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A Rat's tale- SS (A fun story of Manik and Nandini)-Part 3 updated (Page 7)

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 8:19am | IP Logged
awsomeClap
thanks for the pm...Smile
it was really amazing...loved it...Smile

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sauju

So cute... Day Dreaming
Manik u should not do this to a rat... Angry
I will file a complain on u... ROFL
How cute it was
Keep writing this kind of stories

Yeah.. poor rat!! Big smile

Thanks for liking my story.

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ireena7

nice ending dear Embarrassed
but sad that this was the end of a rat tale Unhappy
but happy that I don't have to read the word 'rat' now LOL as I hate rat u know Embarrassed
but your writing is really nice...love to read your post...
keep writing Hug

Thanks Ireena... Hug
Pakka a different animal next time!!! Big smile

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 8:22am | IP Logged
lovely update
loved it
very nicely written

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 8:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by apardh_ba

No sir cheesebuster I cn never make fun of u. u r d one who is so civilized and these two who only pretends they r d ones I m laughing at r8 nw.
"Where is the cheese popcorn
when I need them."
trust me I m also thinking d sm only.
I m sad what a tragic end u hv given to sir cheesebuster's tail. He lost his love too. Ah! I really feel bad for u sir. All d best for ur nxt session with d couns.
And I'l always remember this tale of a rats oops sir cheesebuster's tail.
And monster and his mini monster u guys seriously kahin bhi shuru ho jate ho. u guys didnt even realize dat u were standing in sm1 else house. Bt I forgive u and yeah so cutely manik kissed om her nose. I want a scene like this in d show.

Yeah right? Poor Cheesebuster..no cheese popcorn. no ratess and no tail too... 
But his tail had to go for this tale to end... Kya kare...but he is in good place now. Who knows he might get to meet another ratess??? 

Thanks a lot for this comment. Hug

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aavani

awsomeClap
thanks for the pm...Smile
it was really amazing...loved it...Smile

Thanks Aavani... Big smile

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 8:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Humzy

lovely update
loved it
very nicely written


Thanks Humzy... Smile

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Awesome ending
U are good writer
Hope u will start a new story
Anyway very good Hug

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