Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

MG FF: Shayad Yehi To Pyaar Hai...(updated part 14/pg 75/sep 6) (Page 12)

khwaishfan IF-Addictz

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Posted: 05 February 2015 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 da pm! Read n commented already! update soon

fantesy IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 February 2015 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
nice concept .. geet is so innocent and sweet ... oh poor girl was  tortured  so much .. now living in khurana mansion but never met maan ... maan met with accident ... thx for pm .. loved it 
dreamymishti88 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
From  this  part  I  will  write  Geet's  name  Mishti,  very  soon  she  will  get  her  name  'Geet'  back.


One  day  Dadima  and  Rano  were  discussing  about  the  menu  in  the  hall.  Mishti  too  was  sitting  with  them  and  was  silently  having  her  tea.  Then  the  phone  rang,  it  was  from  an  unknown  number,  Dadima  took  it,  "Hello  Savitri  Khurana  speaking",  the  other  side,  "Hello  Mrs.  Khurana  aap  jaldi  se  ABC  hospital  aa  jaiye,  Mr.  Maan  Singh  Khurana  ka  accident  ho  gaya  hai...",  the  phone  slipped  from  Dadima's  hand,  she  was  paralyzed  at  her  place;  it  felt  like  the  earth  slipped  from  her  feet.  Rano  and  Mishti  came  to  her  and  was  scared  seeing  Dadima.  Rano  asked  petrified,  "Maaji  kya  hua...kiska  phone  tha?".  Tears  rolled  down  from  Dadima's  eyes  and  she  looked  at  Rano,  "Rano  Maan  ka  accident  ho  gaya  or  wo  ABC  hospital  me  hai".  Rano  and  Mishti  were  shocked,  Rano  said  with  chocked  voice,  "Maaji  aap  ghabraiye  mat,  kuch  nahi  hoga  hamare  Maan  ko.  Hume  jaldi  se  hospital  chalna  hoga".

Trio  reached  hospital  and  on  the  way  Rano  informed  Adi  so  he  was  also  there.  They  all  went  to  the  doctor  who  called  them.  He  took  them  to  Maan's  ward.  Doctors  were  operating  him.  Dadima  felt  like  a  death  blow  seeing  his  grandson  in  such  a  condition.  She  shook  from  within  and  swooned.  Rano  and  Mishti  held  her  and  took  her  out.  They  took  her  to  another  room  and  laid  her  down  on  bed.  Mishti  said  with  tears,  "Dadima  Maanji  ko  kuch  nahi  hoga",  Dadima  looked  at  her  with  her  helpless  and  teary  eyes,  "Agar  hamare  Maan  ko  kuch  hua  to  hum  jee  nahi  payege",  Rano  said,  "Nahi  Maaji  kuch  nahi  hoga  hamare  Maan  ko".  Adi  came  to  them  after  talking  to  doctor,  Dadima  saw  him  and  asked  in  urgency,  "Adi  kya  kaha  doctor  ne,  hamare  Maan  thik  to  ho  jayege  na...boliye  Adi",  Adi  down  casted  his  eyes  and  a  paper  was  in  his  hand,  Dadima  got  more  petrified  on  his  silence  and  shook  him,  "Adi  humne  poochha  Maan  kaise  hai...kya  kaha  doctor  ne?".  Adi  gave  the  paper  to  Dadima  and  spoke  with  chocked  voice,  "Da...Dadima  doctor  ne  kaha  hai  ki  Maan  sir  ka  urgently  operation  karna  padega,  isliye  in  papers  par  aapke  sign  chahiye".  Dadima  got  numb,  it  was  a  dreadful  situation  for  her.  She  took  the  papers  with  shivering  hands  and  signed  them.  Adi  gave  the  papers  back  to  the  doctor  and  doctors  started  the  operation. 

Three  hours  passed.  Dadima,  Mishti,  Rano  and  Adi  were  outside  the  OT  waiting  for  it  to  open.  After  a  long  wait,  the  doctors  came  out  and  they  all  rushed  and  gathered  around  the  doctor.  Dadima  spoke  in  urgency,  "Doctor  Maan  kaise  hai  ab?",  the  doctor  replied,  "Mrs.  Khurana,  he  is  out  of  danger  now.  But  we  have  to  keep  him  under  observation.  Hume  darr  hai  ki  unki  forehead  ki  chot  ki  wajah  se  unki  eyes  par  koi  effect  na  hua  ho.  Hume  unke  hosh  me  aane  ka  intezaar  karna  hoga".  Everyone  was  rooted  to  the  spot,  Dadima  held  Rano  for  support.  Rano  said  with  chocked  voice,  "Maaji  aap  chinta  mat  kijiye,  Maan  bilkul  thik  ho  jayege".  Then  the  doctor  said,  "Mrs.  Khurana,  we  are  doing  our  best.  We  will  do  every  possible  thing,  aap  aise  tension  legi  to  aapka  BP  shoot  up  ho  sakta  hai",  he  turned  to  Adi,  "Aap  inhe  yaha  se  le  jaiye,  inke  liye  itna  stress  thik  nahi  hai".  Dadima  interrupted  and  tears  were  rolling  on  her  cheeks,  "Nahi  hum  Maan  ko  chhod  kar  kahi  nahi  jayege,  jab  tak  unhe  hosh  nahi  aa  jata  tab  tak  hum  yehi  rahege",  to  which  Mishti  uttered  "Dadima  aap  chinta  mat  kijiye  mai  Maan  ji  ke  paas  hu,  aap  Rano  ma  ke  saath  ghar  jakar  thoda  aaram  kar  lijiye",  Adi  too  spoke,  "Ji  Dadima  aise  aapki  tabiyat  or  jyada  kharab  ho  jayegi,  mai  hu  yaha  Mishti  ke  saath.  Maan  Sir  ke  hosh  me  aate  hi  mai  aapko  inform  kar  duga".  Rano  too  tried  to  convince  her  and  Dadima  agreed.  Dadima  and  Rano  went  home  and  Mishti  and  Adi  were  with  Maan.

It  was  morning,  Mishti  was  with  Maan  and  a  nurse  was  also  there  with  her.  Adi  went  to  freshen  up.  Mishti  didn't  sleep  the  whole  night,  she  too  was  very  worried  for  Maan.  Dadima  gave  her  a  new  life  and  she  couldn't  see  her  and  her  family  suffering.  She  was  sitting  on  the  couch  looking  at  Maan,  the  nurse  was  sitting  on  the  other  couch  and  was  sleeping.  Mishti  was  just  looking  at  Maan  and  she  didn't  know  when  she  came  near  him,  she  looked  at  his  hand  which  was  lying  on  the  bed  unmoved.  She  had  an  urge  to  touch  his  hand  and  she  touched  his  palm  with  her  fingers.  She  was  very  softly  caressing  his  palm  and  a  moment  later  she  found  his  fingers  moving.  She  was  surprised  and  she  looked  at  his  face  and  then  she  felt  her  fingers  clasped,  she  turned  her  gaze  and  saw  her  hand  in  Maan's  hand.  Mishti  at  once  called  the  nurse  and  she  woke  up  and  came  near  Maan.  He  was  getting  his  conscious  back  and  nurse  immediately  went  to  call  the  doctor.  Doctor  came  and  Adi  too  arrived,  they  went  near  Maan  and  found  him  groaning  in  pain  and  was  clutching  Mishti's  hand.  The  doctor  asked  her  to  move  away  and  Mishti  took  off  her  hand  from  Maan's  grip  and  moved  away.  She  felt  an  emptiness  when  she  was  taking  her  hand  off.  The  doctor  checked  him  and  gave  him  a  pain  killer  shot  and  he  again  drifted  to  sleep.  The  doctor  asked  the  nurse  to  call  other  doctors  as  well.  Doctor  said  to  Adi  "Mr.  Khurana  ko  around  do  ghante  me  hosh  aa  jayega  tab  hum  unki  aakho  ki  patti  kholege".      


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Edited by dreamymishti88 - 06 February 2015 at 12:18pm

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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
Nice part..Maan going to see first misty..I hope Maan eyes is fine..
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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Sad Update

Its always a devasting time when the only family member is in hospital
Daadima as a strong person but cannot hold herself together as its
easily to stress and its her only grand child in hospital .
Geet touching Maan and he too at the same time awakes

khwaishfan IF-Addictz

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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
lovely emotional update! Well written! Dadi shocked n tells Rano! They rush to the hospital! Mishty/Geet goes with them! Geet assures n comforts Dadi. the operation is taking place! The doctor advises them! Geet tells them to go n she stays with Maan! she is worried abt him! Geet feels some connection 2 Maan! Maan feels her touch! Geet feels bereft when the doctor separates their hands! Maan will awaken in 2 hrs! hope his eyesight is fine! update soon!
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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
Nice update dear... the emotions between rano dadi and mishti are truly magical... geet is feeling for maan jus with a single touch and maan reacted to her... waiting for more...
vrinda22 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
maans fiance is going 2 run away hearing maans accident
mishty is going to take care of him
n he is going 2 fall in love with her
nice parts

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