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premeer ff kis desh mein hai mera dil updating this sunday

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 6:29am | IP Logged
hi i am keerthi!!! new to this forum i watched KDMHMD recently in utube and addicted to it .
i want to write an ff on our premeer.i am trying to write something for the first time!
so kindly ignore mistakes and feel free to comment.
this ff starts after the death of prem and takes an leap of 2 years.


PROLOGUE

In Juneja's house

Lalit: Gayathri  kal prem ki death ki pooja karni hai,sab taiyaariyan hogayi hai.


Gayathri:haan.lekin mujhe heer ki chinta horaiyi hai.kya isbaar ho maanengi pooja raknekeliye?

Lalit: humne prem ki baare mein in do saal mein kabhi baath nahi ki. wo prem ki death ko accept nahi karna chahthiye, lekin hume prem ki atma shanthi keliye yeh pooja karna padega.
mujhe heer se baath karna padega. PREM IS DEAD ,is sach ko heer accept karna padega.



sry for the ramblings, i really  don't know hindi. i just tried my best to write in hindi so ignore  my mistakes and feel free to post ur comments and opinions to continue this ff
thanks in advance.


Edited by ganeshamsk - 06 February 2015 at 5:03am

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 7:10am | IP Logged
Hi Keerthi Big smile
Welcome to the forum. Nice meeting you. Big smile
So cool you're gonna write on PH wow Cool
So far it looks great.
Sad scene and it automatically reminded me of this episode in show.
You write so well. Big smile
Please do continue.
Thanks for the story. Hug

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 9:14am | IP Logged
CHAPTER 1: HEER'S ENTRY
In Heer's room
Heer is staring at the moon and self  thought:PREM tum kahan ho? ab tho do saal hogayi. mein apni 
 responsibilities  poori kardia hai.bauji ki business sambhala hai.preet bhi ab responsible hogaya hai.harman - maya se  aur preet-meher se shadi karli hai. harman aur bauji ki dooriyan bhi katam hogayi hai. nihal bhai veera ko apna liya. ab sab sath mein hai.maa ka bhi tabhiyath teekh hogaya hai .
         ab tum jaldi apni heer ki paas ajao prem.tumhe maaloom hai,
sabko yehi lagrahe ki tum hum sabse bahooth dur chaligayi ho.lekin mujhe batha hai prem tum zinda ho,tum apni heer ko chodkar hamesha ke liye jaa nahi sakthi prem.lautao prem and starts crying.
 
knock. knock
Heer wipes her tears and opens the door and lalit comes in.
LALIT:mein tumse baath karne aaya hoon beta.kya 2 min le sakthi hoon
HEER:boliye bauji.sab teekh toh hain.
LALIT:kal ka din tume yaad hoga beta. main chahthi hoon ki tum apni zindigi mai aage badna chaiye.
tumari ateet ki baare main nahi palki apne aanewali kal ki baareme soch beta.prem ab zinda  nahi hai.
PREM IS DEAD.is sach ko accept karo aur aage badne ki baareme socho beta.mein tumhe apni bahu nahi palki apni beti maana hai. issliye mein thumare khushi chathi hoon beta.

HEER:bauji mujhe maaf kijiye.mereliye prem zinda hai aur ho zaroor aayega. aapko patha hai bauji mene prem ke liye bachpan se hi intezar kiya tha.tab usko mein teekh se jaanthi tak bhi nahi hai lekin uske liye 14 saal meine intezar kiya hai. kabhi kabhi vishwas bhi utgaya aur yeh bhi sochne lagi ki shayad woh mereliye bani nahi hai. 
         lekin woh wapas aaya sirf mereliye aur mujhse bahot pyaar kartha hai .mere humsafar bana hai.maa hamesha bolrahithi ki rab jodiyon ko upar se banakar bejtha hai.mereliye woh prem ko  beja hai aur mein sirf aur  sirf uskeliye bani hoon. agar mein uskeliye bani hoon toh woh mujhe chodkar nahi jaa sakti hai. meri dil ko bata yeh ki woh teekh hai.mein uskeliye intezaar karunga.tab tak karunga jab tak woh nahi aayenge woh meri zindigi ki aakir din kyu na ho.

LALIT:bas beta. teekh hai. tum kal meeting keliye delhi jao aur  roshni ko saath lekar jao.
ab sojao beta. bahut raath hogayi yeh.
lalit leaves
HEER : prem jaldi aajao prem. good night prem and caresses prem's face on the photo.



Edited by ganeshamsk - 29 December 2014 at 9:16am

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 9:54am | IP Logged
Wow thanks dear for updating so quickly :D
rmotional convo betw Bauji and Heer Aww
Heer is very positive but family thinks she is in denial. This is similar to the episode :)
Who's Roshni I wonder!
Exciting Heer is going on a trip :D
She will meet Prem there hai na? Hope so :D
Pls continue when u can. * hugs*

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 10:40am | IP Logged
CHARACTER SKETCH:
PREM JUNEJA/GAURAV SHARMA:same as in the show
HEER MAAN: same as in the show
otherr characters:
siddharth khurana:best friend of gaurav important cupid between premeer
roshni patel:best friend and secretary of heer
sanjana rampal:loves prem/gaurav sis of rishab rampal
rishab rampal:villain of the story
virat sharma:bestie of sid and gaurav

others are same as in the show

index
chapter 1-page1
chapter 2-page2
chapter 3-page2
chapter 4-page3
chapter 5-page3
chapter 6-page4
chapter 7-page5
chapter8-page6
chapter9-page7


Edited by ganeshamsk - 24 January 2015 at 11:22am

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AASUS

Wow thanks dear for updating so quickly :D
rmotional convo betw Bauji and Heer Aww
Heer is very positive but family thinks she is in denial. This is similar to the episode :)
Who's Roshni I wonder!
Exciting Heer is going on a trip :D
She will meet Prem there hai na? Hope so :D
Pls continue when u can. * hugs*

thank u so much dear for ur comments. it means a lot to me aasus.SmileSmile 

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Keerthi Ty for character sketch :D
Ur so sweet. Very excited to read next part :D
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
Hey Keerthi Smile Welcome to the forum Big smile Wowww awosome start Clap love it... eagerly waiting for the next part pls update soon :) :D

Edited by tarannum6 - 29 December 2014 at 11:02pm

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