π‘Originally posted by: Anaya13Resies!!!
π‘Originally posted by: Anaya13Resies!!!
Originally posted by: swetiiiwow...
just awsum...
loved it...
especially thier dance...
jalal also feels for jo...
& the last part was too good...
jalal is really protective & bestie types...
he saved her...
cant wait for more...
plz update sooon
dont take too much time...
Originally posted by: cute.manasiwow amazing update aishuπ³ Manasi!! what's up?π€ but u shuldn't hv ended it here , kyu?π anyways loved the way jalal protected her from those bas***ds & the hug...π thenkew!π
hope now things will move in positive pace for them...π erm! yeah!! I hope this too!π
Originally posted by: ISHIKArocksAwesome update π & thanks 4 the pm.. π
Originally posted by: shahbhaviniHi my cutie pie Aishu..dii!!! what's up?π€. How are U my dear.mast...aap batao!π.. I just saw your pm and felt so excited..sachi!?. I will soon read it and comment it... but just wanted to say Hi to you...ππ€aww...that means a lot!!π€
Originally posted by: geeta.MAwsm aishu.. It lovely update..π how are you geeta!!π€
She is looking pretty.. But just better for jalalπ>>yeah! true!πMost loved part is their dance..moving their steps according to the changing music and our Jo enjoyed it thoroughly.. Damn his phone call disturbed our Jo. >dirty phoneπAww she got two titles one for well dressed and for beautiful smile.πJalal is possessive and caring for his jo.. yeah!! finally a possessive oneπDavinπ‘ moron...How dare he to misbehave with his Jo.. drunkard!π‘I cant see by bubbly jo crying π.He felt somewhere he was responsible..Last part their first hug.. I really loved it. me too liked itπThanks for this lovely update dearπ€.. It is worth after waiting for long. gawd!! felt so great after reading this lineπβ€οΈ.thanks for the pm... And update soon... This time don't keep us waiting for long...update as soon as possible.π I will try thisπ
Originally posted by: -Stubborn-I unresed on previous page. :)
Originally posted by: merehannice update
loved it
Originally posted by: savindi.dbawesome chapter dr. thenkew!π€.tks for the pm..plzz update soon and don't take much time to update ok..pakka!! I will try my best to update ASAP update soon ur other ff too unpredictable? haan pakkaπ.eagerly waiting for the next chapter..update soon dr. erm! kay!.π
Originally posted by: swetiiibut u didnt do fair by qritung in jodha's pov...
we didnt get to know about jalal...
what was he really feeling
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