Abhigya SS - Vulnerable - PART 7 UPDATED May1st Pg16 - Page 13

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

Nice update.

Atlast abhigya joined together.

Rani pls pm me when u update

Originally posted by: Chirikula

Thank you for this beautiful update... this is definitely one of my fav stories 👏

Originally posted by: kubare

Rani darling awesome update...

Loved the play of emotions you showed with such subtlety...

The OTT reaction of Sarla...his slight disappointment...but knowing her modes so well...

RSD ...wise with age

BB...in your face...

Pragya the one who can handle all of them so well..or an given situation...

The hand holding...the letting go and the waiting

Loved the whole pooja bit...them easily getting in to that role of a married couple...even though they are divorced...old habits ...

And what I loved best the bit with the Kumkum...his finger itching to put it in its rightful place...

Beautiful...truly beautiful...

Originally posted by: shivanimehta

When is the next update to this awesome story?! 😳

Eagerly waiting 

Originally posted by: kdsubs

I just realized i haven't commented here yet. My apologies Rani! I have read the updates regularly though 😊.

I am loving this story and the growth you have shown in Abhi. I really like this Abhi - calmer, more mature and so much more thoughtful about Pragya. Pragya's characterization and her shift in the 6th chapter felt a tad bit rushed, but other than that, this reads like perfection. 

And i think i have already said this to you somewhere - this story is a prime example of how writers should use the act of love-making (as opposed to sex) to tell a tale. Well done.