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The Christmas Chronicles - Have Yourself A Merry Little Christmas (Page 3)

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
Awesome and lovely 
Thanks for pm 

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
Okay, first of all, BEAUTIFUL COMPILATION TAMARA AND FARZ!
Heartmelting, really. :)

A Christmas story! On AsYa.. after such a long time! A treat indeed!

Loved everything about the story! From the part where Asad spots Zoya in front of the store, taking in the New York aura to the part where Zoya reads Asad's simple yet honest note.

The unconscious staring, the not-meant-to-be-said-aloud compliments, the snuggling, the talk, the watching-Zoya-sleep part (although a little creepy, but its AsYa!), the Asad carrying Zoya part, the carriage driver calling them love birds and Asad kissing Zoya's nose! EVERYTHING!

Okay... seems like I just summarised the OS. But you get what I'm implying, don't you?! Good!

My favourite part, undoubtedly, was this -

"I think I've finally found you your ride home, Zoya" he smiled, looking into her eyes that suddenly seemed somber.

"So eager to get rid of me...?" she asked softly, looking at him intently.

Asad was surprised at what she'd said. He felt the total opposite. In fact, he didn't want to let go of her at all.

He shook his head slowly. "On the contrary, Ms Farooqui... I've never been so un-eager to get rid of anyone before" he confessed sweetly, making her smile.

So honest. These lines mirror their feelings :)

You two make an amazing duo! :D
Keep writing more! Will be eagerly waiting for the next one!

PS - Dawg, I think I could recognise your lines. Hope imma ain't no wrong! :P

PPS - Liked it? LOVED IT! GAAAHHH!


Edited by Zanutix - 29 December 2014 at 10:38pm

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
It was lovely and hearwarming, Tamara and Farz. Kudos to both of you.
And the ride back home, so romantic.
An Asad not stuck for words ...
A Zoya saying sorry ...
Both openly staring at each other ...

A  story with beautiful start, lovely middle and an amazing ending, I mean beginning...


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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
OMG that was sooo cute loved it 
thanx 4 the pm
Big smile
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Awesome + Cute Os...Thumbs Up

Just Love It...Smile

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...Clap

Update Next Os Soon...Big smile
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Aww... It was so adorable
BY THE WAY when t u gonna update ur AsYa FF?
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
Hiii Tamara...m a new reader of yours...n a fan of your writing too...
U r just simply amazing..

N this one is just mind blowing.. Refreshing the beautiful asya memories..
Loved it ...best Christmas gift...super..

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