niraj ff:falling in love-note pg 10 - Page 4

Nice update

Originally posted by: Nany

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Plzurrr..aafterall u write so well..keep writing more
Ty for sending PM ...u sent to everyone na wenever u update?

hey it was nt at all boring...it was good

loved d fight scene of viraj

cousins convo with nishu

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Plzurrr..aafterall u write so well..keep writing more
Ty for sending PM...u sent to everyone na wenever u update?

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Originally posted by: priasr

Nice update

Plz continue soon😊

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thanks dear...
happy new year

Originally posted by: Nany

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ohh kieee...thats so swt of u ...ty
i thought how all d writers send PMs to d readers u too send to everyone..bt itss okiee 
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part:4

ACADAMY:

nisha enter in acadamy(st):yaar...viraj sir ke saamne kese jaungi...wht will he think about me?? its all because of priyanka ...she always put me in big prblms...how will I face viraj sir...nyway nishu nothing is tough ...go n give this file to viraj sir...


n she knock to viraj's office door:

viraj:yes,come in

nisha:sir ye file,

viraj(look at her):miss nisha...


nisha:yes sir,

viraj:r u ok??

nisha:yaa sir ..I m OK(n she leave)

viraj:miss.nisha hamare bare me kya soch rahi hogi...unke cousins ne unko sab bata diya hoga...that's why she is behaving so strange...its all because of priyanka...I have to tell her to stop her nonsense...

viraj goes to meet priyanka she is in practice area:


nisha:piyu tu naa mere hath ka maar khayegi kabhi...

pri(checking her guns):offo...bhabhi what happen??
? itne maarne kaatne par kyu utar aayi ho???


nisha:first na tum ye muje bhabhi kahna bandh karo..
.

pri(with sad face):kyu???aapko me bhabhi kahu vo aapko pasand nahi he kya??


nisha:piyu esi baat nahi he...samaj tu...


pri:kya samaju me...I m not that much start bhabhi that I will understand wht u both r talking about...why u both r not confessing to each other...I just only know that u both like each other..u both r made for each other...

nisha:piyu bas kar...


pri:kyu stop karu me??? aap nahi pasand karte viraj Bhai ko aap hi bolo??

nisha:piyu u want to listen na then listen yaa I love ur Bhai...but its only one sided love...u r Bhai didn't see me as love...he only think about me as good friend... n why he will love girl like me...I m not like other girls...muje to thick se girl jese ready bhi nahi hona aata...naa hi me utni khubsurat hu...then why will he like me???

pri:ye sab aapko kisne kaha???Bhai ne khuad kaha ki u r not perfect for him...n u r not beautiful...n all that nonsense??

nisha:nahi...vo

pri:vo ...vo kya????u both r idiots...why u r thinking that Bhai will say all things...whatever u say is not thought of Bhai...its all the thing whatever u think about urself ...no need to think about what Bhai will say...just go n tell him ur love for him...

nisha:priyanka...its not that much easy...

pri:OK...fyn...if u don't want to go to Bhai...n so its ok...pls don't go...n yaa aap nahi cahati na ki me aapko bhabhi bulau...then fine I wll not call u bhabhi...happy...

nisha(edge to cry):priyanka...

priyanka(crying):I m sorry I m forcing u...but believe me whatever I m saying is true...u both r made for each other...n u both love each other also...but don't know why u both r stopping ur self on silly things...anyway I m done...bye n sorry for hurting u both n she leave

nisha(cry):oh piyu...how will I tell u..kese samjau tuje...tuje lagata he me tumhare Bhai ke liye perfect hu...but tumhare Bhai kya sochate he mere bare me vo bhi dekhana chahiye na...ese forcefully riste nahi banate...u have to understand piyu...n she leave

VIRAJ COME FROM HIS HIDEN PLACE WITH MOIST EYES:

viraj:miss nisha aap itna hi samaj payi he hamare bare me???ham esa nahi sochate aapke bare me...kash aap ek baar sirf ek baar hamse puchati ki ham kya sochate he aapke bare me...ham puri kitab likh dete aap par...par koi baat nahi galati hamari bhi he...hame hamare dill ki baat aapko bata deni cahiye thi...I m sorry miss nisha...ham bht jald aapse hamare dill ki baat kah denge...ham kya sochate he aapke bare me vo kahenge...n he leave from that place...


after some time...

viraj:saurav...what is this???go n call miss nisha immediately... what's all this yaar...

saurav: yaa sir ...n he call nisha...

nisha:yes sir,what happen???

viraj:saurav u pls go n miss nisha u pls sit hear...n tell me what is this...???

nisha:what sir???

viraj:oh u created prblm n now u r asking me question??? very good... n he gives her a file..look at this file...u didn't complete it...so pls complete it...

nisha:but sir...

viraj:no miss nisha,no excuse today,u have to complete this file and vo bhi hamare saamne beth ke...nahi to fir se aap chocolate Ramayana start kar dengi...so seat here n do ur work...

nisha:par sir...

viraj:miss nisha...continue ur work...

(ITS ALREADY 2 HOURS...NISHA IS ARRANGING FILES...N VIRAJ SITTING INFRONT OF HER N LOOKING AT HER WITH MISCHIEVOUS SMILE N NISHA FEELING AWKWARD BY HIS ACTION)

nisha(st):ye viraj sir ko kya ho gaya he aaj??? ese smile kar kar ke kyu dekh rahe he muje??

nisha:sir...its already 6 ...kya ham aab ghar jaa sakte he...kal file complete kar denge...

viraj:no miss nisha aaj hi file complete karni he...

nisha(making face):OK sir...

viraj:miss nisha pls hamare liye ek coffee banake laaie na pls...hamare sir me bht dard ho raha he...

nisha(worriedly): kya huaa sir????ek minute ham aate he coffee lekar...n she come with coffee..

viraj :thanks miss nisha,n take coffee mug from her hand...but he cried in pain...oh miss nisha...its hurting so much...

nisha:pls sir...pls aap ye file rakho...I will press ur head...u just relax...n sit comfortably on ur chair...n nisha start to press his head...

viraj(smiling to himself):miss nisha ...

nisha:yaa sir,how u feeling now???

viraj:amazing...

nisha(come in front of him n scold him): itni der tak kaam karte raho ge to yahi hoga na...har vakt kaam kaam or kaam...aap thoda to rest karo...itna kaam karne ki jarurat kya he aur aap...

viraj(come near her n put his finger on her lips):shhh...miss nisha aap kitna bolti ho???

nisha(shock by his sudden behavior n also shock by his closeness):viraj si...

viraj:shhh...itna bolti kyu ho aap???

nisha(try to move from him):sir vo...

viraj:aap itna darti kyu he hamse??? aapko bataya tha na hamne ham ek aam insane he aur ham kaatate nahi he...

nisha(smile):pata he...

viraj: to fir aap hamse itna darti kyu he???

nisha:nothing...n move from his closeness...

viraj:miss nisha aap jaa sakti he aab...jaaiee...ghar its to late...

nisha:i OK I wll leave...but what will u do now???

viraj:nothing...what can I do??? I wll seat here with my lonlyness..

nisha(look at him ): why u seat here...come let's go...we r going...

viraj:where??

nisha:aapka akelapan dur karne...

viraj:but????

nisha(hold his hand):oh come on na sir...chalate he n she drag him with beautiful smile...

n this time its viraj's turn to lost in dooba dooba mode(sorry guys viru pe dubi dubi to accha nahi lagta so its dooba dooba mode)

dooba dooba dooba...

aab khud me dooba dooba...

muje ho gaya kya koi to bata...

ye jaane buje raaste he sare mujpe hasate...

kyu akshar ho jata hu laapata...

viraj:miss niha,chaliye ham apni car me jate he...

nisha:no way sir...aaj to aap ko hamari scooty pe chalate hai...

viraj:miss nisha,aaj nahi pls...

nisha:no sir ,aaj hi...

viraj(agree with her):OK...but only one condition pe miss nisha...

nisha:kya sir??

viraj:scooty me chalaunga...

nisha:OK sir...

(N THEY LEAVE ON SCOOTY)

viraj:miss nisha ham kaha jaa rahe he?

nisha:bas sir aap chalate rahiye...me aapko direction batati rahungi...

viraj:OK miss nisha...n suddenly viraj stop scooty...n nisha fall on him n tightly hold him from shoulder...

nisha:sirr..sir..wht happen??achanak break kyu lagayi?

viraj:nothing miss nisha kuch aa gaya tha raaste me...n yaa pls hold me tight ...gir jaati to aap...

nisha(st):kese girti me??aap the na saath me...jab aap sath ho to muje kya ho sakta he...

viraj:miss nisha ..u r listening or not??? hold me tight...

nisha:yaa ...yaa sir...n put her hand on his shoulder...

viraj:chale miss nisha n they leave

AND AFTER SOMETIME THEY REACH TO ORPHANAGE:AND SOME CHILDREN COME RUNNING TOWARDS THEM:

children: nisha didi,nisha Didi...aap kya liye hamare liye??

nisha:aapke lie...aapke lie ham laye he inhe (n she point her finger towards viraj)

children (laugh):inka ham kya karenge???

nisha:inka naam kya he pata he aapko??? inka naam he viraj sir...

children : hello viraj bhaiyaa

viraj:hello baccho

nisha:aapko pata he aapke viraj bhaiyya aaj bada lonely lonely feel kar rahe ho...so ham kya kare jinse unka mood accha ho??

children (drag viraj n nisha):aaj aap dono hamare sath khelenge,aur hamare sath dance bhi karenge...

and after they children start to play games with viraj n nisha...

siya(one child from orphanage):viraj bhaiyya ...now its ur turn..come on eyes pe patti baantho...

viraj:oh mera turn aab...OK chalo n he start to play...

nisha :come on sir...I m here ..catch me n she run n laugh..

siya n all others start to chase viraj n laugh:viraj bhaiyya we r here n run...

nisha(laugh):viraj sir I m here ...catch n before she can complete her sentence viraj tightly hold her from waist n jump n laugh in joy...

viraj(happily): miss nisha hamne aapko pakad hi liya...ham jit gaye...yeee...

nisha(looking at him):yaa sir aapne hame pakad hi liya...aur aap jit gaye n smile at him...

viraj(now look at her n lost in her eyes still holding her):yaa...n they come out from their day dreaming hearing kids voice...

viraj:thank u so much kids...aap sab ki vajah se ham ne aaj bht enjoy kiya...n he give chocolates to them...

siya:viraj bhaiyya aap fir kab hamse milne aaoge??

viraj:oh princess...ham aapse promise karte he...har weekend par ham aapse Milne aayenge...aur sath me aapki nisha Didi ko bhi layenge...n they beads bye to them n leave...

nisha:viraj sir kya ham aur ek place pe jaa sakte he...

viraj:aur kaha Jana he miss nisha??

nisha:chaliye na sir...n after some time they reach to park but its locked ..

viraj:miss nisha ye park to bandh he...chaliye kal aate he...

nisha:are sir park bahar se bandh he...aur ye ek chota sa lock nisha gangwal ko rock nahi sakta n she climb on wall of park...

viraj:miss nisha what r u doing??? niche utariye...

nisha:are kya sir ek choti si wall se dar rahe ho...aap bhi as jaie...

viraj:no miss nisha ham esa kuch nahi karne wale he...aur kya aap ko bandh ghar ,bandh park me kyu jati ho??

nisha:sir khule ghar hoga,park hoga to usme to koi bhi jaa sakta he...agar bandh park me jaye to baat hui...aur hame ese kaam karne me bada maza aata he...

viraj:ha hame pata he...isliye aap hamare ghar me ghus gayi thi...

nisha:are jaldi aao sir varna watchman aa jaega...n then she jump from the wall and enter in park...

viraj:miss nisha...n after then he also enter in park..

viraj:miss nisha aap kab sudharegi...esi jaga thick nahi he...yaha koi aata jaata bhi nahi he...

nisha(with sad voice):koi nahi aata yaha pe isliye to me yaha aati hu..

viraj:MATLAB??

nisha:MATLAB ye ki hame is jaga me sukun milta he...sabse dur...sari prblms se dur...kuch vakt yaha akele bethane se accha lagta he...(n she seat on grass n viraj seat beside her)

viraj:hmmm...aapko pata he aaj ham bht akela feel kar rahe the...pata nahi kyu aaj dil me ek dard sa that...but aapki vaja se ham ne aaj bht enjoy kiya...so thank you...

nisha:usme thank you ki kya baat he...me bhi jab akela mahsoos karti hu apne aap ko to vahi jaati hu...vaha baccho ke sath accha lagta he...

viraj(smile):aap aur akela mahsois karti he???itni badi circus family me aap akela kese mahsoos kar sakti ho??

nisha:sir aapke aaspass log he iska matlab ye to nahi na ki aap akele nahi ho...me pichale 8 saal se akeli hi thi...puri meri family thi mere sath...but phir bhi akeli this...kabhi kabhi naa bht khalipan sa lagta tha...or..

viraj:I can understand ur pain miss nisha...hamara bhi kuch esa hi...

nisha:aapki family ke bare me kuch bataie...

viraj:kya bataye aap ko hamari family ke bare me...papa aur choti bahen this hamari Jo ek accident me unka death ho gaya...aur ma pata nahi hame kyu lekin hame akela chodke chali gayi...aaj bhi ham unko dhundh rahe he...kash vo hame jaldi se mill jaye...

nisha:aapki maa aapko jaldi se mill jayegi viraj sir...BTW gayatri bua aur piyu aapke sath hi rahte he??

viraj:ha ham unke sath hi rahte he...or uski bhi ek vajah he...priyanka...

nisha:aap piyu se bht pyar karte he na???

viraj(smile):haa ham aapki piyu se bht pyar karte he...hamari jaan he vo...harkate thodi baccho wali he..but dill se bht acchi he...

nisha(smile):haa pata he...

viraj:BTW uski taraf se ham aapse maafi maangate he

nisha:maafi...aur mujse...kyu??

Viraj:vo aapko bahot pareshan karti he na isliye...

Nisha(smile): vo hame kabhi pareshan nahi karti...she is like jwalu to me...n I love her...so no need to say sorry...


Viraj:miss nisha...aap sabse alag ho...

Nisha:pata he...baki girls ki tara me nahi hu...

Viraj:no miss nisha...u misunderstood me...I m talking about ur nature,u r way to talk,u r inner beauti,n u r way to...u r way to...n he stop in between...


Nisha(look at him with full love):and what sir...

Viraj: n way u love...

Nisha(look at him in shock): love...agar me kisi se pyar karti hi nahi to aap ko kese pasand aayega hamare pyar karne ka tarika...


Viraj(smile at her):aap kuch kahti nahi iska matlab ye thodi ki hame kuch nahi pata chalega...hame aapki aankho me dikhata he...


Nisha(in shock):sir its to late ..we have to leave now...n she get up...but viraj hold her hand...n make her seat again...

Viraj:kuch der bethate he na miss nisha n look in her eyes n nisha can't say no to this beautiful eyes...

Nisha(slowly):how u r feeling now???

Viraj:jab mere sath aap jesi company ho to ham kesa feel kar sakte he??

Nisha:kesa sir???

Viraj(smile):ekdam relax...I m feeling much better now...n thanks for being there for me when I need someone...when I m alone...


Nisha(slowly): me to hamesha hi aapke sath hu...sirf aapke dekhane ki hi der he...

Viraj:miss nisha kuch kaha kya aapne??

Nisha:yaa I only say that I m always with you...

Viraj:thanks miss nisha...aab chale kya???

Nisha:yaa...n she try to get up but then find her hand in virajs hand...sir...

Viraj(look at their hands):oh miss nisha sorry...n they get up n come outside of the park...

Viraj:miss nisha ...ham aapko jaldi se ghar chod dete he phir ham bhi ghar jate he...hame bahot joro se bhookh lagi he...


Nisha:OK...but aap ghar jake khayenge kya??banayega kaun???raat ke 10 baje he...

Viraj: oh god miss nisha...its so late...10baj gaye he...kya aap ke dadaji aap ko daatenge nahi??

Nisha(laugh):agar dadaji ghar pe hote to ham itni der bahar hote kya???

Dadaji aur mera pura circus bahar gaya he...ghar pe sirf maa aur jwalu hi he...BTW aapne bataya nahi ki aap kya khayenge ghar pe jaa ke????


Viraj:pata nahi...kuch bana lenge khud se hi???

Nisha:khud banane ki kya jarurat he???

Viraj(smile):miss nisha hamare pass aapke pass he vesi pyari maa nahi he...Jo hamare jate hi hame ekdam hot food serve kare...


Nisha(look at him n try to read his face):aapki maa nahi he to kya huaa...meri maa to he na...aaj aap mere sath dinner karoge...

Viraj:no miss nisha...ese baar baar aapke ghar aana thick nahi he...

Nisha:viraj sir...vese to aap muje kahte ho ki me bht bolti hu but aaj aap kya kar rahe ho...pls aap aaj mere sath hi dinner karoge...

Viraj:no miss nisha...pls...

Nisha:come on sir... Itna kya soch rahe ho n she drag him with her...n they both enter in gangwal house...

Nisha:maaa...maa...jaldi aao yaarr...

Lakshmi:aa rahi hu beta...itna chilla kyu rahi he???

Nisha:maaa...jaldi aao...

Viraj:miss nisha...calm down...kuck kaam kar rahi hongi aapki mummy...thoda to sabr rakhiye...

Lakshmi(enter in room): kya he nishu...tu itna chillati kyu he???Teri office me bhi esa karti hogi na??? Ese chillana bandh karde beta nahi to na tere viraj sir tuje nikal denge office se...


Viraj(smile):Mrs.gangwal ham miss nisha ko acadamy she kabhi bahar nahi nikalenge...

Lakshmi(shock):viraj sir..me nishu...

Viraj(laugh):mummy ki nishu...lakshmi relax...


Lakshmi:vo sorry...vo sorry...aap yaha...ham aate hai pani leke aur voo..

Nisha(enter in room):relax lakshmi,sir aaj tea party karne nahi aaye hai...sir aaj yaha dinner karne aaye he...so pls jladi Se table lagao na...muje aur viraj sir ko bahot bhookh lagi he...

Lakshmi:are pahle batana tha na ki viraj sir bhi aane wale hai to me jyada dishes banati...tu na nishu last tym pe hi bomb fodti he...tu naa har baar esa karti he...tu na...


Nisha,viraj: relax lakshmi

Viraj:aapko koi special dishes banane ki jarurt nahi he...mrs.gangwal...vese bhi kahte he ki maa ki hatho me jaadu hota he to aapne Jo bhi dish banai hogi vo ese hi special ban jaegi...

Lakshmi:esa he to thick he...nishu tu jaa...ja ke jwalu ko bhi dinner ke liye bula le...uska bhi dinner baki he...

Nisha:yes,maa

Lakshmi:viraj sir,pls aap aaie...n hv ur seat...

ON DINING TABLE:

nisha,jwalu,viraj r having dinner:

Lakshmi:jwalu beta palak paneer le...

Jwalu:no muje nahi chahiyae...

Lakshmi:viraj sir pls aap bhi lijie...aap gajar ka halwa bhi lijie...aur pls sabji ki aalu bhi lijie...

Nisha,jwalu:aaloo ki sabji...n laugh...

Viraj(smile):Mrs.gangwal ham le lenge...pls aap bhi dinner ke lijie beth Jaie...

Lakshmi:no no...pls aap finish karo ...me ramesh ke sath kha lungi...


Jwalu:viraj sir aapse ek baat puchu??

Viraj(smile):jarur puchiye...lekin pahle hame

Sir bulana bandh kijie...ham aapke sir to nahi he na...??

Jwalu:haa vo to he...to kya aap ko bhaiyaa bulau...

Viraj:jarur...aap hame bhaiyya bula sakti he...

Jwalu(slowly):viraj bhaiyya aapko ek secret batau kya nishu bro ke bare me???

Viraj:aapke nishu bro ka bhi koi secret he???

Jwalu:ofcaurce he ...

Viraj:kya he jaldi bataie...

Nisha:jwalu kya baate kar rahi he...khana kha chup chap...

Jwalu(make faces):yaa nishu bro...

Jwalu:ye nishu bro na hamesha esa hi karti he...hamesha chup kara deti he...

Viraj:mere sath bhi esa karti he

Jwalu:kya karti he??

Viraj(slowly to jwalu):aapki nishu bro muje bhi unki aankho se chup kara deti he n smile looking at nisha...


Nisha(smile at him):maa viraj sir ko paalak paneer de na???

Lakshmi:are viraj...beta lo na...paalak paneer lo or gajar ka halawa lijie...pls

Viraj,nisha n jwalu look at her with shock...

Nisha,jwalu:beta???????

Lakshmi(shock):are blabbering ...are ha galati se bol diya na ...aur vese bhi beta hi bola he kuch aur thoda hi bola he na ... He na sir viraj...I mean. I mean viraj sir...

Viraj(smile):aap ne kuch galat nahi kaha ...aur vese bhi aapne beta bulaya to aachha laga hame...so aap hame beta bula sakti he...Mrs.gangwal

Lakshmi:OK aapko beta to bula sakti hu but ek shart pe...

Viraj(smile):aap sach me miss nisha ki hi mummy he...OK shart bataie...

Lakshmi: shart ye hai ki aap muje Mrs.gangwal nahi bulaoge...bht ajeeb lagta he...

Viraj:oh OK...to me aapko kya bulau...lakshmi aunty bulau kya...lekin aap to miss nisha ki sister lagti ho to aunty to nahi bula sakta...

Nisha:viraj sir...

Lakshmi:meri nishu jealous ho rahi he...

Viraj:OK ham aapko aunty hi bulaunga...n thanks for the yummy food...


Lakshmi:always welcome...

Viraj:OK...aunty,miss nisha...n my sweet little sister...bye...I hv to go now...its to late...

Lakshmi,jwalu:bye..

Lakshmi:viraj..

Viraj:yes aunty??

Lkshmi:aap agali baar jab aaye to muje pahle se bata dena...aap ki favourite dishes banaungi...

Viraj :OK aunty,thanks...bye

Nisha:maa me viraj sir ko bahar tak chod ke aati hu...

Lakshmi:OK nishu...

Viraj:thanks miss nisha...

Nisha:for what???

Viraj:for coming in my life...n smile...

Viraj:miss nisha aapne hamari jindagi badal Di he...aapki vajah se hamara har ek din khushiyo se bhar jata he...thanks ...n he hug nisha...

Nisha(shock by his sudden action):its OK sir...

Viraj(embarrassed by his action):sorry miss nisha...chalo bye...I m leaving now...

Nisha:bye viraj sir...

N in night viraj n nisha both r dreaming about each other...

Dil thoda nadan he thoda sayana he...


Raheta pareshan khamkha...


Apni hi baato ka dushaman he raato ka...


Dil le ke chodega ye meri Jaan...


Baheka huaa..laheka huaa anjan saa ye dill


Khud ban gaya khud ke liye dil ye badi muskil ...

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