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Abhigya SS - Vulnerable - PART 7 UPDATED May1st Pg16 (Page 5)

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Posted: 14 January 2015 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
wow awesome and hot ...I love it ...It's very amazing chapter  I can't wait to read more from you... pls update soon 

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Posted: 14 January 2015 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -mina-

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oooh i had no idea where it would go with that "no", and i'm so glad you took it where you did!

another gorgeous update rani. i like that you're foregrounding the power imbalance between them - that you have abhi acknowledging and feeling bad about it. and i am sooo beyond happy that this pragya is as she is. hope to continue seeing her deciding to go for everything, on her own terms!

thank you for this amazing story - and for not leaving abhi where poor evan was left all night...i mean i know abhi might still get just such a punishment but at least there was the kiss first :P

i have to say i am much much more into the symbolism of the dupattas than the mountain climbing ropes ;)

basically what i'm saying is you've more than made the inspiration into your own thing and i love it and i feel so privileged (i know that sounds hyperbolic but i stand by my word choice :P) to be reading this treatment of this couple. great work and keep at it. and i'm always happy to help :)

ps write on the train anyway...tell your cousin to read a book or something :D

Thank you Mina! Big smileI've always been uncomfortable by the power imbalance between them so I wanted to fix it ... in the smuttiest way possible LOLEmbarrassed As for Abhi's punishment...let's see how angry I get after watching today's episode. Ouch Evan got a kiss in the story too, but that was one he took before being tied up, whereas Abhi's is thrust upon him. 

I'm really glad you liked the symbolism of the dupattas - I was wondering whether to bring that in or the bathtub bit (analogous to the pressure cooker scene) but I really didn't think Pragya would self-harm so dupattas it was. 

Thank you so much for your detailed comment and also for the bump WinkLOL

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Posted: 14 January 2015 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
the forum is scarily busy right now, sorry the bump had no effect. Confused

i had hoped you'd take on the bathub thing but i agree with you about self harm. and it's a concept to keep in reserve for future exploration perhaps!! Wink

i like how you've sculpted this story so far. it doesn't need an analogue to the bathtub thing. Big smile

and i much prefer abhi being forced to receive a kiss vs elaine having to LOL

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Posted: 14 January 2015 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
Loved the update!! Can't wait for more!! <333333
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Posted: 14 January 2015 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
Really nice update can't wait to read the next part
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Posted: 15 January 2015 at 1:01am | IP Logged
Rani Rani Rani! Loved it! Awesome as always! Vulnerable Abhi! Pragya in control! Can't wait for the next update coz I am dying to know how this would progress. 
Thank you for the PM Rani! Big smile Lots of love! 
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Posted: 15 January 2015 at 1:42am | IP Logged
Wow! What a stupendous update!!! Love Pragya 's punishment...can't wait to see what She's going to do next!
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Posted: 15 January 2015 at 1:47am | IP Logged
You should hit me..do telepathy..or go for the 'push-theory'..or even do voodoo-hoodoo..but you should sooo hit me!!! I realized I never commented on your fics..and am such an idiot!!!

This is beautiful writing...and loving the pace its progressing at..especially this last chap..!!

Keep up the good work, Rani...fantastic stuff - this :D

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