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Abhigya SS - Vulnerable - PART 7 UPDATED May1st Pg16 (Page 10)

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Posted: 23 February 2015 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
Res...
Gonna hate me for posting so many res'es, but I'm determined to reply to all the chapters and saving the spot will be a good reminder! Embarrassed

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For: PART 1 - ENDINGS AND BEGINNINGS

YAY! Finally here! Dancing

And what an absolute PERFECT chapter title, Rani-sa! You always know how to start chapters with a "BANG!" and this was no different! I liked the slight glimpse at the past between Pragya's leave from MM and the current timeline.

I liked how Pragya didn't succumb to Abhi's apologies. I DO feel for him, par Pragya ko toh bohot gehra chot lagi thi, so long apology banta hai! And while I'm glad to see that this is a redemption story, I can't help but be curious about just how Abhi found-out the truth about the MMS. I'm hoping you'll be expanding on that sometime later in this story! Smile

In the mean time, I'm off to read the next part!


Edited by Preeah - 29 March 2015 at 12:20am

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For: PART 2 - MEETING

O.M.G.!!!

O___O

I was expecting the regret, sadness, loneliness, desperation, anger, hope, and a myriad of other feeling, but the, "you want me vulnerable? As you wish" just KILLED it!

HOL~Y! Shocked

I did NOT see this coming! Now I'm eager to see what Abhi does (and DAMN IT! I only vaguely remember the rest of the fic! Angry)

*runs off to read the next chapter*


Edited by Preeah - 29 March 2015 at 12:01am

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For: PART 3 - BONDED

... Well, this is ONE way for Abhi to be vulnerable. I probably should've guessed, especially with the warning you gave, but...

It felt a lot darker than I guessed it would be, probably because of Pragya's dialogue: "Of course. Of course you wouldn't voluntarily be attracted to poor little Chashmish. But your body wants it. And maybe I'll give it what it needs. Everybody already thinks I'm damaged goods. Might as well get something out of the bargain. Anyway behenjis like me wouldn't get kissed any other way" and it's implications and how it was quite similar to what Abhi said to her in the prequel. My mind-scape can clearly substitute this image over the previous one. The feelings, though, Pragya is almost relishing the power she has. While it might be helping her have power over her husband, I just hope she doesn't get overly drunk and go on a power trip because it can get really bad really fast!

One of the best lines was, "It was so ironic that even though he was being tied to a lamp bracket with his own nuptial knot, he felt freer than he had in months. As she tightened the knot around his wrist, the knot in his heart loosened with hope."

Love the semi-dark direction of the story (I'm messed-up that way). On to the next part!


Edited by Preeah - 29 March 2015 at 12:02am

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Res 4...
It is so hard to do this on the phone... Confused

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For: PART 4 - EXPLOSION

*snort* ... Well, Pragya can't be anymore clearer than she was... JE~SUS!

If it was the previous Abhi and in this situation, I have no doubt he would've been on the power-trip, but here, both are older, have been hurt by each other, regret how things happened and want to move forward, but can't because they ARE the only for the other. Their situation in the here and now necessitates this action and just...

*shrugs helplessly*

No words, Love!


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Almost there... Wish I started commenting from the beginning... Dead  SORRY!!!

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For: PART 5 - SHATTER

WOW! You shattered me with this chapter as well! The blending of their physical attraction and emotions was so beautiful and to perfection! Clap

The scene was SIZZLING, but there are softer feelings along with the roughness and just WOW!

I LOVED the part where Abhi calls her ChashmishBig smile I was all, "FINALLY OMG YAY!!!"

Blushing

I see their journey is on-going, still. I'm eager to read more so please update soon, yes?! YES?! *begging*


Edited by Preeah - 29 March 2015 at 2:05am

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Really good update beautifully written well done cannot wait to read more

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Its too hot to handle...specially in the office...awesome work...

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Wow!

That was so hot! I loved it so much!

Gonna read it again!

This is fabulous! <3

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