Hayeee... it was just so so so awesome! Her 'please please please let me drive...' was just soo cute...
she loves him... knows he loves her... and like a typical girlfriend, took advantage of her boyfriend here... But first of all, and the MOST important of it all! A biggie hug to My Jalal, Jodha and of course the writer-e-khaas Lashy didu! Lashy di you rock! you rock you rock you rock!!! Hee hee thanks... but so much of outpour of love... I'm going to float
A NJAPA Two Shot! Before Marriage!!!!! A NJAPA TWO SHOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NJAPA, NJAPA, NJAPA...!
Arre I had said in so many replies and threads that I'd write one shots and two shots if and when time permits on the couple!
I mean, when I got your pm I was like-- 'Are you serious??? Lashy di has started writing Njapa One Shots! I mean I was like- Is she kidding me??? My heart was beating so fast when I got your pm... Ayooo your thrilling lead-up till you read it made for such a lovely read by itself and after reading the second part teaser I laughed out so loud... 'SHE DROVE it?All the way to BANGALORE???' Oh god Jalal... I can actually imagine our Mr. Principled fretting and saying this... besides, the way he explained to Shantamma what a car looks like,with his hands and all... 'the silver vehicle that was parked here, the big thing I used to drive..' Uff Jalal He is a darling, na? Wish I would have been there...
And now, I would, with great pleasure come to part one!
First of all... the way you played around with words- choosing what was just purrrfect to describe our Jodha and her 'impulsive urges' and Boyfriend with his 'HAVE to cave in look'
Aww.. that guy. he never allowed anyone else than Balaji to drive his car.. and when it came to HIS Girl, he couldn't even say no..
Nope he couldn't say NO to her though he knew he shouldn't be saying YES..
his firm no transformed into a reluctant 'yes'.. Poor guy.. The car was one of his most cherished possession, and it was so badly damaged...
Damn! I wish I'd thought of that phrase that you'd used to describe the transition
But then.. what's done couldn't be done naa.. Instead of worrying over what she'd done, our Jo wisely chose to make things better...
What touched me was that how she'd gently rejected her papa's suggestion of breaking his FDs- that she would never learn that one reckless action could cost her all of her Holi Diwali savings.. how heart touching.. This girl... she's making me go crazy for her, as if I was any less already! Awww yesss she picked up the pieces bravely and decided to march on from where she'd left...
In short... this was indeed the BEST TS I've read! Part because it was a NJAPA TS, which had enhanced its beauty.. but that was a small part.. a big part was because it provided glimpse into my Jo-Ja's life.. three years of their blissful relationship... My my! What a tantalizing journey it had been naa!
From I-Pad Man, he became her LIFE.. and the journey, is the best thing that could ever happen to someone! I'm damn sure that after reading NJAPA, if any girl or boy would want anything- then it would only be one thing- to have a partner as perfect as Jalal or Jodha.. and have a journey as magical as NJAPA..
That's why I say- NJAPA is the best story I've ever read, for it really is... I love you Lashy di.. pleeej post the second part soon- I wouldn't expect anything, because whatever I expect in NJAPA, it always turns out to be better than my expectation!.. so you wouldn't expect anything? I love you soo much Lashy di! Take care, of yourself and Junior Lashy too.. You are our utmost priority.. love you moreee