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MaNan TS- Jealousy-Part 3B-pg 5 (Page 2)

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 6:47am | IP Logged
Nice one.
Beautifully written.
Do write more.
Want read about jealous Manik.
U shld make this into a 2 shot or FF.
Its a treat to read your OS/FF

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Jealous manik kitne din ho gaye yaar. loved u for writing this.
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 7:31am | IP Logged
Wow double dhamaka of Jealousy ... Beautiful ... Written very well :)
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
Thanks a lot everyone.
Planing to make this into a TS :)
Will update the 2nd part soon :D
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
Like really?She really thinks I'm going to be jealous? I'm never going to jealous.
Though I knew I was fooling myself by telling so,I wasn't ready to admit that i was jealous.
Yes,I'm jealous.But never the less I'm not going admit it in fornt of her.
And that loser!!urgghhh.I HATE HIM.
Suddenly I heard a giggle.
I truned back to see her all giggling, laughing and smiling with that loser.
I felt like choking Abhi to death.Before I could do so,there she was choking me to death,Soha.
Her hands on shoulder yet again which got me all irritated but I had put on fake smile.
"You know baby..."She started. I hardly heard what she told because I was busy looking at my ex spot.
I saw her looking at me.This time i could not see jealousy or anger in her eyes.
she was smiling looking at me.The 'you are falling into your own trap' smile.
after a few seconds she looked away and started to talk to that loser again.
"This is not happening..my Nandu"I mumbled.
"Kya?"Soha asked still sticking to me.
God.I had enough I have to get rid of this Soha.She is irritating,very irritating.
In the parctice room while Fab5 practiced.Our so called manager was sitting and listing to us.But she had a constant smile on her face.A smile with which she tried teasing.
Gone.My concentration had gone.
"Guys I need a break." I siad.
We took a break.
Mukti,Alya and Dhruv went to the canteen.
Suddenly I heard her laugh hard.
"What happened Nandini?"Cabir asked.
She looked at me and all of a sudden Cabir started laughing too.
I turned back and saw Soha.Oh my god.Not again.
Surely I had fallen into my own trap.
Trying to make Nandini jealous ,I have landed in a place from where I don't know how i can get out.
*****
So this wad the 2nd part.
Hope u all like it.
Maybe dis may have a 3rd part.
If so will update soon

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
plss update a long one...its too short...btw its awesome update...
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
awesome ...poor Manik...fas giya khud hi...update soonSmileplz
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
Smileawsome...
poor manik...
continue soon...

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