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Abhigya SS - Vulnerable - PART 7 UPDATED May1st Pg16 (Page 3)

advena Senior Member
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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
Hello!

I'm really glad you've decided to update this, and thank you for the PM! IPK is short for Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon. The Arnav Khushi version of the show, not the sorry excuse going on now in IPK2. Personally, I've come across some of the most talented authors on that particular forum, like seriously talented. Arisai, Blue Mystique, Munchy, ReyaBear most of them have left the forum for the most part but at it's peak IPK probably had the most talented fanbase I have seen for a Hindi soap. 

Which is also why the forum basically spoiled me for other forums. I tend to look for the same standard and anything less is a disappointment. On to the update, so Abhi has hunted Pragya down two months before the divorce finally comes through?

I like the open vulnerability you've managed to project through Pragya, that acknowledgement that she was a stronger person before she 'fell in love' and that she recognized the change and felt disgusted with herself because of it. Wow. Beautifully done. 

I'm hoping to see a little more clarity on Abhi's part now. What is he thinking exactly. I mean is he just here because of the deadline, or because he wanted to apologize. Or is there more, are there realizations behind his actions? Anyway, I seem to have written you an essay here LOL do continue and update soon! Also, in reference to your authors note- the best pieces of writing are always the one's with a bit of your soul in them.

Thank you again for the PM and update soon!

Edited by advena - 05 January 2015 at 1:47pm

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 7:51pm | IP Logged
awesome, Abhi wants to become putty in her hands, just love it
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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 8:06pm | IP Logged
I like that this was in Abhi's point of view and that you had Pragya stand up to him. I can't wait to see how the rest of the story unfolds.

And yeah, you can call me Rose :)
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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 12:13am | IP Logged
Puttarani! I love this one~
please please please do update soon, eagerly waiting for the next part! Dying to see abhi vulnerable before Pragya!!!
please PM when you update!~!
I LOVE your style of writing!
Much love to you!
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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 5:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by simsim25

Aww the awkwardness within them when they begin to speak and the way abhi spoke to her! Greatly explained! And and and especially loved the last line! Literally dancing for the next update which I hope will be soon because I am v v v greedy lol! Fantastic part!

Thank you simsim! Don't worry about being greedy - I am very greedy with regards your works too!Tongue
Originally posted by advena

Hello!

I'm really glad you've decided to update this, and thank you for the PM! IPK is short for Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon. The Arnav Khushi version of the show, not the sorry excuse going on now in IPK2. Personally, I've come across some of the most talented authors on that particular forum, like seriously talented. Arisai, Blue Mystique, Munchy, ReyaBear most of them have left the forum for the most part but at it's peak IPK probably had the most talented fanbase I have seen for a Hindi soap. 

Which is also why the forum basically spoiled me for other forums. I tend to look for the same standard and anything less is a disappointment. On to the update, so Abhi has hunted Pragya down two months before the divorce finally comes through?

I like the open vulnerability you've managed to project through Pragya, that acknowledgement that she was a stronger person before she 'fell in love' and that she recognized the change and felt disgusted with herself because of it. Wow. Beautifully done. 

I'm hoping to see a little more clarity on Abhi's part now. What is he thinking exactly. I mean is he just here because of the deadline, or because he wanted to apologize. Or is there more, are there realizations behind his actions? Anyway, I seem to have written you an essay here LOL do continue and update soon! Also, in reference to your authors note- the best pieces of writing are always the one's with a bit of your soul in them.

Thank you again for the PM and update soon!

Hi advena! Thanks for the IPK recs! I sometimes read FFs even if I have never even heard about the show (I actually started following YHM after reading a FF from one of my favourite KKB authors) so you've provided me with some free reading material for my next flight. Big smile

I'm so glad you liked how I portrayed Pragya. And thank you so much for pointing out that I need to be a little more clear about Abhi. I intend this to be a fic where Abhi tries to get redemption for the way he's treated Pragya but I'm finding it really difficult to make Abhi remorseful and vulnerable, and Pragya unforgiving, because in the show he is so remorseless and callous and powerful, while Pragya is ever-forgiving. Now that was a run-on sentence! Anyway, I will try to make his intentions clearer in the next part (although it's probably going to be through Pragya's POV. Thank you so much for bringing that to my attention! Always trying to improve.Big smile And now I've written an essay!LOL
Originally posted by rbb1

Nice update

Thank you!
Originally posted by adventure_gurl

awesome, Abhi wants to become putty in her hands, just love it

Yes exactly WinkLOLThank you!
Originally posted by rosetreasures

I like that this was in Abhi's point of view and that you had Pragya stand up to him. I can't wait to see how the rest of the story unfolds.

And yeah, you can call me Rose :)

Thank you Rose! It's much easier to write in Pragya's POV because my Abhi is so different from the one in the show but I am trying to stretch myself by writing him too. So I'm really glad you liked it. Big smile
Originally posted by aafrah

Puttarani! I love this one~
please please please do update soon, eagerly waiting for the next part! Dying to see abhi vulnerable before Pragya!!!
please PM when you update!~!
I LOVE your style of writing!
Much love to you!

Thank you aafrah! Means a lot coming from one of the few forum authors who manages to make me teary-eyed with her words! 

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
awesome

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 9:41pm | IP Logged
Awesome updates. Thank you.
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Posted: 09 January 2015 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Wow Rani!!! I am so glad that bhootni possessed you today!!! 

1. Coz It led me here to this amazing, wonderful, awesome second part of Endings!!

2.coz I know with  bhootni at work you are most likely to update soon!!! Wink

Seriously Rani awesome story! Loved it! Waiting to see how you would proceed from this point. And I love your Abhi and Pragya!! The way you write is simply wow! No other word comes to my mind right now!

So glad that I got to read this! Thank you for the link! And plz do PM me when you update! Tongue

Heart to you! 

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