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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Kiaraah

Wow Arpi!  Read all the parts together , two and a half to be exact  ๐Ÿ˜†  Guess what, it was awesome! I'm not  surprised , coming from a fab writer like you...

yeh toh hona hi tha!   Awww .. thank you ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
You have described their feelings so well. I could empathise with Kalpi and her pain... she has learned  not to keep hurting every time her mother choose Pakhi over her. But the pain of losing her love was unbearable,  still she kept up the facade of being happy just to show herself that she's strong.  That Raghav means nothing to her... 

Raghav on the other hand wants Kalpi all for himself but wants revenge from Kapoors as well. He's in a dilemma as to whether to listen to his heart or his mind. 

Loved the twist you gave in the revenge, something the dumb CVs won't ever get.  Liked even Pakhi in this.  Warna bechara Sammy akela hi reh jaata. ... ๐Ÿ˜†  For change uss bechaare love guru ko bhi koi mila๐Ÿ˜†

Eagerly waiting for the second half of the story. Update soon buddy !  This was a rocking story! ๐Ÿ‘

Once again , wishing you a happy new year!  Same 2 u.. (jaldi wish kiya maine๐Ÿฅฑ๐Ÿ˜†)


 


Thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: rani214

Read all 3 parts...wow loved it

Loved d way u expressed  kalpi's pain she felt ...been second choice of her aai n d person she loved also dn't care for her n choose pakhi over her
Loved d way u showed dat vitthal could see n understand kalpi's pain
Lik to see tadapta hua Raghav singhaniya๐Ÿ˜†
Raghav's pain n his dilemma was well potrayed... raghav wanted to tak revenge n also wanted to b wit kalpi 4evr...nw I love this raghav not majboor singhaniya๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Wat a twist dear...Sammy n pakhi ...ab isse kehte hai revenge ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
Pls ups last part soon๐Ÿ˜Š


same pinch.. tadapta hua Raghav singhaania๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
glad u liked it๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: sunyy

Great update ๐Ÿ˜›

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Thanks a lot๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: lolor

lovely... ๐Ÿ˜ณ


thank you๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: sumasridhar

Super


thanks a lot๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: charvi3

Awesome  update appy๐Ÿ˜›


Thanks a lot charvi๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: zindgidilse

Phir se๐Ÿคฃ update multiname...u will not change ๐Ÿ˜†

raghav promotion from raghav sir to sir to IDIOT๐Ÿคฃ Mindblowing. isse bolte hai promotion๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

yaad agayi story...thank god ๐Ÿฅฑ๐Ÿ˜†
flashback ka first para padne ke baad ๐Ÿ˜ณ raghav confession nd then decide to get engage with pakhi, kalpi pretending that she didn't affected by his decision nd been strong , raghav jealousy with kalpi's normal behaviour and atlast raghav ka sammy paakhi ke beech se peeche hatna... Done..see i remember ๐Ÿ˜† (---๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ sharp memory.. 

what was that multiname..๐Ÿ˜† Brahmastra..maao  ki maa๐Ÿคฃ mein thodi paagala ho gayi thi.. but mast tha na.. and kamla toh hai hi.. maaon ki maa๐Ÿคฃ
Nd there after beginning of next paragraph..๐Ÿ˜† "Hi raghav baba"., " Ha" kabse " Hi "ho gaya .๐Ÿคฃ..when this kamla bai become literate.๐Ÿคฃ tune bola tab notice kiya.. it was meant to be ha..๐Ÿคฃ
raghav text to kalpi "sweetheart",๐Ÿ˜ณ

hayiii...hayiii๐Ÿ˜†(---. mera hayii...๐Ÿ˜ณ
,befizool ki ziddi.,๐Ÿ˜ณ.i just love this dialogue of raghav .๐Ÿ˜ณ

raghav should get punched by kalpi...i wish... jitne kaand kiye he deserved it.. chal kisi aur ff mein usko zhaapad toh zaroor lagwaaongi๐Ÿ˜†
first kiss...๐Ÿ˜ณ ...
kalpi sobbing๐Ÿ˜ญ
moon star talk.,loved it multiname...๐Ÿ‘
second kiss...๐Ÿ˜ณ Third kiss โ˜บ๏ธ

aa haana..my comment is incomplete without song dedication..so here it is.,

jumme ki raat hai 
chumme ki baat hai.
aalla bachaye mujhe 
tere vaar se...
 ta na na na na ta na na na.,


ohhoo.. song dedication

ab mujhe yeh confession funny lag raha hai.. rofl se bharaa comment๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
thank you rofly๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Aru18

awesome appy

its end was so so so good..
wish we get something like this ema..
i love this raghav he choose kalpi over revenge..
love u for this beautiful TS..๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Thank you so much aru!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: priya_remix

One update and 3 kisses is not at all overboard when its RagNa!!!! 

Loved it!!!! It was awesome!


Thank so much pri๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: sweet1308

Really lovely how rag convinced kalpi with the kisses

Update soon


Thanks a lot..๐Ÿ˜ƒ
oye its over..๐Ÿ˜† no update soon๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Beautiful update
Kalpi ignoring her idiot calls and text was awesome ๐Ÿ˜†
I like that Raghav use the mommy card to get what he want ;)
And his way of convincing Kalpi of his love was amazing
Finally RagNa are together forever...


Thanks a lot.. glad u liked it..๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Kiaraah

Beautiful update. ... With the three kisses it was mind blowing. ... 

Perfectly understood why Kalpi wanted to make sure that she will always be his priority. ... Her whole life, she was the second choice for her mom... So its natural to be a bit apprehensive. ...


Wish the ema creative had half the brain you have and turned out the story this way... I guess it was  foolish of me to expect it from them...


Ema ke cvs had no brains to use.. pathetic mean matlabi log๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก]

Anyaways.. glad u liked the ts๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ