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Posted: 9 years ago
 Me too feel the same as Tara. 😃 Excited for next part. 😃
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Welcome Keerthi to the Forum🤗...I am Divya🤗
Thanks for Writing a FF on Premeer ❤️🥳

Loving it soo much 👏👏👏
Hope as Heer😭 dedication, trust and ❤️ Love for Prem bring him back to Heer soon ...Heartbroken Heer 🥺.. the pain in Heart is killing her😭 and here Prem feeling uncomfortable with Sanju🤔..still ready to get engaged as she saved him😲...hope Prem soon remember his past also come to  know the true colors of 😈 Sanjana and her evil😈  plans...
Also Loved the way they exchanged the ring 😆 ...Ss
Happy that Sid and Veer are there to help🤗 Prem and
 Preeth👍🏼 for his bhabhi Heer...😊.

Prem as reached in India...
escaping from Sanju's Trap😡😆
All thanks to Sid👏 and his plans👍🏼...
.Waiting to se Premeer Milan soon😉
Please update as early as possible waiting curiously😔
Edited by harshitideewani - 9 years ago
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Thanks guys for ur lovely comments and likes.here is the next chapter
CHAPTER 7: THE FACE OF DESTINY

IN DELHI,KHURANA HOUSE
Gaurav and his friends along with sumer singh reached kurana house.raj and simran are very eager to meet them.sid comes forward and hugs them both and says:i missed u both so much
RAJ:me too partner
SIMRAN:mera beta kitna patla hogaya hai.teekh se apna khyaal nahi rakythaya ho
SID:oh mom mein bilkul teekh hoon.aap pareshaan math huwi hai aur haan agar aapkaquestionarie katham hogayi ho toh mein apni BFF ko introduce karwaloon.
RAJ:ek min meinbathathi hoon.
he comes and stares at both G and V .virat is nervous and staring at him with fear but gaurav is happy and smiling at seeing the family's bonding.

RAJ:yeh hai gaurav and points at G and yeh virat right
GAURAV:right uncle.kaise pehchanli
RAJ:sid talks a lot about both of them and specially gaurav.but i think my team will be virat and gaurav u are in simran's team.haan one more thing u  should call me papa but virat u can call me raj because we both are partners in crime
SIMRAN:hogaya aapki nautanki.gaurav tum iski baath ko chodo.tum sach mein hamari beta hi ho.aaj se tum dono mujhe maa bulaoongi,samji tum dono
VIRAT:yes aunty i mean maa
GAURAV:teekh hai maa.aapki tabiyath kaise hai papa sid ne bathaya ki aapki tabiyath teekh nahi  aur hospital mein thi.
VIRAT Stares at them fearfully and ST:ab toh gaye kaam se sid tum kaise relaxly dekhrehe god pls help.
RAJ:haan beta ab todi behthar hai. mujhe hospital accha nahi lagtha hai.isliye kal discharge hogayi hai.aur ab toh mera 3 bete aagayi mujhe ab chintha karneki koi baath nahi hai
virat stares at raj with mouth wide open
GAURAV:ab aap fully restkijiye uncle.aapko tension leneki koi zarurat nahi hai. hum teeno sambhalengi.
SIMRAN:ab aapka baath katham hogayo toh aaplog fresh hokar rest kijiye.mein khana lagadethi hoon.
gaurav and sid introduces ss to them and ss leaves with g for freshenup.
RAJ: sid kaisa hai mera acting.tum pehlehai batha hota toh accha rehearsal hojayega.
VIRAT:aapko batha hai phir bi aapne kuch nahi kaha.
RAJ:i know about sid.woh kabhi kuch galath nahi karega.
SIMRAN:haan lekin jab sid ne hume ph karke bathaya tab hamare paas bilkul time nahi hospital jaaneki toh raj ne kaha ki mein manage karoongi.lekin kya baath hai kyun yesa karneko kaha woh bi gaurav ki saamne? we both can't understand anything
sid takes them to room along with virat locks the door and tells them everything about gaurav
RAJ:lekin usko india lekar aane ki itni badi jhoot kyun.india nahi aana chatha toh rehnedesakta haina?
SID:no dad.something is wrong in this story.i want to know the truth dad.gaurav believes in her story because she saved his life.but i know his heart also doesn't believe in it.sanjana is playing a very big game in my friend's life.i think i will get my answers for all the questions and gaurav's true life back in this land,india.
    i want ur help dad.virat can't get any info about sumer singh,but i think u can get it by ur influence pls dad.
RAJ:he is also my son sid i also want his happiness . i will do anything for him.i will get hte info don't worry
SIMREN:yes sid.don't worry.we will be there to right the wrong in his life
SID:thank u both of u.
VIRAT:so join the mission gaurav both of u .they join the hands together and smiles
GAURAV:sid...
SID:haan gaurav coming teekh hai guys i am going now.

JUNEJA MANSION
everyone is having breakfast.when veera gets feeling nausea and vomits and gets unconscious.everyone gets worried and calls the doctor.
dr:nothing to worry mr.juneja.she is pregnant.sabko sweets bhatiye
everyone feels so happy ,after 2 years of sorrowful events.the first celebration in this house
Lalith asked everyone to assemble in the living room.EVERYONE assembled.he wants to go to dargah with everyone for family's peace.so,make the aarangements for leaving.we will be leaving tomorrow morning.we have to thank lord for this happiness.so,get ready.
DALJITH:hum aur ashkahi nahi jaaraha hai.aap log jaa sakthi hai.kisko batha bijlibaar ki tara isbaar bi koi tufaan aajaye
LALITH:bijlibaar ki tufaan hamari ghar ki  khushiyaan lautaadi.jis beti ko khodiyahe hum sochrahithi us beti ko waapas lautaadi us tufaan ne.aapko aane ki zarurat nahi hai.jin ko aana chatha hai woh aa saktha hai.
DALJITH:toh aap bolrahi hai ki aapka beta prem ko bi woh jagah waapas lekar aayega yehi kehrahi haina baisaab
LALITH:bas daljith.aaj ki din mein koi behas karna nahi chathihoon .aaj hamari ghar mein khushi phir se lautrahe hai isliye chup raho.
MAYA:bauji.mujhe ek urgent meeting jaana hai kal toh mein nahi aasakthi sorry
LALITH:hmm.jinko jaana hai woh tayyari shuru kijiye.hum kal delhi jaarahi hai.

IN DELHI
simran:sid 3 din tumari birth day hai aur hum ludhiana shift horaha hai.toh kya hum wahan ek party rakdete hai.teekh hai.wahan gayathri meri acchi dost hai woh help karengi.tumne usse mila nahi naa aur heer se mila nahi naa tumne.woh bahuth acchi hai
SID:mom pls chill mein toh apse tabi baath kartha hoon aap sirf heer ki baareme baath karthe hai.mujhe bi usse milna padega aakhir usme baath kya hai.
GAURAV:kya baath horahi hai and comes and sits in the sofa.
RAJ:woh meri girlfriend ki baareme baathkarahi hai
GAURAV:what
VIRAT:aapko girl friend bi hain papa.OMG

SIMRAN:bas karo aaplog.woh meri BF ki beti hai.woh sach mein bahuth acchi hain.and haan for ur kind information woh meri team mein hai
RAJ:ji nahi woh meri team hai
S:meri
R:meri
S:meri
R:nahi meri
gaurav and others are amused seeing their cute fight over small reason
SID:OMG.aaplog toh merliye bi yesa fight nahi kiya.ab toh mujhe usse dekhna hi hai.
SIMRAN:kya kare.kisiko bi usse dekhtha hi pyaar hojayega jaise mujhe huwa.jab meine usse pehli baar dekha yesa laga ki woh meri hi beti hai
RAJ:mujhe bi
GAURAV:ab toh mujhe bi usse milne ki intezaar hai.lekin uska naam kya hai
SIMRAN:heer
GAURAV:HEER
VIRAT:wow acchi naam hai
SIMRAN:hum kal dargah jaayengi kyunki 2 din mein hum shift horaha hai toh sab acchi se hone kreliye dua maangnekeliye jaarahi hai.ready hojao.tomorrow 10:00am
all:ok madam
NEXT DAY
everyone except daljith,maya and ash gets ready for leaving.the reached dargah at 10:45am
on the other side,everyone in the khurana house starts their journey towards dargah and reached at 11:00am


IN DARGAH
heer and her family gets inside for their prayers.everyone is having different thoughts in their minds
LALITH:yeh wahi jagah hai wahan meri parivaar  ek hogayi ab meri parivaar ki khushi aur hamari prem ki sukoon aur heer ki zindigi maangraghahoon.
GAYATHRI:mujhe meri bachoon aur meri parivaar ko khush rakhiye aur veera ki khush kabri sunkar yesa laga meri prem iss bacha ki roop mein meri paas waapas aaraha hai.heer ko apni zindigi waapas lautadijiye
HARMAN:mein jaanthi hoon meine meri parivaar aur meher ki dil ko bahuth dukh diyaye aur maafi bi nahi maangaya hai.meine apni baareme sochkar galthi karliya lekin ab mein apne parivaar ki baareme bi sochna chatha hoon.meri prem bhai meri upar ki bharosa ko waapas launga aur unka dil ko tes nahi pouchna chathi hoon.aur maya jaise bi ho usko meine pyaar kartha hoon usko acchi buddhi dedijiye pls aur mein aaj yahan par meri galthi ki maafi meher aur preet se maangungi
PREET:meine ash dil ko tes pauchaya aur yeh maaf karne ki laayak nahi hai.mein jaan poochkar nahi kiya haalath aur meri parivaar keliye meine yesa kiya hai.mein ab meher se pyaar karthi hoon lekin uski dil mein mereliye kya hai woh bi mein nahi jaanthi hoon aur ash ko ek acchi zindigi dedijiye.apni galthi sudharnekeliye ek mauka dijiye.agar mera pb yeha hote toh mera saara problems solve kardenge,agar mein bhabhi se baath karungi toh woh bi wahi karengi lekin bhabhi bahuth udaas hai mein nahi chathi ki meri problems ki wajah se usse aur parishani ho.mujhe kisiko bejiye ki mujhe sahi raastha dikhasakthe
someone comes and places his hand on his shoulder.he turns to see some stranger smiling at him
STRANGER:aapko koi problem hai.aap jo bhi keherahithi meine sab suna hai sorry aap loudly bol rahi thi
PREET:ji sorry he turns to leave
stranger:dekhiye aapne toh bolrahi thi koi aapko sahi raastha dikhasakthe agar aap batha sakthe ki kya problem hai toh shayad mein aapko help karsakthi hoon.i know iam stranger to u.but sometimes stranger is better than ur own.u can share feelings with some stranger.
preet stares athim for sometime and ST:woh sach mein madath karna chatha hai.isse dekhkar accha khandaan ki lagraha hai.mein share kar sakthi hoon kyaand says:ok
he tells him about his family and his relation with ash, his bro's sudden absence,his marriage with meher and his love for her
STRANGER:ab isme problem kya hai.
PREET:i don't know what she feels for me and ash is heartbroken because of me
STRANGER:i think you should ask an appology to her.i know it is unforgivable but if she loved u truly,she will understand ur situation and move on in her life.and for ur wife,first u should know what she feels for u.i mean whether she thinks u as her  friend or smething else.but first u should clse ur door of the past,understand
PREET:thanku so much.i am preet
STRANGER:i am sid all the best. can i say something?
SID:u love ur family a lot especially ur brother
PREET:yes morethan my life.
MEHER:meine ash ki zindigi cheenliya aur woh guilt mujhe maarahi hai.mein chathihoon ki uski zindigi mein bi khushi lautadijiye aur usko hume accept kardijiye.meri di ki zindigi mein phirse roshan karaye aur preet ko hamesha khush rakhiyega.
NIHAL:aaj mein bahuth khush hoon.mera ek baby honewaali hai.sabko khush rakhiye.mein veera koi takleef nahi hone doongi.meri behen apni zindigi mein aage badne dijiye.
VEERA:aaj se pehle pregnant means pain aur uglyness yahi soch rahithi mein lekin jab mein pregnant hoon toh yesa lagraha ki mein poori hogayi hoon.ghar mein sab khush hai.prem bhai aap bi khush haina,aapki barbie doll maa bannewaali hai.aap yaha hoti toh meri har kadam mein dekhar chalo,dhyanse chalo meri kadam bi niche nahi rakhnedega naa.aapki nephew keliye poora khilona lekaraajayega naa.mereliye aap iss baccha ki roop mein waapas aarahi hai bhai.
      meine bhabhi se bahuth badtamizi ki,teekh se baath bi nahi kiya lekin mein uskeliye maafi maangrahihoon bhai.mein chathihoon ki khush rahe zindigi bar
on the other side,simran asks sid where did he disappear
SID:sorry mom.kisiko problem isliye solve karnekeliye gaya hai.
simran:teekh hai.ab pray karo
RAJ:meri parivaar poori hogayi hai.sabko khush rakhiye.gaurav ki zindingi mein uski khushi lautadiji hai.sid isbar toh settle honeki baareme sochna chaiye
SIMRAN:meri parivaar ko poora kardiya hai.aapne aaj tak jo kuch bi kiya uskeliye dhanyawaad.heer apni zindigi mein bahuth kuch dekha hai uski zindigi aur khushi phirse lautaadijiye
SID:mein nahi jaanthi mein jo karahi hoon woh sahi yaa galath mein bas apni friend ki zindigi mein khushi dekhna chathi hoon
VIRAT:i don't know what to ask but i want my friend's happiness and also the one who is just made for me
so,everyone is sharing their problems and their wishes happiness,thoughts but the two souls are in their own world.
HEER is in the memories of their togetherness in the same place where they tied the thread for their future life and ties the thread in the same place and prays:aaj mein khush hoon prem.veera maa bannewaali hai.mein maami baanewaali hoon aur tum maamu.tum khush hona prem.sab ka khyaal rakhna prem.ash apni zindigi mein aagebadkar ek aacha aadmi se apni zindigi shuru kare.meher aur preet bi apne zindigi mein aage bade.mein jaanthi hoon preet meher se pyaar kartha hai lekin ash ki saath jo kuch bi usne kiya uska guilt usse aage badne se rokhrahai.meher abhi bi preet ko ek dost ki jaise dekhrahi hai.harman aur maya ki zindigi mein bi khushi aaye hai.maa aur bauji veera ko lekar bahuth khush hai.hamari parivaar mein khushiyaan lautrahi hai prem.mein bi khush hoon prem hamari parivaar ki khushi dekhkar lekin mein tumara intezaar karahi hoon hum dono ki takdir ek hai prem.ek hi manaath ki dagah ki tara 
Gaurav crosses the family when they are praying and feeling some restlessness in his heart. he goes to othe side to tie his thread for praying
he ties the thread which gets interlinked with another thread so,he ties the thread in the same and prays:mujhe kya horaha hai samaj mein nahi aaraha hai.mein zindigi ki koi bhi baath nahi jaanthi hoon.sid aur virat meri dost se zaada apni family bangayi hai aur ab uska family bi.mein sirf itna maangthihoon ki unlogon ko hamesha khush rakhiye.meine sanjana se sagai karke sahi ki ya galath ki yeh mein nahi jaanthi hoon.meri life mein aapse derahihoon .meri life ki faisla aap dedijiye.meri takdir ko aap hi dikhadijiye.mujhe sahi raastha dikha dijiye and opens his eyes and stares at the other side.that's it THE WHOLE WORLD STAND STILL FOR HIM

PRECAP:the twist
NOTE:next chapter willbe posted in the night

Edited by ganeshamsk - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: harshitideewani

Welcome Keerthi to the Forum🤗...I am Divya🤗

Thanks for Writing a FF on Premeer ❤️🥳

Loving it soo much 👏👏👏
Hope as Heer😭 dedication, trust and ❤️ Love for Prem bring him back to Heer soon ...Heartbroken Heer 🥺.. the pain in Heart is killing her😭 and here Prem feeling uncomfortable with Sanju🤔..still ready to get engaged as she saved him😲...hope Prem soon remember his past also come to  know the true colors of 😈 Sanjana and her evil😈  plans...
Also Loved the way they exchanged the ring 😆 ...Ss
Happy that Sid and Veer are there to help🤗 Prem and
 Preeth👍🏼 for his bhabhi Heer...😊.

Prem as reached in India...
escaping from Sanju's Trap😡😆
All thanks to Sid👏 and his plans👍🏼...
.Waiting to se Premeer Milan soon😉
Please update as early as possible waiting curiously😔

thanku so much divya for ur comments.next chapter is up😊
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Originally posted by: AASUS

 Me too feel the same as Tara. 😃 Excited for next part. 😃

thank u so much aasus.next chapter is posted
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Woww Superb update
aisa laga ke episode dakh rhe hu really loved loved loved it Thanks :)
eagerly waiting for the next part :D

thank u tara for ur lovely comments.it means a lot
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Woww beautiful update👏
Eagerly waiting for next part
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Woww beautiful update👏

Eagerly waiting for next part

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CHAPTER 8: THE TWIST

In some other place,jugni dances with joy in her heart and one lady asks her what happened. 
JUGNI:aaj kuch alag honewali hai.aaj do dil phirse milnewaali hai.undonoka milan honewaali hai lekin kiska sapna aur kiska ankikat banega woh us rabba ki haath mein hai.
IN DARGAH
Gaurav asks for his destiny and opens his eyes and stares at the other side.the whole world stand still for him.he stares at her like there is no one around him other than her.she is praying something with her heart.the tears is continuously flowing from her eyes.he is feeling pain by seeing her tears.but he don't the reason.he wants to hide from the world and sadness around her.he wants to give her all the happiness.at that time,she opens her eyes and stares at him.her reaction changes in every second.she is feeling sad,longing,love,relief,happy and peace.he don't know what to do.he is standing at the same place and staring at her
at this side,heer prays for prem and family's happiness and opens her eyes to see prem standing in front of her.she just imagines the past moments and st:prem usdin jab hum yahan dagah baandrahi thi toh hum apni aanewaali kal keliye manath maangithi.ab aaj bi yahi lagrahe tum meri saamne kadi ho aur mujhe pyaar se dekhrahi ho.abhi bi mujhe mehsoos horaha ki tum sach mein meri saamne kadi ho prem.lekin dar lagraha ki agar mein tume chohoon toh tum gaayab hogayi toh.mereliye ye pal yesahi ruk bi gayi toh zindigi ki saari khushiyaan yesahi jeeloongi isi pal meinhain.mein ab dua karthi hoon ki yeh pal kabhi katame naa ho.
both of them staring at each other for god knows how long.they don't want time to run.suddenly,someone calls heer and she comes out of her trance and glances backwards and gaurav comes out of the trance when she turns back and leaves from there.heer turns back to see there is no one on the other side
she feels sad and goes from there.(KDMHMD starts playing in the background
GAURAV ST:mujhe kya horaha hai.mein yesa kaise kar sakthi hoon.lekin ek pal keliye meine apne aapko khodiya in aankhon mein.yesa laga meri zindigi us aankhon mein hi hai.
at that time,he sees someone is going to fall in the pit .he runs and saves her and says:dhyaan se chaliye aap teekh toh hai
she:thank u and looks up and stares at him shocked and whispers:prem bhai. gaurav does not hear her because he sees her (heer)again and he rushes to her quickly leaving veera in the unbelievable state.
nihal comes to her and asks her what happened
VEERA:prem bhai prem bhai...mein pb ko dekha hai jao nihal doondho usse.ab tak toh yahan tha.kahan chala gaya bhai.
      prem bhai prem bhai...she shots his name and searches around
PREET:kya hua veera. tum chilla kyun rahi ho and family members also joins them
VEERA:woh ..woh main ..main prem bhai ko dekha hai
everyone stares at her shocked
LALITH:veera.tum paagal hogayi ho kya
VEERA:nahi dad.mein sach mein dekha usse.woh ..woh mujhe girne se bachaya aur aur mujhse kaha ki "dhyaanse chaliye  aap teekh toh hai"meine apni khano se suna woh kisiko dekhrahi thi shayad usiki peeche gaya hoga.meine dekha hai.pls prem bhai ko doondhiye
      prem bhai..prem bhai.. and she runs here and there
preet and nihaal and everyone starts searching in the whole dargah.but they don't find him
everyone comes and settles in the same place
LALITH:nahi mila beta.shayad tum kisi aur ko dekha hoga
VEERA:nahi dad.woh prem bhai hai dad.iss jagah sach mein powerful hai dad.yahan pe meine pray kiya ki agar meri pb hothe toh ho meri kadam bi zamin par rakne nahi denge aur dhyan se chalo aur tum teekh ho yesi que poochengi .woh sach mein hogaya hai.heer bhabhi sach kehrahithi prem bhai zinda hai.
preet starts thinking and asks:heer bhabhi kahan hai
now everyone thought about heer and harman:humne toh poora dargah dekhliya lekin heer bhabhi bi kahin nazar nahin aarahi hai
at that time,someone calls gayathri,gayathri turns around and sees her friend
SIMRAN:tum log yahan pe
GAY:tum log yahan.hum pray karne aayithi.veera maa banewaali hai
SIM:woh congratulations.aur yeh mera beta hai sidharth sid. aur ye uska dost virat
GAY:accha and blesses them.she wants to introduce them to her family
but when she turns around only lalith is there.
GAY:arrey yeh log kahan gayi
LALITH:heer ko doondh ne
SIM:heer ko kya hua.woh teekh toh haina
GAY:woh teekh hai.lekin woh kahin nazar nahi aarahi hai
SIM:main bi rukthahoon.anyhow gaurav bi tak nazar nahi aaraha hai.kahan gayi yeh ladka batha nahi
GAY:woh kaun hai
SID:woh mera bf
SIM:woh mera beta hai jaisa sid aur virat hai waise hi gaurav bi
sid smiles at her proudly
SID:haan aunty.mein bi dekhna chathi hoon heer ko,jab bi dekho heer ki baareme baath karahi hai ma ne
GAY:zaroor beta
everyone comes there except preet and says that they don't find her.
BEFORE HALF AN HOUR
heer starts walking aimlessly when she hears some crying voice of a girl,she goes to her and asks what happened?
girl:mera flowers ek bi sale nahi hui ab mein ghar kaise jaldi jaa sakti hoon and starts crying again
HEER:arey rona band karo mein lelungi.teekh hai.
she gives money for full basket and gets some flowers from the basket and asks the girl to give other flowers to someone who doesn't have anything to offer to lord
GIRL:thank u didi
heer leaves from there and gaurav who follows her hears everything and smiles himself.when heer leaves,he also tries to follow,the same girl stops him and offers flowers.
when he offers money,she says:iss phool keliye kisiaur ne dediya toh aap unkeliye dua kariyega chahe toh.
GAURAV:ok and smiles at her and takes the flower basket.
heer and gaurav offers flower to the lord at the same time in the opposite sides
heer:mujhe meri takdir waapas kardijiye.meri prem ko hamesha keliye mujhe dedijiye pls uskebina mein jee nahi saktha hoon aur usse hamesha khush rakhiye
GAURAV:mujhe yeh ehsaas samaj mein nahi aaraha hai.ek pal mein meri poori zindigi badaldiya usne.uski aasu mujhe takleef derahi hai.uski aankhon mein dard aur pareshaamn mujhe pareshaan derahi hai.mein sirf itna chathi hoon ki usse hamesha khush rakhi hai.uski hardua qubool kar dijiyega pls
both of them starts leaving the holy place .when the wind blows and makes the dupata to flow and struck in prem's face(guys imagine railway station dupata scene)but this time he sees her and lost himself in the fragrance.heer is turning her back towards him.but she is feeling prem's presence behind her.she wants to turn but the fear to get it wrong is making her stand still

atlast she turns,the people celebrating some festival in the dargah comes between and they drift apart
she feels sad and walks to river side and gaurav follows her behind
she goes to the river side and recollects the horrible and sweet memories.his confession to her,acceptance of love,everything and starts crying.
suddenly she feels prem's presence again behind her,she stops crying and stands when the wind blows heavily making the dupata to flows on prem.
she turns back for her dupata and sees that the dupatta is covering his face.he removes the dupatta from his face
and she whispers :prem
she closes her eyes and after that someone places hand on her shoulder.she jerks and opens her eyes and sees preet standing there with her dupata
HEER:preet tum
PREET:haan bhabhi kya hua
HEER:kuch nahi.tumne yahamn pe kisi ko dekha hai
PREET:nahi bhabhi.kyun aapne kisiko dekha
HEER:nahi.mujhe yahan se lechalo preet.mujhe abhi isi waqt ghar jaana hai.pls mujhe yahan ek pal bi nahi ruknahe preet suffocate horahi hai.mujhe jaldi yahan se le chalo preet pls and gets restless
PREET :teekh hai bhabhi chaliye.they both leaves from there.gaurav comes out from behind the tree.
when he sees her closing eyes,he hears someone's footsteps and st:agar hum dono ko yesa kisine dekhliya toh shayad uski baareme galath sochengi and  he puts the dupatta near her and hides behind the tree at the end
he sees the dupata which is lying in the ground itself.he takes it and thinks that it is ur memory for me to keep it with myself and goes from there
AT DARGAH
everyone is feeling worried for heer and sid for gaurav
when the cell rings,lalith attends it
lalith:what.itni irresponsible kaise ho sakthi ho.hum yahan itni pareshaan hai aur tum heer ko lekar airport chaligayi
preet:i am sorry dad.bhabhi bahuth pareshaan thi woh sid karahithi ki usse ghar jaana hai issliye meine lekar aagaya.woh mujhe river side par mili thi.
LALITH:ok.tum uska khyaal rakhna.mein ph rakthi hoon
PREET:ek minute dad.mujhe jiju se baath karni hai
LALITH:ek min dethahoon
KIRAN:kya baath hai preet
PREET:jiju aaj dargah pe koi function chalraha hai aur uski videos bi lerahi hai.aap kuch bi kariye mujhe woh video tape chahiye.mein aapko shyam mein video tape ke saath hai milna hoga pls jiju
KIRAN:ok preet.main kartha hoon tum chintha math karo
PREET:ok bye jiju
KIRAN:ok bye and cuts the call.

      aaplog chaliye mujhe kuch kaam hai.mein shaam ko milti hoon
everyone leaves for airport and kiran leaves to get the video-recording
at that time,gaurav comes there and sid asks him where did he disappear.he manages and leaves to the khurana mansion.
kiran then calls preet and informs him that it atleast takes 3 days forthe recording
preet:ok jiju aap pls 3din wahan ruk kar woh tape lekaraaye pls jiju pb keliye
KIRAN:ye kaise baath karahi ho preet yeh hamari fammily prem aur heer keliye karahihoon pls kehaneki koi zaroorat nahi samji.ok mein rakthi hoon
PREET:bye jiju and cuts the call and st:3 din matlab heer bhabhi ki birth day ki din shayad iss birth day ki gift aapko pb miljaye hamesha keliye.
PRECAP:HEER'S BIRTHDAY

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Keerthi 🤗
Wow double update 😎

pg 5  part 7

Wow I love this ch. 😃
aw love the intro scene.😆 Mr. Khurana acted so well,
Simran aunty is cool.
Gauav's frds r so nice.
I llove how Gaurav side and Heer's side planning a trip for Dharga.
In the show - I loved PH in Dharga. They look so pure and angelic in white.
The way they pray is so sweet. It was nice to re visit and imagine that scene.
You wrote so well.
The lil girl and her dialogues are so cute yaar. Love her scene with Heer and Gaurav. :D
Aw Gaurav Heer tying thread scene is just amazing. Love the dialogues. <3


pg 6  part 8
Wow both Heer and Gaurav saw each other! Awesome.
But Heer thinks it's an illusion huh hm
River side scene is beautful, I thought Gaurav and Heer will have a cono. Sigh.
No luck. Preet came for his Bhabhi Aww. Such a caring Devar <3
So Veera is actually carimg for Heer now :o She sure has multiple personalities !
I'm glad she saw Gaurav lol
Preet wants vid - I didn't get this part. He said its for Prem - does he think his PB may hv been to this Dharga? Or is it cuz he heard Veera talking about her seeing Prem?
Anyhow it's going to become clear. Woohoo Heer's B'day in 3 days :D
So Prem left few days before Heer's B'day and now going to return on same day! Cool.
I hope so.

Pre cap is exciting. Waiting to see next ch. Thank you so much. Missed u and ur updates.