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Posted: 11 January 2015 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhagyashri12

Woww beautiful updateClap
Eagerly waiting for next part
thank u bhagyaji.i am typing the next part

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CHAPTER 8: THE TWIST

In some other place,jugni dances with joy in her heart and one lady asks her what happened. 
JUGNI:aaj kuch alag honewali hai.aaj do dil phirse milnewaali hai.undonoka milan honewaali hai lekin kiska sapna aur kiska ankikat banega woh us rabba ki haath mein hai.
IN DARGAH
Gaurav asks for his destiny and opens his eyes and stares at the other side.the whole world stand still for him.he stares at her like there is no one around him other than her.she is praying something with her heart.the tears is continuously flowing from her eyes.he is feeling pain by seeing her tears.but he don't the reason.he wants to hide from the world and sadness around her.he wants to give her all the happiness.at that time,she opens her eyes and stares at him.her reaction changes in every second.she is feeling sad,longing,love,relief,happy and peace.he don't know what to do.he is standing at the same place and staring at her
at this side,heer prays for prem and family's happiness and opens her eyes to see prem standing in front of her.she just imagines the past moments and st:prem usdin jab hum yahan dagah baandrahi thi toh hum apni aanewaali kal keliye manath maangithi.ab aaj bi yahi lagrahe tum meri saamne kadi ho aur mujhe pyaar se dekhrahi ho.abhi bi mujhe mehsoos horaha ki tum sach mein meri saamne kadi ho prem.lekin dar lagraha ki agar mein tume chohoon toh tum gaayab hogayi toh.mereliye ye pal yesahi ruk bi gayi toh zindigi ki saari khushiyaan yesahi jeeloongi isi pal meinhain.mein ab dua karthi hoon ki yeh pal kabhi katame naa ho.
both of them staring at each other for god knows how long.they don't want time to run.suddenly,someone calls heer and she comes out of her trance and glances backwards and gaurav comes out of the trance when she turns back and leaves from there.heer turns back to see there is no one on the other side
she feels sad and goes from there.(KDMHMD starts playing in the background
GAURAV ST:mujhe kya horaha hai.mein yesa kaise kar sakthi hoon.lekin ek pal keliye meine apne aapko khodiya in aankhon mein.yesa laga meri zindigi us aankhon mein hi hai.
at that time,he sees someone is going to fall in the pit .he runs and saves her and says:dhyaan se chaliye aap teekh toh hai
she:thank u and looks up and stares at him shocked and whispers:prem bhai. gaurav does not hear her because he sees her (heer)again and he rushes to her quickly leaving veera in the unbelievable state.
nihal comes to her and asks her what happened
VEERA:prem bhai prem bhai...mein pb ko dekha hai jao nihal doondho usse.ab tak toh yahan tha.kahan chala gaya bhai.
      prem bhai prem bhai...she shots his name and searches around
PREET:kya hua veera. tum chilla kyun rahi ho and family members also joins them
VEERA:woh ..woh main ..main prem bhai ko dekha hai
everyone stares at her shocked
LALITH:veera.tum paagal hogayi ho kya
VEERA:nahi dad.mein sach mein dekha usse.woh ..woh mujhe girne se bachaya aur aur mujhse kaha ki "dhyaanse chaliye  aap teekh toh hai"meine apni khano se suna woh kisiko dekhrahi thi shayad usiki peeche gaya hoga.meine dekha hai.pls prem bhai ko doondhiye
      prem bhai..prem bhai.. and she runs here and there
preet and nihaal and everyone starts searching in the whole dargah.but they don't find him
everyone comes and settles in the same place
LALITH:nahi mila beta.shayad tum kisi aur ko dekha hoga
VEERA:nahi dad.woh prem bhai hai dad.iss jagah sach mein powerful hai dad.yahan pe meine pray kiya ki agar meri pb hothe toh ho meri kadam bi zamin par rakne nahi denge aur dhyan se chalo aur tum teekh ho yesi que poochengi .woh sach mein hogaya hai.heer bhabhi sach kehrahithi prem bhai zinda hai.
preet starts thinking and asks:heer bhabhi kahan hai
now everyone thought about heer and harman:humne toh poora dargah dekhliya lekin heer bhabhi bi kahin nazar nahin aarahi hai
at that time,someone calls gayathri,gayathri turns around and sees her friend
SIMRAN:tum log yahan pe
GAY:tum log yahan.hum pray karne aayithi.veera maa banewaali hai
SIM:woh congratulations.aur yeh mera beta hai sidharth sid. aur ye uska dost virat
GAY:accha and blesses them.she wants to introduce them to her family
but when she turns around only lalith is there.
GAY:arrey yeh log kahan gayi
LALITH:heer ko doondh ne
SIM:heer ko kya hua.woh teekh toh haina
GAY:woh teekh hai.lekin woh kahin nazar nahi aarahi hai
SIM:main bi rukthahoon.anyhow gaurav bi tak nazar nahi aaraha hai.kahan gayi yeh ladka batha nahi
GAY:woh kaun hai
SID:woh mera bf
SIM:woh mera beta hai jaisa sid aur virat hai waise hi gaurav bi
sid smiles at her proudly
SID:haan aunty.mein bi dekhna chathi hoon heer ko,jab bi dekho heer ki baareme baath karahi hai ma ne
GAY:zaroor beta
everyone comes there except preet and says that they don't find her.
BEFORE HALF AN HOUR
heer starts walking aimlessly when she hears some crying voice of a girl,she goes to her and asks what happened?
girl:mera flowers ek bi sale nahi hui ab mein ghar kaise jaldi jaa sakti hoon and starts crying again
HEER:arey rona band karo mein lelungi.teekh hai.
she gives money for full basket and gets some flowers from the basket and asks the girl to give other flowers to someone who doesn't have anything to offer to lord
GIRL:thank u didi
heer leaves from there and gaurav who follows her hears everything and smiles himself.when heer leaves,he also tries to follow,the same girl stops him and offers flowers.
when he offers money,she says:iss phool keliye kisiaur ne dediya toh aap unkeliye dua kariyega chahe toh.
GAURAV:ok and smiles at her and takes the flower basket.
heer and gaurav offers flower to the lord at the same time in the opposite sides
heer:mujhe meri takdir waapas kardijiye.meri prem ko hamesha keliye mujhe dedijiye pls uskebina mein jee nahi saktha hoon aur usse hamesha khush rakhiye
GAURAV:mujhe yeh ehsaas samaj mein nahi aaraha hai.ek pal mein meri poori zindigi badaldiya usne.uski aasu mujhe takleef derahi hai.uski aankhon mein dard aur pareshaamn mujhe pareshaan derahi hai.mein sirf itna chathi hoon ki usse hamesha khush rakhi hai.uski hardua qubool kar dijiyega pls
both of them starts leaving the holy place .when the wind blows and makes the dupata to flow and struck in prem's face(guys imagine railway station dupata scene)but this time he sees her and lost himself in the fragrance.heer is turning her back towards him.but she is feeling prem's presence behind her.she wants to turn but the fear to get it wrong is making her stand still

atlast she turns,the people celebrating some festival in the dargah comes between and they drift apart
she feels sad and walks to river side and gaurav follows her behind
she goes to the river side and recollects the horrible and sweet memories.his confession to her,acceptance of love,everything and starts crying.
suddenly she feels prem's presence again behind her,she stops crying and stands when the wind blows heavily making the dupata to flows on prem.
she turns back for her dupata and sees that the dupatta is covering his face.he removes the dupatta from his face
and she whispers :prem
she closes her eyes and after that someone places hand on her shoulder.she jerks and opens her eyes and sees preet standing there with her dupata
HEER:preet tum
PREET:haan bhabhi kya hua
HEER:kuch nahi.tumne yahamn pe kisi ko dekha hai
PREET:nahi bhabhi.kyun aapne kisiko dekha
HEER:nahi.mujhe yahan se lechalo preet.mujhe abhi isi waqt ghar jaana hai.pls mujhe yahan ek pal bi nahi ruknahe preet suffocate horahi hai.mujhe jaldi yahan se le chalo preet pls and gets restless
PREET :teekh hai bhabhi chaliye.they both leaves from there.gaurav comes out from behind the tree.
when he sees her closing eyes,he hears someone's footsteps and st:agar hum dono ko yesa kisine dekhliya toh shayad uski baareme galath sochengi and  he puts the dupatta near her and hides behind the tree at the end
he sees the dupata which is lying in the ground itself.he takes it and thinks that it is ur memory for me to keep it with myself and goes from there
AT DARGAH
everyone is feeling worried for heer and sid for gaurav
when the cell rings,lalith attends it
lalith:what.itni irresponsible kaise ho sakthi ho.hum yahan itni pareshaan hai aur tum heer ko lekar airport chaligayi
preet:i am sorry dad.bhabhi bahuth pareshaan thi woh sid karahithi ki usse ghar jaana hai issliye meine lekar aagaya.woh mujhe river side par mili thi.
LALITH:ok.tum uska khyaal rakhna.mein ph rakthi hoon
PREET:ek minute dad.mujhe jiju se baath karni hai
LALITH:ek min dethahoon
KIRAN:kya baath hai preet
PREET:jiju aaj dargah pe koi function chalraha hai aur uski videos bi lerahi hai.aap kuch bi kariye mujhe woh video tape chahiye.mein aapko shyam mein video tape ke saath hai milna hoga pls jiju
KIRAN:ok preet.main kartha hoon tum chintha math karo
PREET:ok bye jiju
KIRAN:ok bye and cuts the call.

      aaplog chaliye mujhe kuch kaam hai.mein shaam ko milti hoon
everyone leaves for airport and kiran leaves to get the video-recording
at that time,gaurav comes there and sid asks him where did he disappear.he manages and leaves to the khurana mansion.
kiran then calls preet and informs him that it atleast takes 3 days forthe recording
preet:ok jiju aap pls 3din wahan ruk kar woh tape lekaraaye pls jiju pb keliye
KIRAN:ye kaise baath karahi ho preet yeh hamari fammily prem aur heer keliye karahihoon pls kehaneki koi zaroorat nahi samji.ok mein rakthi hoon
PREET:bye jiju and cuts the call and st:3 din matlab heer bhabhi ki birth day ki din shayad iss birth day ki gift aapko pb miljaye hamesha keliye.
PRECAP:HEER'S BIRTHDAY

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Posted: 11 January 2015 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Keerthi Hug
Wow double update Cool

pg 5  part 7

Wow I love this ch. Big smile
aw love the intro scene.LOL Mr. Khurana acted so well,
Simran aunty is cool.
Gauav's frds r so nice.
I llove how Gaurav side and Heer's side planning a trip for Dharga.
In the show - I loved PH in Dharga. They look so pure and angelic in white.
The way they pray is so sweet. It was nice to re visit and imagine that scene.
You wrote so well.
The lil girl and her dialogues are so cute yaar. Love her scene with Heer and Gaurav. :D
Aw Gaurav Heer tying thread scene is just amazing. Love the dialogues. <3


pg 6  part 8
Wow both Heer and Gaurav saw each other! Awesome.
But Heer thinks it's an illusion huh hm
River side scene is beautful, I thought Gaurav and Heer will have a cono. Sigh.
No luck. Preet came for his Bhabhi Aww. Such a caring Devar <3
So Veera is actually carimg for Heer now :o She sure has multiple personalities !
I'm glad she saw Gaurav lol
Preet wants vid - I didn't get this part. He said its for Prem - does he think his PB may hv been to this Dharga? Or is it cuz he heard Veera talking about her seeing Prem?
Anyhow it's going to become clear. Woohoo Heer's B'day in 3 days :D
So Prem left few days before Heer's B'day and now going to return on same day! Cool.
I hope so.

Pre cap is exciting. Waiting to see next ch. Thank you so much. Missed u and ur updates.

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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 5:55am | IP Logged
thanku for update its amazing 
 finally prem heer saw each other
now waiting for next part cont soon

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Posted: 13 January 2015 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
2 update woww :D thank u :)
Wowww Clap Fabulous updates part 7 and 8 ... part 7 was amazing i love the way u write it every make dua for eachother :) i loved it and part 8 was fabulouse Clap
Finally Prem And Heer ek dusare ko dakh liya nd veera to :D i loved loved loved it...
Eagerly waiting for the next part pls update soon :D

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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Wow Thanks Hug for the Beautiful UpdateClap
Loved the way Sid's parents acted accordingly and managed Winkalso love the way the care of Gaurav...Hug really he is with Best people know
So Simran and Gayathri are friends planning for partyWinkWink
Sid in know interested to meet HeerSmile
Loved the Juneja 's & Khuranna Prayers for each other HappinessThumbs Up

Heer sees Prem but thinking it as imagination Cry  feeling sad and Prem as Gaurav is know totally immersed in seeing Heer's pain Love also unable to understanding what is pulling him towards her Ermm 
Veera sees Prem also tells everyone she saw him also saved from falling hearing this Preet goes in search of Heer and finds disturbed Heer who want him take her back to home...
Preet take Heer back home but says Kiran to collect the VideoShocked
Hope Preet get want he wants from the video and 
it will be the Best Gift for Heer's BirthdayWink

Waitingg for Next part interestingDay Dreaming please update soonDay Dreaming

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Waiting for next chapter - Pls continue the story.

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Eagerly waiting for Next part 
plz update soon

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