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*Not just a passionate affair TS* Argh! Not my AUDI, Jodha! Ud 18/01 (Page 96)

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 8:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SindhuMenon

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Writer-e-khaas, what a beautiful two-shot Hug. I have been crazy busy at work ... But finally made it with my take 10 ... Actually take 15 with interest. I will admit Part 2 might be my favorite chapter of all ...maybe second only to Jalal's marathon one. Clap

So, here goes my take:

Part 1

(1) The sweet nervousness and possessiveness owner of Audi ... Who obviously is more concerned about the driver next to him than the actual the car. How sweet when Jodha called him in his Mr. Pareshan avataar! Smile
(2) A ziddi Jodha ... Trying to re-build her confidence and become her old self ... With the pride of having picked up early steps in learning to drive 
(3) A tactful Jodha ... Hitting Jalal's soft spot of emotion that she had just recovered to convince him to let her drive more Wink
(4) And then destiny strikes ... The accident happens ... Loved the sound effects here. and particularly this parallel structure of their emotions ... Almost the same but not quite. LOL

"SHE was too alarmed. Aghast. Distressed. And panicky.
HE was too alarmed. Aghast. Displeased. And angry."

(5) The first kind of new fight ... With Jalal being totally silent and not outwardly fighting ... His "Angry young man" avataar as you called it in Part 2. I loved Jodha's efforts to set it all right and her conviction to do so which came to fruition in part 2. 

P.S. and of course the Singhs are very cute as they support Jalal LOL

Part 2

(6) A newly turned poet ... How cute that Jalal wanted to make amends via poetry and eagerly returning home ... Embarrassed

(7) A moment of shock when he finds his car missing and assumes the worst. Shocked

(8) What a pleasant surprise to see the very Jodha waiting for him in a composed in manner ... He must have realized how nice it would be to have Jodha waiting for him like that in everyday when he decided to propose to her ... One of the many triggers Embarrassed

(9) I loved so many little moments in part 2 that I am going to bunch it up all here:
- The nervousness Jodha was trying to conceal on how her efforts would pay off LOL
- Jalal's hidden admiration for what Jodha did to restore his carEmbarrassed
- Jodha's jealousy over Jalal's admiration for the "piece of work" ... Only to realize it was her ... And who can forget the wolf whistle? Wink
- The inflection point where Jodha proclaims ... That Jodha Singh is irreplaceable in his life and something hits Jalal Embarrassed
- The fake kidnapping Wink

see, a mini-take 5 in a take 10 ... I loved the little moments so much I could not pick and choose! 

(10) And of course, a beautiful surprise for all of us ... We were as surprised as Jodha with the marriage proposal. It was just beautiful! And what a nice detail that he told the family before and a celebration dinner was also awaiting them. That is one of the things that sets this jodi apart- they have taken their families along in this journey so beautifully. EmbarrassedClap

As always , thanks so much for such a beautiful chapter! Hope we get to be part of many more chapters of this epic love story. 

Take care dear! Hug



beautifully Said Divya. Totally agree with you...Good to hear from you..

Thanks so much! Glad you liked it Embarrassed

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 8:37pm | IP Logged
beautiful update...
jalal is so romantic!!!
he wrote poems for his Jo nd then proposed her in the best possible way...
loved the update...
sorry for being late...

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 8:46pm | IP Logged
Divya again excellent take 10 as usual. Clap


Deeps lovely comment dear. and the definition of AUDIThumbs Up is class.

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 8:57pm | IP Logged
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ChellamHug
Chellam to you too  
Hug

What you've done... Such a package of surprises you gave usEmbarrassed I'm so touched, speechless  and still cherishing their momentsDay Dreaming
Awww thank you sooo much 
Hug

I can't simply pick and highlight anything here. 'coz I loved each and every word of this updateDay DreamingDay Dreaming and craving for moreCry
Nooo not done!!!! Sleepy You gave similar line past update too.. Cry 
>>>Similar lineShocked
Shocked Liar! you awarded the last comment i wrote as the best-est comment ever. LOL you forgot?Shocked
"Shraddha is irreplaceable in ours life, isn't she?" Embarrassed Love you just as much, my chellamBig smile
Hee hee... sach???Blushing
Still... I'm not going to be swayed by your last line Geek
>>>Still upset with me? Shocked Well... if an angry shrads sounds this delightful, I don't mind my
shrads staying angry forever!BlushingEmbarrassed

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 9:05pm | IP Logged
@divya,
Just loved your take 10.
And reading your post after so many days ,made me feel like a family member is back at home after a long time.

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kalgi22

Divya again excellent take 10 as usual. Clap


Deeps lovely comment dear. and the definition of AUDIThumbs Up is class.


Thanks so much! How are you dear? Hug

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rashmi81

@divya,
Just loved your take 10.
And reading your post after so many days ,made me feel like a family member is back at home after a long time.


Awww thanks so much Rashmi.

Yes, we are all family ... no matter how much of a break we take Hug

How are you doing?

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by divyavm

Originally posted by Rashmi81

@divya,
Just loved your take 10.
And reading your post after so many days ,made me feel like a family member is back at home after a long time.


Awww thanks so much Rashmi.

Yes, we are all family ... no matter how much of a break we take Hug

How are you doing?
I am fine dear.
Miss our  chats and specially you and your chitti's discussions.Hug

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