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A Rat's tale- SS (A fun story of Manik and Nandini)-Part 3 updated (Page 8)

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 8seetha

Awesome ending
U are good writer
Hope u will start a new story
Anyway very good Hug

Thanks Seetha... Hug

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 5:43pm | IP Logged
Mr. Cheesebuster's tail...Hmm, sorry, tale was very funny...ROFL I have laugh so much while reading this...Mr. Cheesebuste ke saath kia tragedy hui hai...Bechara...He lost half of his SeXy tail...Poor guy...

Oh, why, oh why Monster Manik and his lady love did this to him...Their not-so-Love story has cost him his own love life...Ahh, Mr. Cheesebuster...Ouch lol


I didn't know you were a writer, aur woh bhi a Phanny writer...But that was AwEsOmE...Thanks for the PM...Hug

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 5:57pm | IP Logged
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Hey Di :D
Finally back to comment LOL
A little sad when I found out it's the last part, but it's okay.  An end is inevitable :P

Handsome, sexy rat.

I was imagining this everytime Mr. Cheesebuster talks btw.  Just thought you should visualize it from my pov too ;) hahaa

Smart rat though.  Padhaaku GeekLOL  The descriptions you have given are so epic.
Honestly I loved reading the first bit so much for that reason
It was hilarious!! 

Coming to Manik-Nandini; un dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta *facepalms*
Definitely doesn't get "juicer" than this, to quote Mr. Cheesebuster Wink

Awwh, can't believe seeing them like this made him tear up.  so cuuutee LOL
But he should know our Monster Manik and Mini-Monster Nandini aren't the normal couple
lmao
Bichaara xD
Behosh ho gaya, and bichaare ki zindagi kharaab ho gayi
Khair, at least he didn't die
That would have actually been sad 

SUCH a cuteee part LOL
So hilarious!
Loved it <3

Manan ki fights mein bhi maza aaya.  Although iss baar someone else suffered cause of the fights ROFL

Anyway, can't wait till you write something else
:D
Will be waiting

Lots of love,
Hinal Hug


Edited by basket_101 - 05 January 2015 at 12:43am

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by A.Hajnal

Mr. Cheesebuster's tail...Hmm, sorry, tale was very funny...ROFL I have laugh so much while reading this...Mr. Cheesebuste ke saath kia tragedy hui hai...Bechara...He lost half of his SeXy tail...Poor guy...
Oh, why, oh why Monster Manik and his lady love did this to him...Their not-so-Love story has cost him his own love life...Ahh, Mr. Cheesebuster...Ouch lol


I didn't know you were a writer, aur woh bhi a Phanny writer...But that was AwEsOmE...Thanks for the PM...Hug


Thanks sweety...Hug

Because that is what they do, Monster and mini-monster! They forget the world when they are together, tho rat kya cheese hai!!! LOL Poor Mr. Cheesebuster...

I usually write serious stuff. But this was change of pace for me.
Glad you enjoyed it...

Love
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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by basket_101

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Okies... update soon..I am waiting... Big smile

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 11:39am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by A.Hajnal

Mr. Cheesebuster's tail...Hmm, sorry, tale was very funny...ROFL I have laugh so much while reading this...Mr. Cheesebuste ke saath kia tragedy hui hai...Bechara...He lost half of his SeXy tail...Poor guy...
Oh, why, oh why Monster Manik and his lady love did this to him...Their not-so-Love story has cost him his own love life...Ahh, Mr. Cheesebuster...Ouch lol


I didn't know you were a writer, aur woh bhi a Phanny writer...But that was AwEsOmE...Thanks for the PM...Hug


Thanks sweety...Hug

Because that is what they do, Monster and mini-monster! They forget the world when they are together, tho rat kya cheese hai!!! LOL Poor Mr. Cheesebuster...

I usually write serious stuff. But this was change of pace for me.
Glad you enjoyed it...

Love
MD

Haha, if I get to read awesome stuff like these, Anytime...Hug

Haha...SO, so true...They forget EVERYTHING and Everyone when they are together, or around each other...

Oh, then I going to find everything you wrote and read it...!!! Big smile lol

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 7:54pm | IP Logged
Hi Hinal dear...
Thanks for this...Hug

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Originally posted by basket_101

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Hey Di :D
Finally back to comment LOL
A little sad when I found out it's the last part, but it's okay.  An end is inevitable :P

--Yes...I will miss Mr. Cheesbuster

Handsome, sexy rat.

I was imagining this everytime Mr. Cheesebuster talks btw.  Just thought you should visualize it from my pov too ;) hahaa

--Awww...sooo cuuute...Now I am feeling sad for the end!!!! Cry

Smart rat though.  Padhaaku GeekLOL  The descriptions you have given are so epic.
Honestly I loved reading the first bit so much for that reason
It was hilarious!! 

---Thanks...Hug

Coming to Manik-Nandini; un dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta *facepalms*
Definitely doesn't get "juicer" than this, to quote Mr. Cheesebuster Wink

--Yeah.. always fight each other and forget the world, perfect tom and jerry. I enjoyed writing the scenes...I would imagine them, laugh first and write...Big smile 

Awwh, can't believe seeing them like this made him tear up.  so cuuutee LOL
But he should know our Monster Manik and Mini-Monster Nandini aren't the normal couple
lmao
Bichaara xD
Behosh ho gaya, and bichaare ki zindagi kharaab ho gayi
Khair, at least he didn't die
That would have actually been sad 

--Yeah...he may find his ratess one of these days. I wanted to cut off his entire tail..but that would be too much of dark humour...so thoda sa hi kiya...I just love dark humour... Big smile

SUCH a cuteee part LOL
So hilarious!
Loved it <3

Manan ki fights mein bhi maza aaya.  Although iss baar someone else suffered cause of the fights ROFL

Anyway, can't wait till you write something else
:D
Will be waiting

Thanks sweety...Embarrassed

Lots of love,
Hinal Hug

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