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OS : Paakezaah - Pg 3 17/1 (Page 6)

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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 2:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mariee

Originally posted by _TheBlackRose_

Really, you had to do so much warning n all before writing it? I didn't find it in the least illogical... but yeah maybe padh padh ke mere dimag ka itna band baj gaya hai ki logic nikal hi gyi hai LOL
Loved it... No descriptive comment (sorry) coz I suck at that Dead
I hadn't heard the song earlier, thanks for introducing me to its existence LOL

actually i am a person who doesnt believe in this 2-3 day wala love...i feel that love's like some slow process & thats why i have always taken ample amount of time to portray that phase in my other works.
This is my 1st work ever wherein i have depicted the maggi noodle love ..there are some other stuffs also that i found weird in my own os ...LOLLOL Luckily u hvent found it illogical WinkWink

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Actually I don't believe in love at first sight n such either... But as I said, PCMB is addling my brain Dead observation power low ho gyi hai Tongue that's why not minding these 'usually sensitive to' topics either Dead
What I feel is that when we want to give our best, every little fault bothers us... Naturally, others don't take that much of perfectionist pov...
Don't if it applies to all though, maybe it's just me who is crazy enough to find a thousand loopholes in each update and try and explain them LOL


Edited by _TheBlackRose_ - 17 January 2015 at 2:57am

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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 3:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _TheBlackRose_

Originally posted by mariee

Originally posted by _TheBlackRose_

Really, you had to do so much warning n all before writing it? I didn't find it in the least illogical... but yeah maybe padh padh ke mere dimag ka itna band baj gaya hai ki logic nikal hi gyi hai LOL
Loved it... No descriptive comment (sorry) coz I suck at that Dead
I hadn't heard the song earlier, thanks for introducing me to its existence LOL

actually i am a person who doesnt believe in this 2-3 day wala love...i feel that love's like some slow process & thats why i have always taken ample amount of time to portray that phase in my other works.
This is my 1st work ever wherein i have depicted the maggi noodle love ..there are some other stuffs also that i found weird in my own os ...LOLLOL Luckily u hvent found it illogical WinkWink

MARUSHKAA
Actually I don't believe in love at first sight n such either... But as I said, PCMB is addling my brain Dead observation power low ho gyi hai Tongue that's why not minding these 'usually sensitive to' topics either Dead
What I feel is that when we want to give our best, every little fault bothers us... Naturally, others don't take that much of perfectionist pov...
Don't if it applies to all though, maybe it's just me who is crazy enough to find a thousand loopholes in each update and try and explain them LOL
Heehhe...its not just u ...but me as well...Wink

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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 3:24am | IP Logged
Its was like a short film 
Raghav realized his lover for her so soon n she fell in love just like that after a simple convo its kinda love that 1st sight wala love 

I love that part when "Afterall, the wild animals aren't his employees to be scared of his angry young man look"  you like Raghav more than your other characters i guess coz u enhance this character to its fullest or I feel more connected to it than any other  Wink

when junaid said about ghost for a sec i felt its true , description of that place n ur waring LOL i thought so Tongue
it was fun reading this os liked it Big smile

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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 3:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by santhisreem

Its was like a short film 
Raghav realized his lover for her so soon n she fell in love just like that after a simple convo its kinda love that 1st sight wala love 

I love that part when "Afterall, the wild animals aren't his employees to be scared of his angry young man look"  you like Raghav more than your other characters i guess coz u enhance this character to its fullest or I feel more connected to it than any other  Wink

when junaid said about ghost for a sec i felt its true , description of that place n ur waring LOL i thought so Tongue
it was fun reading this os liked it Big smile
Hahahaha santhi...u caught me well ...yet again.
Yep u have guessed it right ...Raghav was my favorite char in Ema. He had that lovely complexity in his char that kept me attracted ...& my biased love for him always makes most of my updates Raghav focused...
Then may it be RR or coincidences or my other OS (LOL ...I had to writeen 3 parts for Raghav POV in that LOL)
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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 3:33am | IP Logged
@santhisreem
Such an ajeeb person u are 
I give short updates ..u give long comments
I give long updates. ..u give short comment ...
LOL .. Hard baar balance maintain karna zaroori nahi hota
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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 4:36am | IP Logged
I Loved it..!! :P But as per ur warning..!! Bit tooo fast.. :P I was like spead breaker do uske..!!!
Yaar U could have made it aaram se three-four shots..!!!
like that... other one... Four Shots U r writing..!!! :D

But overall I loved the story..!! And particularly that realization of Raghav right from him being kicked out of house to his realization...!! Lol..!! End was Like Perfectly described..!!!!

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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 6:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mariee

@santhisreem
Such an ajeeb person u are 
I give short updates ..u give long comments
I give long updates. ..u give short comment ...
LOL .. Hard baar balance maintain karna zaroori nahi hota

Shocked I'm ajeeb i didn't realize it till now Wink

es baar se dhyan meh rakungi ke balance maintain karna hai  LOL
but in this os u expressed it completely meri analysis ke liye kuch choda he nahiTongue so short comment Evil Smile
btw what does Paakezaah mean n how this story is related to it ? 

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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 7:32am | IP Logged
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unres
maaru i thoroughly ignore ur warning n read whole os in one go, yaar hw it posible dat maaru ki story he aur isse hold pe rakho jb pata he woh update cmpleted heWink so i couldnt resist myself n widout hold i read itTongue i just amused, hw much tym u took for writing disShocked

amazing os
the person..uffs maaru ka Raghav Singhania who doesnt knw love fall in pure love in one day dat to with a persn who hide her identity to achieve a goalEmbarrassed it cn hapn only in maaru's osBig smile

start is just amazing, raghav is searching place for cover photo for his magazine and pissed of that he doesnt getting any single shot and in dat, d song and driver/guide getting in his nerves. I enjoy dis iritate raghav.LOL

He went to jungle in search of water, wid d help of sound of waterfall and met with cliff hanger activityROFL bt his gud luck, his savious save him frm death. Bt Maaru i wonder 6ft k raghav ko bechare 4ft k kalpi i mean juno ne kaise nikalaShocked

junaid said he is ghost n raghav almost died on d spotROFL bt the change in rags behavious is amazingSmile

raghav ws suspensive abt juno n finaly his doubt is got reveal with that diary. He first got shock abt kalpi love him bt later he too start loving her.
And he came back to kalpi with marriege proposal. "trust me ...i completely
respect it. & i will not ask for any
commitment from ur side until ur
project is done .." its heart touching words, he is ready to suport her in her careerBig smile
and final ending silence with waterfall sound is fabulousEmbarrassed
lovely os
love u maaru 4 disHug

p.s. Sory 4 late unres, me toh hum aapke he kaun dekhane me bhul gayi mujd isse unres karna heLOLEmbarrassed

Edited by Sh0Nali - 17 January 2015 at 11:12am

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