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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
beautiful update :)

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Hi Keerthi...Welcome to forum...loving it...looking forward for prem-heer scenesSmile

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Pls update next ch. :D

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woww amazing update Clap loved it :)
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CHAPTER 6:BACK TO HOMELAND

AFTER 2 DAYS,IN LONDON

The  time for engagement ceremony of gaurav sharma and sanjana rampaul arrives.everyone is waiting for them to arrive.
the ceremony is conducted in their place with their close friends and some colleagues in a grand affair.
sanjana does not want to disclose this ceremony to the media and the whole world so,it is a close-knit affair.
sid & virat are waiting for gaurav and talking
VIRAT:sid. kya karnewaali ho.mujhe kuch bi samaj mein nahi aaraha hai.
SID:take a chill pill yaar.wahan dekho uss sanjana ki chamchi sumer singh hamare paas aaraha hai.
they both look at each other and greets him
SID:kya sumer ji.kya dekh rahi ho.
SUMER:meri stones(guys i don,t know what they call that in hindi which says about their fate)kehrahi hai ki kuch gadbad honewalihai.
SID ST:yaar usse kaise batha chal gaya.yeh toh khudki fate ki padi nahi aur chala aaya doosron ki fate dekhne mein and says:arrey sumer ji aap kaise baath karahi hai.sab accha hi hoga.don't worry aur haan function ki saari arrangements awesome hai.lekin kyun bahuth kam logo ko bhulaya hai
       koi problem hai
SUMER:nahi baby don't want to involvemedia and everyone till the marriage
SID:hmm ok and sumer leaves in hurry
gaurav comes in a grey colour suit looking handsome and greets sid and virat
SID:gaurav aagaye  tum.hmm cherepe kitna bi udaas ho phir bi handsome dikhtha hai mera bestie
GAURAV:sid chedna band karo aur virat tum bi uske saath derahi ho
VIRAT:meine kuch nahi kaha teekh hai.aur haan tum india jaane keliye tayaar hai
GAURAV:i am ready but sanjana ko kaise manao samaj mein nahi aaraha hai
SID:when sid is here then no fear.don't worry everything will be alright
sanjana comes in a sleeveless gown from the stairs
everyone stares at her.gaurav sees her coming and feels very uncomfortable and tries to move from there.sid notices this and thought:ek min bi tum usse pradash nahi karparahi ho aur tum kehrahi ho ki tum usse shadi karongi omg kya karu iska
the engagement starts and the time for ring exchange has come.first sanjana asks his hand to put the ring he hesitates and thinks without giving his hand so,she just takes his hand forcefullyand places the ring in his finger but the ring is too short to his finger.she tries to push it more forcefully but it does not happen.so,gaurav asks her to leave it and place the ring in small finger
she grimly accepts and places it.next it is his turn so she gives her hand but gaurav is so restless and something is twisting inside his heart.he doesn't know what is happening to him.the face lost his colour after he places the ring on her finger and abruptly leaves from there feeling suffocated.
sid and virat notices evrythingand kept silent.
SANJANA'S ROOM

after the function gets over,sanjana feels very elated and starts talking to herself:ab tume koi mujhse juda nahi kar saktha hai pr... NO NO GAURAV.YOU ARE ONLY MINE.
when the phone rings,when she notices the caller id she is so happy and starts chatting about happened and how the function went and everything
SANJANA:i am so happy.but i am missing u alot.ok bye tc

IN GAURAV'S ROOM
gaurav is frustrated with himself.he himself don't know whether he is angry with himself or others.
he started to break the things in his anger and helplessness and starts crying.he don't know why he is crying but something is bothering him like he has done the worst crime by geeting engaged with sanjana.he stares at the ring 
GAURAV:mujhe yesa kyun lagrahe ki meine is sagai ki wajah se apni zindigi se door,apni kismat se door hogaya.mujhe itna dukh kyun horaha hai.mera dil itni pechain kyun horahi hai.kuch samaj mein nahi aaraha hai.mujhe kisi bi tara iss jagah se nikalna hai mujhe bahut suffocate horahi hai and leaves

AT THE SAME TIME AS THE FUNCTION
JUNEJA'S HOUSE DINING ROOM

Everyone is having their breakfast, meher is serving for them.heer comes and greets them and sits on her chair
jiya:mami hum aapse baath nahi karenge
ROHAN:haan maami.mein bi
HEER:arrey par kyun
JIYA:hum donone kal aapkeliye bahuth wait kiya lekin aap aaye nahi hamare saath khelnekeliye
HEER:oh isliye ghussa ho.i am so sorry.tumarimaami ko maaf kardo pls.lekin is sunday i am only yours deal ok
ROHAN:is sunday matlab parso hi hai ok
HEER:ok ab jaldise maami ko kiss do
both of them comes and gives her face full of kisses.everyone smiles seeing their bond
KULDI:kabhi kabhi mujhe lagtha yeh ki woh meri nahi heer ki bacche hai.
KIRAN:haan.indono ko toh hum kisiki bi zarurat nahi agar heer rahengi toh
LALIT:in bacchon ki waja se heer muskurarai hai.yesa hi ankikath mein bi aagayi toh accha hoga.
GAYATHRI:ab wo sab chodi hai heer beta naasta karlo
HEER:haan maa
she suddenly feels very restless like something is happening whichis very wrong.
in haste she tries to leave the table and the ring finger gets scratched from the edge of the table which has very sharp edge.
PREET :bhabhi kya hua aapko.
MEHER:didi aap teekh toh ho.
LALIT:gayathri dekho haath mein khoon nikalrahe hai
ASH:mein first-aid box lekar aati hoon
KULDI:heer heer
DALJIT:chalo yahan toh heer ki choti si karoch keliye itna pareshaan horaha hai.lekin ye maharani toh zombie ki tarah kade hokar haath ko dekhrahi hai.
DALJITH is right.everyone is worried for hersmall wound but she is lost in her thoughts staring at her hand
HEER ST:ky horaha hai mujhe.yesa kyun lagraha hai ki prem mujhse door jaraha hai.nahi ye nahiho saktha.tum mujhse door nahi jaa sakthi.kya horaha hai.
the tears starts to flow freely from her eyes and thought out loud:YESA NAHI HOSAKTHA KABHI NAHI HOSAKTHA and runs to her(prem's)room crying.everyone are shocked to see her behaviour.
heer runs and closes the door and starts to break the things.she went to bathroom and opens the shower and cries bitterly for the thought of prem's distance from herself and gets unconscious there itself.
everyone who are worried hears the sound and rushes towards her room.
PREET:bhabhi darwaza kholie pls kya hua bhabhi kuch toh batha hai.
LALIT:heer beta.tum teekh toh hona
HARMAN:we have to break the door
KIRAN:harman sahi kehraha hai
preet and harman breaks the door and everyone rushes inside.
the room looks like it is attacked by some disaster.everythings are misplaced and broken . the glass pieces have some blood and the floor is printed by it with the foot prints
they hears the sound of water from the restroom.so they went to see the unconscious heer lying on the floor with blood in her hands and legs.
preet rushes and tries to wake her up but she does not respond.so he takes her inhis arms and rushes to the bed room
LALIT:gayathri towel aur first aid box lekar aao.
HARMAN:mein dr ko phone karti hoon.
MEHER:didi aake kholie didi
kids stars crying seeing their maami condition
kuldi takes them away and tries to console them
MAYA:i think usse psychartist ko dikhana bahuth zaroori hai
PREET:maya bhabhi bas.
LALIT:kya bas preet.mujhe bi yahi lagrahe ki heer ko dr ki zaroorat hai.yesa prem ki baareme sochkar apni zindigi karaab karrahi hai ho.
DALJIT:mein toh tab sewahi kehrahihoon lekin aaplog maanthihi nahi hai.
NIHAL:tum jao aur dr.sharma ko call karo ye meri acche dost hai aur famous psychartist bi.jao beta
nihal nodes and glances sadly at heer and leaves to call dr.
AFTER FEW MIN,
dr arrives and greets them.(i don't know anything about treatment so,pls ignore if there is any mistake)dr sharma checks heer and says the she does not have any severe physical injury and about her mental state.firs t,i have to talk to her
dr enter her room and asks everyone to leave alone for some time.
she is sitting in her bed and staring at her hand.
DR:hello heer.i am  dr.anurag sharma.ab aap kaise hai
HEER:i am fine
DR:good.phir aap achanak yesa kyun behave kiya.
HEER:sorry.lekin mein aapko kyun bathao
DR:ok phir aap apni gharwale se bathadijiye
HEER:nahi.mein kuch bathana nahi chathi hoon.
DR:ok aapko batha hai prem mera bi beta jaise hai.jab canada mein rehthatha hafthe atleast ek baar zaroor miltha tha.lekin ab
heer notices his sadness and sorry for her rude behaviour 
HEER:i am sorry.mein isliye yesa behave kiya kyun ki mujhe lagaki prem mujhse door jaraha hai.
DR:but beta.prem ab is duniya mein nahi hai.toh phir
HEER:nahi uncle.sab yahi sochrahe except preet.lekin mujhe patha hai woh waapas zaroor aayega
and the discussion goes for some more time
DR:ok beta.tum rest karlo and he leaves

IN LONDON

SID'S ROOM

SID:tumne gaurav ka chera dekha jab rings exchange huyi thi

VIRAT:haan.ye toh jaisa kade hai ki uske saamne mauth kadi ho. ab tho bathao plan kya hai.lekin tumne uss ring ko badla haina

SID:haan yaar.meine yesai design banaya aur size choti banadia.jab wo sumer singh arrangements dekhne keliye bahar gaya tha tab meine uska room jaakar ring badaldia.

VIRAT:agar gaurav ka ring badla hai toh sanjana ka ring bi badalna chaiye haina

SID:haan.lekin mujhe abi gaurav ko india lekar jaana chaiye aur mein nahi chathi ki agar iski wajase woh mana kardia toh.ab dekho uski sagai hogayi lekin gaurav ka nahi.

VIRAT:kya bol rahi ho usne ring usko penadia

SID:haan toh.ab dekho sanjana chathiki uska sagai ho gaurav ki saath aur usne ring penadia lekin gaurav khush nahi hai is sagai se isliye sanjana ki ring uski finger mein fit honenahi diya.ab sanjana keliye aur shayad sab keliye uski sagai hogayi gaurav ki saath toh wo bahuth khush hai.iss mauke mein humare plan follow karkar usse manayengi
ab jao jaakar gaurav se bathadeti hai ki sanjana se baath kare

IN LIVING ROOM
GAURAV:sanjana mein sid ki saath india jaana chathi hoon 3 maine keliye
SAN:WHAT.are u out of ur mind gaurav.tume bathaya haina ki mein tume india kyun nahi jaane derahi hoon. haan
GAURAV:i know. i want to for some emergency san try to understand.
SAN:no.u will not go and that's final.no more discussions
GAURAV:kya tum sachme meri accident ki wajase manakarahi ho yaa phir tum mujhse kuch chupario.haan
SAN:what yesa kuch nahi and ST:agar main nahi jaana diya toh usse mujhpar shak hojayega and says:ok tum jaao lekinsumer singh tumari saath aayega.is it ok 
GAURAV:ok no problem thank u san.mein sid ko business me help karne keliye jaarahi hoon.don't worry i will be alright.
SAN:ok promise me that u will marry me gaurav.
gaurav stares at her hesitately but promises her that he will come back .it is gaurav sharma's promise.
she hugs him suddenly and he feels weird and uncomfort
sidrat who listens everything feels happy and sad at the same time.

IN SID'S ROOM

SID:yesa kaise promise desaktha hai ho.mujhe toh sar pakhrahe hai
VIRAT:ye teekh hai.lekin sumer singh hamare saath indiaa aaraha hai uske baareme socho
SID:haan yaar.virattum ek kaam kar sumer singh ki baareme saare details mujhe chaiye.iski accent dekhkar toh lagraha hai ki ye rajasthani hai.tumari pehla kaam yahi hai india mein samji tum
ab chalo sojao kal flight hai.jaldi jaana hoga.

IN INDIA
 
JUNEJA'S LIVINGROOM
everyone is waiting for DR.sharma outside .when he comes and sees them worried
DR:lalit.don'tbe tensed.just sit down .i think i have to discuss this with everyone.when someone loves dearly,if the person just leaves this world.we can't accept the fact.
but in heer's case,something is different.i have to ask some questions.
LALIT:kya hua.ask whatever u want. i want her to be alright
DR:how is heer's behaviour in these years like in this extreme anger or pain
LALIT:nahi anu. wo bahut shanth hai. jab prem ki dead body aayithi tab usne kaha ki prem zinda hai.aur woh mera prem hoi nahi saktha hai.aur premka video message bi dikhadiya lekin usne tab bi yahi kaha ki prem zindahai.hum log bahuth koshish bi ki thi ki woh us wehem se baahar aasake lekin nahi wo paaya.
lekin kabhi yesa parthav nahi kiya hai.sab ko sambhala hai usne.is ghar aur office ko bi wohi sambhala lekin woh us wehem se baahar nahi aaye 2 saal hogayi hai.
DR:heer mentally strong lagrahi hai.meine hypnotise karke uski subconcious mind mein kya chalraha hai jaane ki koshish ki aur bathao tho i am so confused.
i think aaplog usse akele math chodiye aur surroundings happy rakhneki koshish kijiye.uski manpasand jagah lekar jaaye.be normal.i think everything will be alright.
LALIT:ek min anu. tumne yesa kyun kaha ki tum confused hai tum sach bathao kya hai?
DR:mein ek dr hoon lekin phir bhi mein poochrahihoon woh prem ki hi body haina?
LALIT:tum yesa kyun poochrahi ho.haan ho prem hi hai
PREET:mein yeh nahi maanthi.woh  pb nahi ho saktha
LALIT:tum chupraho preet.tum bolo anu.
DR:heer ki mindset yesa hai ki uskeliye prem zinda hai.uski subconcious mind mein sab kuch prem ki related hai.uskeliye prem hi sab kuch.aur usne in 2 saalo mein 2 baar suicide attend ki koshish ki hai,aur mera hissab se woh phirse try zaroor karengi
usse akele mein nahi chode toh accha hoga.aur uska confidence aur determinatio dekhkar toh mujhe bi yeha laga ki prem zinda hai.i know it is random foolishness.but dil yesa cheese ki ispar kisika zor nahi chaltha hai.
she loves u all so much.u are very lucky to get a daughter like her lalith.ab mein chaltha hoon agar kuch zaroorat hai toh ph kardo. bye
LALIT:kulraj tum aur bacche heer ki saath sojao
he glances at her room sadly and leaves
everyone leaves to their room with grief.

NEXT MORNING IN LONDON
Gaurav gets ready early and found himself in front of sid's room.he knocks on the door several times and the door opens
sid sleepily:gaurav tum kya hua itni raat ko kyun uttaya hai
GAURAV:sid it's 4:00 am so just get ready aur virat ko bi uttao
SID:yaar flight is at 10:00am.mujhe sone do
GAURAV:nahi.jaldi tayaar hojao.hume der hojayegi.mein virat ko uttathao and pushes him inside the bathroom 
AFTER SOME TIME,IN AIRPORT
GAURAV:SAN BYE.MEIN CHALTHI HOON
SID AND VIRAT:bye sanjuuu
SUMER SINGH:baby khyaal rakhna.kuch baath hai toh ph karna.teekh hai
SAN:haan and gaurav ki saath rahiyega.chotisibi baath ho mujhe inform kardijiye
everyone went inside the check in except sanjana who is feeling very wierd

AT 8:00AM,DELHI AIRPORT
everyone enter the land of home INDIA.gaurav is having varied emotions like happy,sad,helplessness,excitement,anger and everything.
he takes the soil with his hand and places near his heart and greets it with his heart and st:yesa lagraha hai mera dilisi desh mein dadakraha hai.isi desh main hain mera dil.mera zindigi isi desh main hai.

AT THE SAME TIME
heer wakes up from her sleep and smiles hapily and opens the window.the air blows heavily
HEER ST:is hawa kehraha hain ki tum isi desh main hai ho.isi desh main hain mera dil .meri zindigi waapas miljaayega mujhe.i love u prem


NOTE:sanju don't know anything about heer.i know that everyoneiswaiting for premeer milan.but give  some time for the characters to fit and settle in the story.
thanku for ur comments and likes guys.it means alotto me.college has started so,only weekend the updates will be possible




Edited by ganeshamsk - 07 January 2015 at 4:47am

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 8:06am | IP Logged
Awesum update dear ...the way heer feeling for prem and vice versa is just remarkable ...cant wait for premeer scenes...mitti ki khushbhu ab prem bhi mehsus karne laga...waise baap ka asar hogaLOLLOL..plz let premeer milan happen soonSmile..k we will definitely wait for week ends.

Edited by Neha12345xxx - 07 January 2015 at 8:03am

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Hi Keerthi Big smile
Wow so much happened. 
Hehe Prem's friends changed the ring for Sanjana LOL
Glad that worked in favour of Gaurav as he was feeling uncomfortable.
The way Gaurav feeling uncomfortable and the way Heer reacted in India was awesome,
Ha I have to say as Neha mentioned, you described Heer's feelings and pain so well.
Dr. Anurag is very understanding - more than Bauji. 
I can understand the family was worried. But the way they were jumping to get psychiatrist, so disappointing. 
So nice Preet is always supportive to Heer. He's so loyal to both Prem and Heer. Love him. <3
Wow 
Gaurav with friends came to India and Heer feels Prem's presence. Yay
Can't wait to read next part.Big smile

All the best for college.Hug Will wait for weekend. 
Ty so much. Love ur cute story.Heart

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Wowww Amazing UpdateClap
plz cont soon

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