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ArHi FF: Koi Aap Sa #2 - Chapter 22 : Page 142 (Apr 25) (Page 36)

drunkiiebabe IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 5:11pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
Loved it <333
Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 5:18pm | IP Logged

good update.. nice that they are coming closer.. hope Aman and Anjali fall in love soon..

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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 8:16pm | IP Logged
that was lovely update...
littlemissstar Goldie
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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 8:47pm | IP Logged
Awesome..
Loved it..
Can show a little of their jogging LOL ..I know they r walking ..still thoda cheating is allowed..
Waiting fr part two:):)
maina95131 Senior Member
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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
Great story...I wonder what secret both are keeping 

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Posted: 07 February 2015 at 12:05am | IP Logged
Such a nice story..
From detailing to making the image of the characters in the story, it's a fantastic job done.
In love with the lovely couple though I'm eagerly waiting for their first kissie! Embarrassed
Aman is an awesome brother and when I'm imagining the handsome you have put in the picture as Aman, I'm in love with him too because I already love him. 
Wedding gift was indeed purrfectto!
Did I thank you for gifting us some really long chapters, Not yet? Shocked
I really enjoyed it till now, waiting for part 2 of the recent chapter.
All the Best and lots of Love 

shelley_45 Senior Member
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Posted: 07 February 2015 at 12:57am | IP Logged
Absolutely blissful
DMGFan-2b-not2b IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 07 February 2015 at 1:51am | IP Logged
Lovely update, but I always feel Arnav is making a lot more effort and putting in a lot more into this relationship than Khushi is. 



Khushi is still being Khushi Kumari Gupta, the daring girl of her parents, expecting things to work out in the direction and in the manner that she wants.



Arnav has been the most wonderful person so far, figuring things important to her, easing the potential confrontation between her mother and her, giving and respecting her space in the marriage, taking things slow with her, letting her dictate the pace of her adjustment to her.



I love the way you are developing their relationship, though clearly I am rooting for Arnav for him being the ideal man here!



Love the pace of the story itself though not the pace of the updates. I know you have other stories, but am going to be very honest. Given that the pace of the story itself is slow (which is perfectly fine , i love the pace and the way their relationship is developing), the updates need to be slightly better paced to retain the connect with the story.


I find i have to go back and read the earlier chapter for me to feel any connect with the story, otherwise comments will tend to be short and basic, def not in-depth and will tend to get restricted to awesome updates, lovely update, loved it, superb, fantastic update,  like the way arnav is treating her, like the pace etc... 


Of course you would be perfectly within your rights to tell me to buzz off and not bother to read Smile but since I am reading it and I love the story, just thought it made sense  to give you feedback. aadat se major Embarrassed


Shall wait for the next update!


Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 07 February 2015 at 7:08am

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