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Abhigya SS - Vulnerable - PART 7 UPDATED May1st Pg16 (Page 8)

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Posted: 05 February 2015 at 7:08am | IP Logged
Nice

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Posted: 05 February 2015 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Thank you, Rani!!!!  That was lovely  Clap!!!!   Loved the way you related their inner thoughts and feelings!!!  

Most of all, I loved this "not a saint" Abhi  LOL!!!!

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Posted: 05 February 2015 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Loved it.. Plz update soon... 
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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kubare

Yeah Rani  you updated...
After you got me to read "Unlocked by Courtney Milan " again...LOLLOLLOL


Wow..wow..wow...

Loved it..loved the emotions that you described so beautifully his and hers...

Aww...naturally he's not a saint and I see she does not want to be one too..Good...

Loved it and can't  wait to see where you them and us...next...


Aww thanks Krish! Glad you liked the emotional componenet of it.
Originally posted by deefan

loved it Rani!!! Enjoyed reading it so much..

I could picture Abhi saying Untie me..quick n straight to the point LOL

Thank you Dee! Yes, Abhigya are trying to get to the point now LOL
Originally posted by simsim25

Loved it Rani! Fab work! Loved reading it, why did you leave it there? Do continue soon because this is utterly amazing!

Thanks Simsim! I left it there because I'm evilWinkEvil Smile
Originally posted by sam78

Excellent update. Please con't soon.

Thanks Sam!
Originally posted by rbb1

great update beautifully written

Thanks Ray! Big smile
Originally posted by sudanindia2014

Suddenly he felt hot tears cascade down his face.You did this to her. He ached to hold her, to protect her, but he only had his lips. He rained kisses on her face, trying to catch each droplet, but they were falling too fast. A kiss on her eyelid. I'm sorry. One on her left cheek. I'm sorry. Another on her nose. I'm sorry.

Rani ..If you wrote nothing but these lines it will still made my day ..what a romantic moment.. so full of love tender regret and many many other oh so beautiful emotions ...I can write a whole page to count the emotions in this moment only ..so so amazing 
the " untie me "  is shivering inducer and a trigger for an unlimited imaginations..so brilliant to stop here as a writer but for me as a reader I can not tell you how I feel right now.. If I can I will jump right into your head and read the rest ..please please update soon Smile   

Aww thank you Nuha! It means so much to me that you liked the emotional aspect of it. Embarrassed That particular passage is a favourite of mine too. And that "untie me" was put in to satisfy my evil impulses.Evil Smile Thank you so, so much for reading and commenting! Big smile
Originally posted by frenzyy

Nice

Thanks Frenzzy!
Originally posted by indi

Thank you, Rani!!!!  That was lovely  Clap!!!!   Loved the way you related their inner thoughts and feelings!!!   

Most of all, I loved this "not a saint" Abhi  LOL!!!! 


Thank you Indi!  I see that "not a saint" Abhi has a lot of fans LOL
Originally posted by bhanu_frn

Loved it.. Plz update soon... 

Thank you Bhanu! Will try Big smile

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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 9:17am | IP Logged
Wow!! Rani amazing!! both are so vulnerable ATM! I loved how you wrote AbhiGya here! So impactful!!
Good job Rani!! Love love loved reading this!! Can't wait to see what happens when Pragya unites him! Update soon!!! 


Lots of love to you!! Heart
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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 10:52am | IP Logged
Its too good...awesome...You should update soon...!!
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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 11:01am | IP Logged
wow awesome, really hot
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Posted: 07 February 2015 at 8:53am | IP Logged
Wow.. Seriously the story is amazing.. Bang on.. Loved Pragya and Abhi's characters.. The changes are amazing.. And I am do happy to see her moving on.. :)
The kiss was beautifully written... Seriously I felt so good reading it..
Looking forward to the next part.. :)

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