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Hi farz! I am back.
Hey tamara! This is toshita here.😃
I just read both the oneshots and I am glad farz sent me the notification because I feel I have got new favourites to follow; terrific writers.
The first story was extremely well written and phrased and it has been long since I have come across an eye catching story. Although the background plot is somewhat clichd but still there is some uniqueness which binds the readers. I loved that " tourists.." And "oh my.. You have dimples just like mine!" This was unpredictable you see.
Then I scrolled down and what followed looked like a teaser, you said that somewhere in your note.
You know there are some oneshots where you just keep on reading and there are some where you smile and frown, scroll back, read and smile again. This oneshot fell into the latter category. I noticed the email IDs and the difference you wanted to show of their career aspects, that was something laudable. In the end, I loved " I was ten! You are gross!".😆
Thank you for bearing this lofty and lengthy comment. I didn't intend to write this much as always but it was worth for.
Keep writing and notifications please?
P.s. I forgot half of the comments I think, still. Pretend I already told you. 😆
Happy new year to you both.🤗
Bye and take care.
Xoxo
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