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A Rat's tale- SS (A fun story of Manik and Nandini)-Part 3 updated

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 3:49am | IP Logged
Hi Guys,
So here is a take on Nandini's fear of rats.Check out  Manik's and Nanidni's love through the eyes of a Rat. Yes you heard it right. Big smile

Please let me know how you like it. Comments/Criticism all welcome. Smile

Here is the first part. Please let me know you need me to send PM for the next updates. 

A Rat's Tale- Part 1

Hello homo sapiens.. I am Mr. Rat Cheesebuster . You must be wondering what I am doing here and why am I even talking to you. But let me tell you, after going through a horrifying experience, everything else seems normal. I am yet to recover from the trauma. My counsellor (yes, we do have counsellors, how do you think we survive in your world?) suggested that I share my experience with other rats, but I thought why not share it with you as a reminder as to how cruel your species can be.

It all happened last week. When this incident happened, I was in SPACE academy's storage room. Why, you may ask. Because that is where my home is you idiots. There I was minding my own business, dreaming about that blue cheese I saw in that French place where I went for dinner last night.

Suddenly I was rudely interrupted from my drooling session by one of the female variety of your own species. I could hear her talking to some people outside the store room.

"Manik, you guys just wait there only. I will quickly get the sitar from inside. I will be back in a sec" said this lady, while entering into my house. Hello...no manners at all. You knock and ask permission before you enter someone's house. Anyhow, there she was, uninvited guest, invading my space. She was searching for some Sitar, creating havoc.

I could not stand any more. I had to take control of the situation and went into the battle headlong. I went in front of her and asked her to leave immediately and that she is unwelcome here. She looked at me and I looked at her. She blinked once, twice and I blinked once, twice.

Then she let out a wail which shook the whole building. "Lady.. please calm down. No need for this. You just leave and it will all be over. Please, my ears..miss...are you even listening. Stop screaming and my name is not Manik, you must have been confused. How many times do you have to take that name. Hello..hello???"

I tried to make her understand that I am no criminal, that she is behaving like this. I am a gentle-rat. And when will she stop saying "Manik...Manik".

"Manik, help me!!!..." She started screaming with higher decibel. She looks so tiny for your species, but let me tell you, man, she has mind numbing voice.

All I heard next was this monstrous voice calling "Nandini...what happened? Wait I am coming there!!". I could understand that this woman's name is Nandini and she calling someone called Manik. She has called freaking cavalry...shame on her. Here I was fighting my own battles and she is calling her bodyguard. Not fair. 

End of PART 1

Love

MD

Index:

Part 2 - Page 3

LAST PART - Page 6

My previous works:

TS - Kaash Aisa Koi Manzar Hota



Edited by Muggle_Diaries - 03 January 2015 at 2:30am

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 3:52am | IP Logged
awsm start
loved it
something different
continue soon

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 4:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Humzy

awsm start
loved it
something different
continue soon

Thanks Humzy...Smile

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Arre isse rat mile tho mein ghar mein chuhe paal lu

It is so cute...aur my babies are couple right...continue soon
Pls...pls...pls Big smile

Edited by sauju - 30 December 2014 at 4:28am

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 4:29am | IP Logged
On this earth the thing I hate the most it's rat..ewww...I don't know I am afraid of it or not..but it's irritate me.Wacko..even if I see a pic of rat in any book I don't even touch that book...Silly
anyways...your OS is nice...we get to see the story of Manan from a rat sense LOL I loved it actually...
and your writing is really nice...keep it up Clap

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 4:38am | IP Logged
seriously frm where u got this idea. Its wonderful. ROFL. do cont this. update soon. keep writing Thumbs Up

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Smileawsome idea ...i liked it a lot...
part 1 was superbbb...please continue soon...

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 8:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sauju

Arre isse rat mile tho mein ghar mein chuhe paal lu

It is so cute...aur my babies are couple right...continue soon
Pls...pls...pls Big smile

Thanks Sauju..Smile



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