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Abhigya SS - Vulnerable - PART 7 UPDATED May1st Pg16 (Page 17)

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Posted: 01 May 2015 at 1:53am | IP Logged
Beautifully written... loved the update

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Posted: 01 May 2015 at 3:53am | IP Logged
Awww ! I sooo did not want this to end... I think you should carry on! Lol amazingly written - absolutely loved the intimate scene between Abhi and Pragya - it was beautiful. So
Full of emotion and passion!! Absolutely love your writing style as well! Xx
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Posted: 01 May 2015 at 4:09pm | IP Logged
Nice update lets hope things get better for them
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Posted: 05 May 2015 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -mina-

grasshopper watch this space

rani

rani do i have to use words

rani i don't want to use words

why can't i just nonverbally subliminally telepathically somehow convey to you my response

because you know what you did, and what you do?! you create these feelings which bypass words. and then what am i supposed to do? how am i supposed to tell you what you achieved with words when it doesn't occur in words?

raniii

flailing

now then. i know you put some effort into crafting this so maybe i should try not to be some kind of limbic reptile and also put some effort into articulating. the problem with words though is that they don't catch the...ephemeral snores of one's response. you know.

OK. i really enjoyed the scene of abhi returning to arora house. loved the three different receptions he received. lightly sketched but we get a clear sense of the three strong and distinct personalities of sarla rodaadi and bb.

all this 'his wife'ing happening in abhi's mind full out slayed me. how am i talking? i am slain. idk must be vocalizing from the underworld.

the puja, and the richness it brings within the story to the characters and to the text and readers...i feel there is a richness, i wish i could explain better. basically i feel so happy to read a scene built around that.

his fingers itching with the kumkum. UFFF.

and him fading into the background?!!! i do not approve abhi!!! i do not approve!!!

it was really good to get abhi's voice here, thank you for choosing to do the chapter (an entirely appropriate word madam) from his perspective. i am wishing to know what's up with pragya but with this story both their sides are so compelling i can't really choose who i want to hear from XD

in conclusion, thanks for the update!!

Aww Minaji!! Hug Okay firstly you should ALWAYS use words because you create magic and make me laugh unsuitably loud for dorm quiet hours when you do. LOLOuch 

Ephemeral snores! Limbic reptile! ROFL Now I want a drabble where Pragya insults him for his limbic-reptilianness! 

LOL hehehe still giggling asI read this over. Glad you liked the puja scene Big smile Next we'll get to hear from Pragya

Thank you Minaji!! Big smileBig smileMade my day after a week of being MAD with KKB 

And DW Abhi will of course slide into Pragya's life and thoughts again very soon


Edited by putturani - 05 May 2015 at 12:25am

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Posted: 05 May 2015 at 12:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Nimmy-

res!

Res! WinkOuch
Originally posted by Fanaah

Res

Phir se res!
Originally posted by Fanaah

res2

Phir se phir se res! LOL

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Posted: 05 May 2015 at 12:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by simsim25

Thanks for the update Rani! Awesome work once again. Especially the last line - 
Better leave them alone than get tangled into gratitude that he didn't deserve.

Thank you Simi! Glad you thought the finish was strong Big smile
Originally posted by Asma-

Im glad you posted it :)
It was fabulous Rani 

Thank you Asma! Big smile
Originally posted by nilmi

Beautifully written... loved the update

Thank you Nilmi! Smile
Originally posted by x-Ri-Ri-x

Awww ! I sooo did not want this to end... I think you should carry on! Lol amazingly written - absolutely loved the intimate scene between Abhi and Pragya - it was beautiful. So
Full of emotion and passion!! Absolutely love your writing style as well! Xx

Thank you so much RiRi! Big smile Means a lot to hear it from a writer I really like. Don't worry though, this isn't close to ending at all! Keep your eyes peeled for the next part! 
Originally posted by rbb1

Nice update lets hope things get better for them

Thanks Ray! Big smile Keep reading! 

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Posted: 05 May 2015 at 2:22am | IP Logged
Nice update.
Atlast abhigya joined together.
Rani pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 05 May 2015 at 2:55am | IP Logged
Thank you for this beautiful update... this is definitely one of my fav stories Clap

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