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MG FF: Shayad Yehi To Pyaar Hai...(updated part 14/pg 75/sep 6) (Page 5)

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 11:17am | IP Logged
awesome cs! Lovely interesting update! Maan is angry! Dadi n Maan talk! Maan gng 2 marry Nimisha! feeling 4 Geet! she is suffering so much! wen will maaneet meet? update soon. pls try n pm! Thanks

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 1:03am | IP Logged
Nice cs

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very nice part

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eagerly waiting 4 next

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Plz update soon

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Posted: 14 January 2015 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Hello  friends!  I  have  introduced  two  more  characters,  Adi  and  Ramesh.  I  will  add  him  in  the  C.S.
Aditya  (Adi):  Maan's  chief  accountant.  He  is  the  most  efficient  and  trusted  employee  of  Maan.  He  respects  Maan  a  lot  and  can  do  anything  for  him.  He  is  like  a  family  member  to  Maan  and  his  family.

Ramesh:  Khurana's  driver

                       SHAYAD  YEHI  TO  PYAAR  HAI...

                                                    PART-2

Next  morning  too  Khurana  mansion  is  in  a  hustle-bustle  as  Dadima  wants  every  function  in  a  royal  style.  She  wants  the  people  to  remember  this  wedding  till  their  last  breath,  and  why  not  after  all  its  Maan  Singh  Khurana's  wedding,  the  most  eligible  bachelor.  Maan  is  descending  the  stairs  ready  to  go  to  his  office,  Khurana  Constructions.  He  got  surprised  to  see  Adi  there.  Maan  thought,  "What  is  Adi  doing  here...He  is  supposed  to  be  in  office  at  this  time".  Adi  was  talking  to  Dadima  but  when  he  sees  Maan ,  he  at  once  shut  his  mouth.  He  gulped  his  saliva  seeing  Maan's  sharp  stare  at  him.  He  frighteningly  murmured  to  Dadima,  "Da..Da..Dadima  Mm..Maaan  Sir  mujhe  aise  kyu  dekh  rahe  hai  jaise  hhh...he  is  going  to  kill  me...Aaa..Aapne  unhe  nahi  bataya  kya  ki  aapne  mujhe  yaha  bulaya  hai".  Dadima  rolled  her  eyes  and  murmured  to  herself,  "Ye  Maan  bhi  na,  logo  ko  darana  to  inka  shauk  ban  gaya  hai",  then  to  Adi,  "Don't  worry  Adi,  Maan  aapko  kuch  nahi  kahege,  hum  unse  abhi  baat  kar  lege".  Maan  came  to  them  and  asked  sternly,  "Adi  what  are  you  doing  here?".  Dadima  says,  "Maan  Adi  ko  humne  bulaya  hai,  hume  Adi  ki  help  chahiye  arrangements  ke  liye  to  aap  kuch  dino  ke  liye  Aadi  ko  chhuti  de  dijiye".  Maan  looked  at  Dadima  and  thought  that  it  is  going  to  be  good  in  some  way  because  if  Adi  is  there  then  Dadima  is  not  going  to  pester  him  for  these  wedding  arrangements  and  Adi  would  handle  everything.  He  agreed,  "Thik  hai  Dadima.  Mai  chalta  hu".  Dadima  stopped  him,  "Maan  aaj  aap  jaldi  ghar  aa  jana,  hume  sham  ko  aapke  or  Nimisha  outfits  selection  ke  liye  jana  hai".  Maan  is  not  interested  even  a  bit,  for  him  his  business  meetings  are  more  pleasurable  than  these  things.  Maan  responded,  "Dadima  I  won't  be  able  to  come,  I  have  an  important  meeting  in  evening  and  after  that  I  have  another  dinner  meeting.  And  Dadima  Adi  is  there  with  you,  he  will  handle  everything",  he  looked  at  Adi  meaningfully  and  says  to  him,  "Right  Adi".  Adi  got  his  unsaid  words  and  responded  with  his  sweet  smile,  "Yy...yes  Sir.  I  will  take  care  of  everything".  And  Maan  rushed  to  his  office.  Adi  is  working  with  Maan  since  the  time  when  Maan  took  charge  of  Khurana  Constructions.  After  taking  charge  of  Khurana  Constructions,  the  first  employee  hired  by  Maan  was  Adi.  In  a  very  short  span  of  time  Maan  realized  his  potential  and  honesty,  and  since  then  Adi  is  his  most  trusted  employee,  or  in  other  words,  he  is  like  a  family  member  to  him.  Adi,  also,  is  very  well  aware  of  Maan's  likings  and  dislikings.  And  he  knows  that  Maan  hates  shopping.

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All  day  Dadima  and  Adi  were  busy  in  doing  the  planning  and  all.  In  the  evening  they  reached  to  the  mall  where  Nimisha  was  waiting  for  them.  She  directly  came  there  as  she  had  some  shoots  in  the  daytime.  Nimisha  saw  Dadima  and  Adi  only,  she  became  very  sad.  She  thought  Maan  would  come  and  she  could  spend  some  time  with  him  alone.  She  wants  Maan  to  roam  behind  her,  to  drool  on  her,  like  other  men  do.  Nimisha  touched  Dadima's  feet  and  asked,  "Dadima  Maan  nahi  aaye  aapke  sath?".  Dadima  says,  "Sorry  beta,  wo  aana  to  chahte  the  par  unki  aaj  ek  bahut  important  meeting  schedule  ho  gai  to  wo  nahi  aa  paye...(cheerfully)  but  you  don't  be  upset  as  we  have  more  important  work  at  hand,  ab  hume  aapke  kapdo  ke  saath-saath  Maan  ke  kapde  bhi  decide  karne  hoge...and  beta  kya  hua  agar  wo  aaj  nahi  aaye,  shaadi  ke  baad  to  unhe  aapke  saath  hi  ghumna  hai".  Nimisha  smiled  and  thought  inwardly,  "Wo  to  Maan  ko  ghumna  hi  padega.  Shaadi  ke  baad  me  Maan  ko  apna  deewana  bana  dugi  because  I  like  everything  perfect.  I  have  everything  beauty,  class,  a  rich  and  handsome  fianc  but  one  thing  is  still  lacking  and  that  is  Maan's  attention.  After  all  who  doesn't  want  the  attention  of  such  a  rich  and  hot  man...".

They  shopped  the  dresses  and  jewelleries.  Nimisha  chose  everything  expensive.  She  was  shopping  extravagantly.  Even  Dadima  gave  no  heed  to  that  as  she  also  wants  everything  best  for  her  grandson  and  grand  daughter-in-law.  Their  shopping  took  three  hours.  Dadima  says  to  Nimisha,  "Beta  hum  aapko  drop  kar  dege",  but  Nimisha  refused,  "Dadima  koi  baat  nahi  mai  chali  jaogi.  Actually  meri  friend  ka  birthday  hai  to  mujhe  uske  ghar  jana  hai,  to  mai  yaha  se  directly  wahi  jaogi.  And  aap  chinta  mat  kariye  driver  hai  mere  saath".  She  doesn't  want  to  go  with  them  as  she  has  to  go  to  club  from  there  with  her  friends  which  includes  boys  too  but  she  couldn't  tell  this  to  Dadima.  Dadima  agreed  and  they  left.

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It  is  night  and  Dadima  and  Adi  are  heading  for  home  in  the  car.  Suddenly  the  driver  put  brakes  with  a  screeching  sound.  Dadima  says  to  driver  Ramesh,  "Ramesh  kya  hua?".  Ramesh  responded  with  a  scared  face,  "Mam  wo  achanak  se  ek  ladki  saamne  aa  gai...".  Adi  and  Dadima  got  shocked.  They  at  once  get  down  and  moved  to  see  the  girl,  Ramesh  too  came  out  to  see.  Adi  and  Dadima  see  a  girl  lying  down  on  the  road  unconscious  and  blood  coming  out  from  her  feet.  Ramesh  was  horrified  to  see  that  and  says,  "Mam  sach  me  mene  ise  takkar  nahi  mari.  Maine  to  brakes  laga  diye  the,  ye  khud  hi  behosh  hui  hai...".  Adi  says  to  Dadima,  "Dadima  hume  ise  hpspital  le  jana  hoga",  Dadima  agreed  and  Ramesh  and  Adi  took  her  to  car  and  they  reached  to  hospital.

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Edited by dreamymishti88 - 14 January 2015 at 1:48pm

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