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OS : Paakezaah - Pg 3 17/1 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story marieee...loved it๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago

Marie I praise you for your originality and creativity! hats off

first of all I love the name junaid๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰ , love how instantly both clicked at their first meeting ๐Ÿ˜‰ was wondering how come a man helped rags๐Ÿ˜† well not anymore๐Ÿ˜› So kalpi already heard of the RS and now she's having a change of opinion๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ thanks to you๐Ÿ˜‰ So you explained already why kalpi disguised herself as a man๐Ÿ‘ 
๐Ÿ˜† Raghav himself cannot believe that this is really him interacting with a complete stranger and so to comfortably๐Ÿ˜† hmmm love this and now hearing that humming sound now he is gonna question juniad/kalpi ๐Ÿ˜† cant wait to see what you have up your sleeve๐Ÿ˜† I know I am gonna love it๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ Awesome work marie
Edited by DiVirgo - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice story 
Luved reading it... 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Your OS is short but sweet and very entertaining ! Love at first sight or after several 'sights' [ mean after several years of knowing ] should be a true divine love ! Wonder how many are fortunate to get such love in reality ? ? ? Most of us are in love with love not the person [ either a male or female ] Sorry to be unromantic but that is reality ! The Os is beautifully written. At least there are no negative characters !
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mariee what an absolute darling of a story . Very very different but very lovable too this instant Wala love .๐Ÿ˜ณ Enchanting my dear !!!!!!! 
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Posted: 9 years ago
unres on page 5 ๐Ÿ˜Ž ๐Ÿ˜† 
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Posted: 9 years ago
RagNa found each other in the most unconventional places lol
Kalpi acting as a man was cute ;)
I love their confession
Beautiful OS
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: zindgidilse

Res ๐Ÿคฃ

aj kal i m doing only res ๐Ÿคฃ


Dare u mess with me zindgi... If I don't get a comment soon soch le .  u will get no pms henceforth ...phir toh tu kitna bhi katti bucchi kar le ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

Edited by mariee - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mariee too good os ya#superb#awesome#superb story from ur khazana none of ur stories can be phaltu or bakwaas too good.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Waw mariee your a brilliant writer darling ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ thanks for this wonderful ragna os ๐Ÿค—