

Raji began to sob..

Karthik:unnoda irukara ovaravu nimishamum enaku naraga vedhanaithan...aana unna vida naragam koda nalla irukumpola...po ...engayavathu poi tholai...en kan muundai nikatha...po...

Having said,karthik moved to his room...Raji was trembled on hearing his harsh words...weeping hardly,she ran to her room..

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Time 10.00 pm..In karthik's room...


K:thimiru pidichava...entaye evalavu thairiyama solra naan kamala kalyanam pannipenu...po ...panniko...enaku enna vanthathu...aana enna maarilam avan iruka maatan un loosuthanalam poruthukittu...nyabagam vechuko...ellathayum moonu peru plan pannitu...inga vanthu nadikarathu...cha..


After some mins...

K:hmm...oruvela rajiku theriyama koda meesai panniruparo...ava sonnathu unmaiya irukumo...naanthan avasarapatteno...

Karthik come out of his room n looked around the hall...

K:ava roomla irupalo?...poi paarthuruvom...

Karthik reached her room...he knocked the door,but door moves slowly..

K:enna ithu...kathava thiranthu iruku...ulla irukala?...

Karthik goes inside her room...but traji was missing...he searched the every nook n corner of the house...but there was no trace of raji..his bp was increasing swiftly..he was sweating profusely...

K:enga ponna iva...aalaye kanome...oruvela vasala irupalo?

But the result was negative...

K:enga ponna iva...vasa kathavu vera thiranthuruku...mani vera ivalavu aairuchu...velilalam new year celebrationsa irukum...thaniya vera poirukale...aiyoo...naan thappu pannitene...en manasula ninachatha avalta appave solliruntha ivalavu thooram vanthurukathe..en ego vala ippadi aairuche...enga poirupa ...erkanave sucide attemptlam pannavalache iva...athanala appadi ethaavthu panna...aiyoo..ninachu koda paarka mudiyalaye..ellam ennala vanthathu...naan avala appadi pesiruka kudathu...kadavule ippa enna panrathu...enaku bayama iruke...


K lost in her thoughts...after a min,he took his bike key n rushed outside..he searched raji in all places..but he cant see her...time is now..11.00 pm..all people r ready to welcome the new year...he was driving...driving...his eyes craved for her...time is now 11.45pm..


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In marina beach..

K:engayum aala kanome avala...enga poirupa...ethuvum thappana mudiva eduthura kudathe...cha...naan koduramanavan...ippadiya kathalichu kalyanam pannavalta pesarathu...ennai ariyama ippadi kotitene vaarthaigala...aiyoo evalavu kasta patrupa ava...thappu pannitaye karthik...thappu pannitaye...

He reprimanded himself for his idiotic bahaviour...he sat in seashore with his head,hanging down...his salt tears r rooling down his cheeks..

K:ellorum enna vittu poitaanga...neeyum poidratha raji...enna manichudu raji...enaku nee venum..raji...

near to him,he heard some crying sound of a girl...while turning to hs right side...his eyes beamed with delight...he felt like flying in the sky...there stood raji,with her face burrying in her hands..karthik ran to her n stood besides her..he blamed himself for this...slowly,he touched her arm n called RAJI..


Raji lifted her head n shocked to see her karthik ,there..

Raji:karthikkk...neeya?

Karthik:aama raji...naanethan...enna ithu..en ippadi panna?

Raji(cries):vera enna panna solra..naan solratha nee namba marukara...en moonchiya paarka pidikala,engayavathu ponu sollita..appuram naan anga irunthu enna panrathu..unaku than kastam ennala...

Immedialtely,karthik hugged her tightly without letting raji to utter any other word...raji too hugged him back,as he needs this more,now...

K:enna manichuru,raji...naan oru iraka millathavan...athan intha alavuku unna kasta paduthiten..

R:...

K:ennaku theriyum...unnala enna manika mudiyaathunu...nan avalavu torture panniruken unna daily..athuvum ippa divorce varaikum kondu vanthuten...sathiayama naanlam manushane illai..aana nee enaku innoru chance kudupaya raji?

R:karthik...ithukagathan naan ovuvaru naalum kaathukittu iruthnen...unna vittu ennala eppadi piriya mudiyum,enaku divorcelam ishtame illai...aana nee ennaoda kasta pada venamnuthan ippadi senchen..

K:enaku theriyum raji...un kanneere sollidume un manasula ullatha dhinamum...

K started to weep..

R:karthik...azhatha karthik...ennala nee azhuratha paarka mudiyalai..

K:illa raji...ennala unna ippadi paarka mudiyalai..athan azhugaiya varuthu...ennala en parents ponnanga...athuve daily enna vaati vathaikuthu...ithukumela naan unna illaka virumbala...entha tharunathulayum...

R:naanum unna vittu inime poga maaten...enaku nee illama oru vazhakiaye illai...

K:sorry raji...naan unna romba kayapaduthiten vaarthaiyala...athuvum kamaloda kalyanamnu sonnathala..

R:enaku theriyum...nee athukuthan enta kova padrenu..aana unaku ennala imsainu thonichu...athan kilambi vanthuten...naan oreadiya ponna...

K:raji...pls...appadilam sollatha..nee poita...naan enna panrathu...nee inga poratha irunthalum,ennayum sernthu kootitu po..unna vittu inime ennala oru nimisham koda piricnhu iruka mudiyathu...

R joy knew no bounds...she buried her head in his chest n left the happy tears..

K:Raji..My Wife...I LOVE U...I WILL LOVE U ,FOREVER..

At the same time,clock shows 12.00 am...The sky was decorated with many sparklers...its a eye treat to watch...KR got seperated from their hug enjoyed that sight..


K:hey raji...ilu sollumpothu new year piranthuruku...sema timingla...

R:aama k,intha varudam namaku santhosam nirainthatha amaiyanum..

K:kandipa amayum raji...yei..nee ilu solave illai. Enta..

R:haha...ILU,My Dear Husband..

K:me too di..unna inime naan ekachakama love panna poren...paarthukite iru..

R:rombathan..

K:seri un kaiya kodu...polam..

R:mudiyathu

K:appadiya ...appana seri...

Kartik lifted her softly...

R:yei...k,enna panra...ellorum paarka poranga...

K:paarkatume...made for each other nu award vaangiyachu...aduthu best couple award vaangalame..

R blushes...

R:seri...enna iraki vidu...naan nadanthu varen..

K:mudiyaathu...

R:nee iruka paaru...pasathayum ser,kovathayum seri...rendayume romba kaamikara...

K:aamala..appa inime kovathula romba va kuraichukittu,pasathula kootikaren atha...enna solra?

R:double ok...

K:raji..inime naan unna nalla paarthupen,unna eppayum santhosama vechurupen..ithuthan en new yr resolution...

R:appadiya?..itha naan nambalama?

K:kandipa namabala,...ippa nee paarkarathu unnoda KARTIK a

R smiles broadly..

K:yei...raji naama sandaila nee olunga saapidama irunthurupeye..

R:aama...unaku athu theriyuma?

K:theriyuma enna...dailythana paarkarene...aana ennana appadiyethana iruka...konjam koda weight lose aana maathiriye theiryala..

R:karthik...

Raji beats him in his chest..

K:raji...raji..adikathadi...sonna kellu..un adiye vera ennala sumaka mudiyathu..solliten..

K laughs..

R:po karthik...

K face got  delighted on seeing his Love..

K:ILU so much di,my kovilpati veeralaxmi...

R:ILU too my murattukalai...


Karthik hits her forehead with his n they too enjoyed that moment happily with their smiling faces...Undoubtedly,This New Year would  going to  bring more n more happiness in KR life..






Edited by shiningstar77 - 01 January 2015 at 11:56am

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Shiny loved it to the core...
Ennaku messai yaa pidikala...AngryAngry

Idayae madiri sonaa episode laa..andha messai aa poi adikkanum..So kamal reaction idhukku enaa nnu kamichirukalam..Innoru OS eludhungaa pesaama


Edited by AnithaRam32 - 30 December 2014 at 6:57am

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 6:52am | IP Logged
first class bro
superbbb
semmma dialogs
adada ipdi nadandha epdi iruku
summa sola koodathu semmaya irundhuchu new year spl update
ilu and newyr timing dhool
semma bro
lovd ds os...
k r kaanum nu thavichathu thaan enoda favvv part 
superb bro
i hate meesai lolWink
inoru os ku me waitingu

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AnithaRam32

Shiny loved it to the core...
Ennaku messai yaa pidikala...AngryAngry

Idayae madiri sonaa episode laa..andha messai aa poi adikkanum..So kamal reaction idhukku enaa nnu kamichirukalam..Innoru OS eludhungaa pesaama

Thanks ani sis...Embarrassed

ada sis...tension aagatheenga...seriyaLOL...


Edited by shiningstar77 - 01 January 2015 at 11:57am

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 7:17am | IP Logged
Awesome update Shiny.
Want it as a New year episode in serial pa , nadakuma Disapprove
Hats off Shiny .What a writing skill you have . Each and every word you use shows your determination to change the current situation of KR . You move the story according to our wish. Thank so much bro. Really appreciate your effort pa.
Shiny can it be part 2 for this OS . KR have to question Kamal & Meesai about the arrangement without their consent. Pls bro.

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Hey... super OS...

semmaiya irukku OS.. superb story,...

adhuvum closely related to new year... asathureengha.. timing aana OS...

Ungala madiri ellam indha director think panna maataru...

thanks for the new year treat...

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Bro bro  wow superb os ClapClapClap this is a  advance gift for next  year. 
I WISH YOU A HAPPY NEW YEAR Party

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Wow Lovely update bro... Thanks...

Karthik ku enna kovam ippdi varathai kottitan paavam raji ana rajiya kannum na odanae kathik thudichi poyitan... Raji nalla vella thappana mudivu edhuvum edukala... KR convo fantastic rendu perum manasu vittu pesitanga... Karthik indha resolution ne kandippa kadai pidikanum...

Indha new year KR ku sandhoshama arambikkudhu life long ippdiyae sandhohama irukkatum...

Once again thanks bro... Serial la KR parthu parthu veruthu pochu indha new year ku avanga serala atleast unga OS la avangala serthu vecitingalae adhu varikkum sandhosham...


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