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CHAPTER 9:GAURAV'S FEELINGS
IN JUNEJA'S HOUSE,EVENING TIME
everyone reaches home and retired to their room.heer went to her room and closes the door.
meet,vihaal,kul and harman goes to terrace to discuss about today's event
PREET:veera tum sach mein pb ko dekha haina
veer:haan bhai main sach kehrahi hoon.prem bhai hai woh i am 100% sure
meh:lekin yeh kaise ho saktha hai
nihaal:veera shayad tumari sapna bi woh saktha haina
she stares at him angrily and says:wht do u mean nihaal?mein day dream karthi hoon.tum mujhe acchi tara jaanthi ho phir bi tum yesa pooch rahi ho
kuldi:accha chodiye pls preet tum yeha hum sabko kyun lekar aaye ho.
preet:mein batathi hoon di.aaj us dargah mein koi function chalrahithi aur uska videos bi lerahithi.so,meine jiju se us videotape kisibi tara lekar aanekeliye kehdiya di.us tape mein hum sabki sawaal ki jawaab miljayegi
harman:tumne veera ki baath ko sach maanrahi ho.hum sabne poora dargah search kiya lekin bhai kahin nahi mili.i am sorry to say veera but i think this is ur illusion
veera:bhai pls you know me very well.mein bahuth practically sochthi hoon.aur mein bi aaj tak yahi maana hai ki pb zinda nahi hai.but i saw him bhai
preet:veera yahan koi yekin kare yaa naa kare mein karthi hoon.
kuldi:tumara is trust ko dekhkar mujhe bahuth khush woh rahi hai preet.prem ki behen woh kar bi woh vishwaas mein nahi karpaayi preet.
preet:yesi baath nahi hai kuldi.mera family mera sab kuch hai.lekin us family se bhi mujhse bi zyaada mereliye kuch mayine raktha hai toh woh PREM BHAI hai.uski jagah koi nahi lesaktha.
       ek aur baath.pb ki baareme hb aur mb aur us daljith chachi ko batha nahi chalna chaiye.sorry harman bhai but i don't have trust on her.
harman:ok preet.lekin heer bhabhi kyun
preet:kyun ki bhabhi pehlesehi bahuth pareshaan hai.i want to make sure before saying anything to her.ok gud night
everyone leaves to their room.while going preet sees ash near the corridor.he goes to her and says:ash mein tumse kuch baath karna chathi hoon 5min pls
ash:kya bolna hai preet
preet:mein jaanthi hoon meine tume bahuth dukh diya hai.tumari dil ko toddiya aur mein tumari gunehgaar hoon.shayad meri galti maaf karne ki laayak bi nahi hai aur isliye meine tumse maafi nahi maanga hai.lekin mujhse yeh guilt pradaash nahi horahi hai aur mera pb hamesha kehtheye ki agar kisika dil dukhaya toh apni dil se maafi maangthe toh maafi mil jaathi hai.mein apni saari gunaah keliye tumse dil se maafi maangthi hoon.i am sorry ash.mein chathi hoon ki tumapni zindigi mein aage bade aur hamesha khush rahe pls ash.
ash:mujh tumse koi complaints nahi hai preet.mujhe pehla bahuth dukh huwa,tumpar bahuth gussa bi ayya phir time ki saath mujhe ek baath samaj mein aagaya preet.meine tumse pyaar kiya tha aur us pyaar ki wajah se jab prem mujhse shaadi karne se inkaar kiya mujhe itna bura nahi laga aur jab prem heer ki saath ghar chodkar chali gayi thi meine tumareliye undonoko is ghar mein waapas lekar annewaali plan shaamil bhi huwi thi.lekin agar tumse pyaar nahi huwa ho toh meine prem ki saath shaadi karkar heer ko dokha derahi hoti.tumne us galath kaam karne mujhe bachaya aur mein jaanthi hoon tumne mujhe ek best friend samja aur shaayad basanth bi kiya lekin tumpar meri pyaar ki wajase zyaada tumaara pb ki pyaar keliye tumne mujhe apna hai.ab mujhe patha chalgaya ki pyaar se door rehna kitna mushkhil hai.meine jo bi prem-heer ki saath sach jaan kar bi kiya uski sazza hai.isliye tumpar mujhe koi shikaayath nahi hai isliye maafi maangne ki bi koi zarurath nahi hai.aur rahi sawaal aage badne keliye mein nahi jaanthi yesa 
kab hoga agar meri zindigi mein meri baareme sab kuch jaankar bi mujhe pyaar karne waala aur sirf mereliye bani haiwoh aayengi tab mein zarooraage badunga.so don't worry about me aur tum apne zindigi mein aage bado aur koi guilt math rakho.gud night preet and she leaves
preet smiles to himself and turns to leave and sees meher standing there
preet:meher.woh mein ash se
meher:kuch math bolo preet .tum yesa karnekeliye meine itni din intezaar kiya hai.meine agar tumse kahongi toh tum kya samjengi patha nahi isliye. but i am so happy preet
preet:meher.tume mujhpar poora haq hai.tum mera patni ho.tum mujhsekuch bi kehsakthi ho.samji tum
she smiles at him and says:ok sir.ab chale neend aarahi hai.
IN HEER'S ROOM
heer stares at moon and st:prem kya sach mein tum wahan par thi yaan hamesha ki tara yeh meri sapna hai.ek pal keliye mujhe laga tum sach mein wahaan kadi ho shayad isliye mein darr gayithiki woh hamesha ki tara meri sapna nahi nikaljaaye.samaj mein nahi aaraha hai kya horaha hai mera saath. i miss u prem
IN DELHI,GAURAV'S ROOM
gaurav is taking pirade in his restlessness and comes near the window and stares at moon and st:kya  hogaya mujhe.iski kayaal meri dimaag se nahi atrahi hai.woh itni udaas kyun hai aur mein iski baareme itna kyun sochrahi hoon.mein yesa nahi karsakthi,mujhe us sanjana se engagement hogaya hai.par woh kaun hai aur uski aakhon mein itna dard kyun hai aur uski aasu mujhe itna pareshaan kyun karahi hai yesa laga mera dil rorahi hai.mera zindigi takleef mein hai.nahi..nahi..mein uski baareme nahi sochungi.bilkul nahi sochungi and goes and sits near the bed and closes his eyes
suddenly someone careses his face and he opens his eyes to see her(heer) so close to him and stares at her.he then closes his eyes in content.he opens his eyes and places his hand on her cheeks and places his forehead near her and lost in moment and then he stares at her lips and comes close to touch it with his when she turns around shyly and tries to go away.he stops her by hollding her wrist and takes her closely and kisses her in full passion.both lost in their wonderful moment
heer:tum mujhe kabhi bhool nahi sakthi kuch bhi karlo.tumara dil hamesha mereliye dhadakega samji and disappears
gaurav:ruk jao.math jao mujhe chodkar he wakes up panting and searches her everywhere and says:ab toh sapna mein bi nahi choda tumne mujhe.kya karu mein
then he goes through sleepless night thinking about her and sleeps due to tiredness in the early hours.

NEXT MORNING,KHURANA HOUSE
gaurav is sleeping and someone wakes him up and he opens his eyes and sees her(heer) again
gaurav:phirse tum aagayi
heer:haan.phir kaun aayega.time ab 10:00am hai.utho
gaurav:mujhe akela chod do pls.tumaari wajase meine raath bar soya nahi.
heer:meine kya kiya?
gaurav:kya kiya.tumne sab kuch kiya.jab se tume dekha tumaari baareme toh sochrahi hoon.aur tumne kiss karke chaligayi aur mujhe neend nahi aaya he says sleepily
heer:WHAT?GAURAV kya hogaya tume and shakes him from his illusion
gaurav stares at SID shocked and says: SID tum and understood his craziness and saya:woh main mein..woh bas mazak karaha tha. kuch nahi
sid:yeh tume mazak lagraha hai.meri toh ek min mein dimaag kaam karna bandh hogaya hai.tum toh tumari wife se baath karne jaise baath karahi ho
gaurav:sorry yaar.mein ready hokar aatha hoon
sid:ok and leaves
sid st:kya hogaya usse.kalse kuch ajeebse behave karaha hai.kuch hoga toh nahi.mujhe patha karna hoga and he leaves

raj calls sid to his room and says:sid meine sumer singh ki baareme patha kiya.usne rajasthan mein ek raja ki parivaar se 20 saalse kaam karatha tha.uski ek beti bi hai usne ludhiyana mein rehthi hai.kuch personal issues ki wajase dono alag hai.yeh hai uska address.
sid:thanks dad.ab us raja ki baareme patha karna hoga uska connection zaroor sanjana se hogi,i am sure.mein aaj shyaam ko ludhiana nikal thi hoon.
raj:sid ek kaam karo tum aur simran ludhiana jao.mein gaurav,virat yahan pe rahengi toh sumer singh bi yahan rahenga.teekh hai.
sid:super dad.chaliye breakfast karthe hai

IN GAURAV'S ROOM
gaurav comes out from washroom with only towel tied on his waist.he comes and opens the wardrobe and confused in selecting his shirt,when heer comes and takes green shirt for him
he stares at her and takes his shirt and places on him
heer:bahut accha hai
he smiles at her and turns around to see there is no one.he slaps his head and says:mein paagal horaha hoon
he takes the green shirt and goes to change
sid comes and knocks the door several times and shouts:yaar gaurav.kitni time lagaogi tayaar hone mein jaldi aajao.bookh lagrahi hai.tayaar hone mein ladkiyaan se bi zyaada time lerahi ho and knocks again
gaurav opens the door and sid stares at him shocked:gaurav tumaara tabiyat teekh haina yaar
gaurav:haan.kyun kya huwa
sid:tum mujhe poochrahi ho jab meine yeh shirt tume gift diya toh tumne kaha ki ye rang tume accha nahi lagega aur mein sirf mereliye meri koi kaas din pehnoongi right.toh aaj achanak kya huwa.
gaurav:woh bas yesa hi pehnliya.ab chalo breakfast karthe hai.bookh lagi hai

IN JUNEJA'S HOUSE
gayathri is sitting in living room and reading magazines when the ph rings
gay:hello
sim:hello gayathri mein simran bolrahi hoon
gay:haan simran.kaise ho.ghar mein sab teekh haina 
sim:haan.sab teekh hai.aur mein aur sid ludhiana aaj aajayenge
gay:accha.yeh toh khushi  ki baath hai.baaisaab nahi aaraha hai.
sim:aaj nahi.raj aur baaki sab shayaad kal aajayenge.yahan kuch kaam hai.
gay:hmmm ok
sim:meine ek socha parso sid ki birthday aur official partners banne jaaraha hoon toh parso humm party kyun rak nahi sakthe aur veera bi maa bannewaali uska bi party bantha hai
gay:haan.parso heer ka bi birth day hai
sim:yeh toh bahuth acchi baath hai.toh phir ek shot mein teen nishaaniyaan.meinaaj hi shopping jaatha hoon aur heer,veera aur sab keliye shopping kartha hoon.teekh hai.aur heer ki birthday dress mein hi gift karunga samji.
gay:arrey sim tume toh batha haina heer ki baareme phirbi tum yesa baath karahi ho
sim:mein teekh karahi hoon aur uska change of mind hona chayiye.uski gum se usko baahar nikalna hoga.tum is baar yeh party rakh.tum heer se yeh kaho ki veera keliye aur hamareliye party rakhraha hai.
gay:teekh hai.lekin party hamari ghar mein hogi,sharad manzoor hai
sim:ok.mujhe bahuth saare shopping karni hai sab keliye
gay:yesa hai toh mein bi karoongi sab keliye.mein rakthihoon
gayathri calls everyone and says about the party in day after tomorrow
gay:heer meine bathaya thana simran ki beta sid uska parso birthday hai aur veera keliye bi aur business relationship ki baareme bi announcement karsakthe hai.party hamara ghar mein hogi.meine promise kardiya hai.
heer:teekh hai maa.party ki tayaari hum sab kardengi
gay:bahuth saara kaam baaki hai.pehle shopping karni hai.preet gaadi nikaalo.kisko shopping karna hai aajayega
heer:maa mein ghar ka kaam sambaalthi hoon
veera:bhabhi aap meri help keliye nahi aasakthi pls
heer :ok
so,everyone goes for shopping from juneja's house
IN DELHI
simran says about her plan and leaves for shopping.
in hurry,she slips and gets sprain in her legs
sid:mom are u ok.
gaurav:maa aap teekh hai
gaurav lifts her and takes her to room and examines her leg
sid puts ointment on her legs  and says to take rest
sim:but mujhe shopping jaana hai
sid:no mom.aap kahin nahi jaayenge
sim:i have to go sid.heer keliye aur sabkeliye dress karidhna hai aur veera bi maa bannewaali hai.tumari bi birthday hai aur us ghar mein sabko gift kareedhna hai nahi toh mujhe bura lagega
gaurav:ok mom.shopping hojayega
sid:gaurav.tum bi
gaurav:lekin aap ghar mein aaram karenge aur hum dono shopping jayenge.uss ghar mein kaun kaun hai .aap batha hai mein uska issab se lelunga teekh hai.papa aur virat aapka khyaal rakenge.teekh hai
sim:hmmm ok.
she tells about everybody and says :unlogon ka basanth acchi se nahi patha lekin accha gift lekaraana aur heer keliye bahuth accha dress kareedlena.teekh hai
sid st:itni saare shopping list.mein toh gayi kaamse
both of them leaves and sid says:gaurav tumne itni badi musibath mein daaldhiya mujhe.mujhe toh shopping ki s bi nahi aatha yahan toh itna bada list hai
gaurav:don't worry when gaurav is here no fear.chalo jaldi shopping katham karna hoga aur aaj shyaam ki flight hai tumari.
sid:i know.tum mera birth day party aajaongi naa
gaurav:haan aur pehla wish mera hoga.
PRECAP:FIRST BIRTH DAY WISH
       PARTY IN JUNEJA'S HOUSE
       UNEXPECTED GUEST

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Hi Keerthi Hug
How r u? Missed ur updates. 
So nice you came.Big smile Thanks.

pg 7 ch 9

V exciting. I loved entire update. Wow it's so like in show,Big smile
Gaurav is hallucinating :P That was pretty hot.LOL
At the same time Heer is talking to Prem through moon Aww.
I feel the moon is their telephone. LOLCool V cute.
Wow there's gonna be party woohoo. Can't wait. Heer's B'day Partyalso Sid's
That was interesting Preet gathering his siblings to chat. What he said is true. Thumbs Up 
It was kind of funny Simran, Sid's mom sprained her ankle ( I know it hurts but her excitement and then this happened. It seemed funny). Hope she'll b ok.
That was significant Prem wearing that particular shirt - does that mean he's gonna meet someone in mall? Anyhow I see we are getting closer to Gaurav Heer face to face meeting. 
Please update soon cuz I wanna read next part. Pretty pls *puppy face*Hug


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Awesome update it was ...loved it <3
Looking forward to the next part...cont soon.

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