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Posted: 01 February 2015 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Sorry every one  4 not replying to ur comments.
But really i read them all and liked them also..
and a huge thanks to all of u who liked my story.
your lovely comments means alot to me.

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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 8:57am | IP Logged
CHAPTER 11

After finishing work.it's almost 7:pm when aliya look at her monile phone it was switched off...due to battety dead.
Aliya:zain chutti ka time ho gya h.m going.by.
Zain:aesy kaisy by.
Aliya:kam ho gya na.ab kia???

She picked up her bag and start to leave when he follow her and hold her wrist and turned her towards him.when she was about to open the door.
Zain said huskily:meri salery to deti jaye madam.
Aliya:mr usman abdullah sy ly lena
Zain:agar usman abdullah k lye kam kia hota to un sy leta but yeh kam to main ny tmhary lye kia h.
Aliya:i don't have extra money k kisi ko bhi deti phirun.
Zain:no madam aap ko ghalat fehmo hui hai.main money ki bat ni kar raha.
Aliya play along as she very well knew what he's talking about.
Aliya:to aap kis ki bat kr rahy hain???.
Zain move forward and pinned her to the door.
Zain:aesy hi bata dun ya live demo dena pary ga.
Aliya gulped:n..nhn.i can't give u your salery sir.
Zain:u can madam...u can give me thousands.
Aliya's eyes wide open:thousands???
Zain laugh:yes but right now aik ho kafi hai.
Aliya look at him and then at the beautiful big round wall clock behind zain's desk:zain it's too late.m..mjhy ghar jana h.
Zain:han to main ny kab roka h.meri salery do or jao.
Aliya nervous:umm...ok..close your eyes 
.
Zain:ok.
He closed his eyes waiting for her soft lips on his face but what...aliya slowly open the door lock and run as he heard her giggle he opened his eyes and saw her walking fastly...he follwed her.he can't hold her infront of everyone he was waiting for her to go outside when he saw usman coming towards her.he too came and stand beside her.
Usman:kaam khtm.
Zain:yes dad.
Usman:aliya bety tm bhi ghar chal rahi ho na.ao main tmhn drop kr deta hun.
Aliya:nhn uncle main chali jaon gi.
Zain:han dad khud chali jay gi na.ap ko kia zaroorat h takleef uthany ki.
Usman glare at him:zain..ye meri beti jesi h.balky beti hai.
Zain shout:no...
Usman shocked:zain tmhn ho kia gya h???
Zain thinks:yeh dad bhi na main isy wife banana chahta hun or dad isy meri...no no..
Zain:i mean dad beti JESI hai to kia hua beti to ni h na.
Usman angry:zain kal holiday hai.i want you to visit one phycatrist tomorrow...lagta h tmhary sath kuch problem ho gai h.jab sy trip sy wapas ay ho...bikul...unexpected behave kar rahy ho..pata ni tmhn kia ho gya hai???
He said and leave ordering aliya to come with him.
Zain look at him with open mouth while aliya trying hard not to laugh but she could'nt as she burst out laughing.
Zain hold her hand:tmhari hansi main abhi band kar sakta hun but mjhy shadi tak wait karna pary ga.u cheater.
Aliya:what???
Zain:what what???u promisd me that u...
He cut off as he heard usman calling aliya.
Aliya take her hand from him:han main n promise kia tha but abhi promise fulfill ni kr sakti...uncle is calling me.
Zain groan:you and your uncle...
She left...

Aliya was standing beside usman as he was unlocking his car.while zain watching both of them from far...he think something then grin.and walk towards them.

Zain:dad.
Usman turn:bolo.
Zain:dad meri car ka tire puncture ho gya h.
Usman:to..driver ko bulva lo he will take another car and reapair yours.
Zain:but dad main bht thak gya hun.mjhy rest karna h.
Usman:great then driver drive kar ly ga.tm aram sy bethna .
Zain sigh and aliya chuckle.
Zain looked at her angrily.
Zain:dad main ap k sath ghar chal sakta hun.???
Usman again looked at him shocked.
Usman:zain but tm to kehty ho k main kisi sy lift ni leta..even jab sy tm ny droving seekhi hai tm kabhi kisi sy lift ni lety.
Zain:ooho dad aaj m bht thak gaya hun is lye bas.
Usman:zain mai  ny kaha na tmhn kuch ho gya h.
Zain:kuch ni hua dad.plzzz.main ap k sath ja sakta hun ya nhn.???
Usman:shauq sy ja sakty ho beta.

Zain sit at back seat as he knew aliya will also sit at back seat.as she is about to sit usman said.
Usman:aliya beta tm agy baith jao na.tm sy kuch baat bhi ho jay gi.
Zain gritted his teeth:perfect now dad is the lovely villian of my love story.
Aliya sit with usman and he start the car...
The whole journey passed zain looking at aliya in front mirror.sometime winking at her and she glare at him.
The car stops at aliya's house.it was a small town but beautiful house.
Zain knows that he can't see aliya for whold day tomorrow he want to talk to her.
He immediately said as she stepped out of car.
Zain:aliya
She turn back scaring that he will shout i love u but...
Zain:wo page no 3 par jo tm ny parahraph mark kia h...wo...aik min dad main abhi aya.
He picked up the file and walked toward her.she was little far he stepped closed to her.as she was facing usman and he was facing her house.
He said turning the pages.pretending that he is asking something.
Zain:tmhn kia laga tm bina good bye kahy chali jao gi.???
Aliya point to the page:good bye.ab jaun.
Zain:i wish k dad yahan na hoty to main tmhn proper good by kar sakta.
Aliya:zain plzzz stop saying those cheesy lines.
Zain: tm kuch karny deti nhn ho to ab kuch keh bhi nhn sakta.
Aliya:aww kitna darty ho tm mujh sy.
She said pretending reading but zain was looking at her intently.
She looked up and immediately looked down.
Aliya:zain ghorna band karo or jao.
Zain lean in and whisper taking file from her hand purposely holding her hand.
Zain:darta nhn hun apny pyar ki respect krta hun...
He took the file and turn back.he sits in the car they both wave hands to each other and the car disappear from her sight .

Precap:trouble trouble...*evil laugh*

There was another piece of my work...hope it was not boring...
Will try to update soon.




 



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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 10:05am | IP Logged
Zain bana latoo...such a despo...
Aliya is Aliya..I like that...
What I dont like is the chudaillgiri of the PRECAP...
MAMU bane KMH...really loved it...
Waiting for the next...
PLZ continue asap...

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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 10:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 786ahf_bi

Zain bana latoo...such a despo...
Aliya is Aliya..I like that...
What I dont like is the chudaillgiri of the PRECAP...
MAMU bane KMH...really loved it...
Waiting for the next...
PLZ continue asap...

Thanks habee..
ya he is...ye to kuch bhi nhn h...aagy aagy dekhye hota h kia...Wink
hahaha...i liked my chudail giri...
thanks for loving it..
will update sooner as possible.

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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 10:33am | IP Logged
amazing chapter
lol usman mamu lovely villain hehe..
Poor zain..LOL
Aww..precap omg wat trouble..?
Eagerly waiting 4 d next part
do cont soon..


Edited by Priya_arora - 03 February 2015 at 10:33am

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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Oho so sweet ...I love u man and BTW why do u disappear man ...neways continue soon

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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Wonderful update
Do continue soon :)
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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Zain is such a despo bechara and I am afraid about the precap now what will happen ? I still hope we will better understand after the next chapter continue soon hanii ! ;)

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