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zaya SS *Dil Ka Rishta*chp 24*pg-78* 18th june (Page 32)

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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
That was so cute

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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
It was beautiful...
excellent dialogues and story ...
loved the cliff hanger part 
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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
Kyun...kyun in dono love birds KE beech kaale kavve ko bitha DIYA...Cry
Itna sab hone ke baad YE nainsaafi...Cry
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Enough of my emotional drama...really amazing chapter...
Dono ne confess KAR Liya...Ek dum filmy shytle...Embarrassed
Bang on dialogues...plus I loved zain's FKU as well...
Loved it...waiting for your dhamaaka revelation...so I can understand the situation...
Continue ASAP...

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 8:31am | IP Logged
Wonderful update
Do continue soon plzz

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
such an amazing chapter
dey confessed their love
beautifully written
jst loved it
eagerly waiting 4 d next update
do cont soon :)

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Posted: 20 January 2015 at 2:04am | IP Logged
Thanks every one 4 your lovely comments..
I know i m a big torture queen but what can i do???i wanna make chage in my stories..
don't be angry on my rehaan...hehehe
Will sweap him soon from between them.

Will try to update soon.
from your chudail.
hania.

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Posted: 21 January 2015 at 8:18am | IP Logged

hellow forum wasis...since many avtive members left forum and rest of them are busy in their studies and forum is not less than grave yard.so i thougt to write for forum activity.
So here's the chapter.



CHAPTER 8

Both were hugging each other when aliya pulled away remembering what he just did.
Aliya shout:i hate u zain!!tm ny aesa q kia???agar tmhn kuch ho jata???or...agar tmhara hath...she chould'nt complete her sentence and start crying.
Zain cupped her face:aliya see m here infront of u.and i m fine even i m very very fine bcuz i got my life.
Aliya:shut up..
And start to walk to the car zain follows her and hold her hand she look back.
Aliya:choro zain mjhy tm sy bat ni karni.
Zain:relax sweetheart...m...i mean aliya.
He pull her towards him and lock her between his strong arms.
Zain smirk:agar wo sab nhn karta to ye sab kaisy hota???
Aliya looked at him confused:kia??
Zain narrowed his eyes:so u did'nt remember what u just said .
Aliya realised that the truth slip out from her toungue when she felt she lost him.
Aliya look here and there:wo...m..mjhy y...ad ni h.(she stammered)
Zain pulled her more:really???
She gasped as she felt the lenghth of his whole body...
Zain:it's ok...kehty hain k jab ap koi bat bhol jaen to ap agar wo kam dobara karen jo ap wo sochty huy kar ry thy to sab yad aa jata h l.to main wapas jata hun.or dobara sy pahar par sy kood jata hun. Ok???

He start to walk off but she shout.
Aliya:n..nhn.
Zain smirk and face her:kia yad aa gya??
Aliya close her eyes and took a long breath and when she open them frustrated only to find zain smirking at her.
Zain again hold her by her waist and ask:to bolo kia kaha tha tum ny??
Aliya:jab pata h to bar bar q puch ry ho???
Zain move closer and whisper in her ear:bar bar nhn hazar bar bolna pary ga.abhi to puri life baqi hai or tm abhi sy hi thak gai ho??
Aliya smile  and hugged him shyly.she forget all the worls as she embrace him.she whisper..
Aliya:i love u ...then she said little louder..i love u zain...then she shout out loud...I LOVE U ZAIN..
zain lift her in his arms and twirl her around he placed her feet on ground and said I LOVE U TOO..
and kissed her forehead.aliya closed her eyes...he placed his hand on her right cheek and caress it with his thumb...he was slowly leaning in and she understand what he's upto.
When he reach milimeter away she place her finger on his lips...he opened his eyes and look at her..
Zain:um..m..wo..m..s..sorry.i...should have ask u first.(embarassed)
Aliya:no zain u did'nt need to ask..
He become happy as well as confused.
Zain:to phir..tm ny mjhy q roka???
She hit him on his shoulder.
Aliya:kiun k han bus stop k samny khary hn...(she turn his face to other side)
Zain chuckled:to kia hua???bollywood movies main romantic scenes bhi to aesy hi jaga shoot hoty hn sab k samny??
Aliya:but we are not celebraties..a
Or reel or real life m bht difference hota h.
Zain:acha???kitni movies kar chuki ho??
Aliya:zain...
Zain laugh:ok ok...sorry baba.
Aliya:chalo ab warna late ho jayen gy,??
Zain:kia??abhi abhi to hmara i love u hua h.or tm jany ki bat kar ri ho???
Aliya:zain ye lovers point ni h ham pahar ki choti k kinaary khary hn.remember what u just did???
Zain:uffo..aliya i know k y lovers point ni h but ham to lovers hn na.
Aliya:zain i don't understand what u want to do???
Zain trace her face with his finger:ab itni bholi bhi mat bano aliya..abhi izhar hua h to ab piar bhi to hona chahye na.
Aliya:mr.romeo hamen wapis jana h ammi abbu mera intezar kar ry hun gy.main 1 din ka bol kar ai thi or aj dusra din h.
Zain said in childish way:mjhy tmhary sath waqt guzarna h.tm sy dhaiiirrr sari baten karni hn.
Aliya said sarcastically:zain we r already on long drive .or agly 3 4 ghanty tak main tmbary sath hi rahun gi.so plzzz...chalo.
Zain pout and sit in  car while aliya laughing at his cuteness...
Zain start driving he was looking at her dreamily.
Aliya:zain rasty par concentrate karo.
Zain:rasty par hi to concentrate kar raha hun.(..he hold her hand...)..tm hi mera rasta ho or tm hi meri manzil.
She smile at his purity.
 After sometime zain said.as he want to gain her attention.
Zain:aliya.
Aliya who was looking outside said:hmmm
Zain:mjhy pyas lagi hai.
Aliya:to??
Zain signal at water bolltle and then at staring wheel.that i can't drink bcuz i m driving.
Aliya pick up the bolltle from stand and raise it to his lips.he thought that the way he is sucking the water  will effect aliya but he got baba ji ka thullu.as aliya closed the bottle and place it again in stand.
Zain think:kuch ziada hi unromantic larki sy pyar ho gya g mjhy.
Aliya was looking at his irritated face she think:sorry zain abdullah m very good at hiding my feelings...i know why u did that.aik hath sy bhi stairing wheel pakra ja sakta h...par sach m meri saans hi ruk gai thi jab meri full attention us k lips py...or the way he was sucking it i felt he was sucking my lips...ALLAH toba...kia soch ri hun.itni jaldi nhn.

Aliya was feeling sleepy while zain was driving silently..
Aliya felt bad as she ruined his romance mode she look at him and smile he smile back.
Aliya:zain.
Zain:bolo.
Aliya:kia m tmhary kandhy par sar rakh kar so sakti hun???
Zain was happy and he said immediately:kisi bhi waqt???
Aliya slowly kept her head on his shoulder but she cant't keep it at one place.zain took his hand and place it around his waist she hold him tightly and sleep.he placed a cute small kiss of miliseconds on her head.and then look at the road and keep driving.

Phew!!!...that was my torture for u all...
I can write more but u all will be bore by my bakbak.so aaj bas itna hi...
Thanks for reading..





Edited by butterfly20 - 21 January 2015 at 8:19am

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Posted: 21 January 2015 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Very sweet chapter I am still confused with the whole rehan track but I hope they will reunite superb thank you Hani for this chapter ,waiting for the next one like a good bachaa !

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