Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan


Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan
Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan

MaNan TS- Jealousy-Part 3B-pg 5

ToralRas Senior Member

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 3:08am | IP Logged

Well,though I was the one who walked away,now i could feel the little spark of jealousy inside me whenever i saw him with Soha.But being Nandini i wasn't ready to except that i was jealous.
Soha.I did like her.She was fun,But when she was around him she was the one I hate the most.
I kept thinking about this looking out of the window.
"Nandu...collage nahi jana hai kya?"chachi asked as she got my lunch box.
"Hmmm..." I got ready and left for collage.
As soon as I entered collage I saw Soha's hand on his cheek 
Well,I was burning with anger and jealousy.
"Nandu.."Abhi called out as he stood next to me.
Abhi,now a really good friend of mine with whom i shared almost everything.He  knew that was jealous but dint know the reason.
I kept looking at Soha and him.Well,stareing at them.
Abhi looked at them then at me and smiled.
"Hmm...well Nandu..who is that girl?"he asked with a tease.
"You know what? You don't have to tease...and that girl..she is Soha."
"Nandu..to start with I'm not teasing you..and who Soha?"He asked putting his hand on my shoulder.
Now I looked at them I realiaed he was looking at Abhi and me with a disgusted look.Was it jeaously?well,I don't care.
"Whatever Abhi! Soha is Mr. Khurana's daughter.
"Who Mr.Khurana?" He asked.
 I took his hands of my shoulder and gave him a do-you-really-think-I'm-going-to- answer-so-many-of-your-qoustion look.
I was walking away but I slipped,again.well,after joining this collage I have lost count of how many times I slipped.
But fortunately there was always someone to save me and this time it was Abhi.
I smiled at him and got back on my feet.
"Be Careful.Catch you around,gotta go.Bye!"He said.
Suddenly I felt someone holding my arms tight.I turned around and it was him.
Before I could tell something he pulled me closer.
"You think you'll do all this and just get away?you think being close to that loser will make me jealous?well you are worng."He said.He left my hand and went away.
It took me sometime to understand what exactly had happened.But when i did i had a smile.
I realised I did care if he was jealous. Though he denied that he was jealous.I knew he was.
Now it was time for Manik Malhotra to be jealous l.
Oh my god this is going to be so much fun.

Hey all!hope you all are doing good.
After a long time I'm here with a MaNan OS,which now has become a TS :)
I updated through phone.so pls forgive the spelling mistakes.
Hope you all like it.

Edited by ToralRas - 25 January 2015 at 10:00pm

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_keertu_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 3:14am | IP Logged
it was reaaly a good one!!
nd nandhu is jealous of soha but he is ready to make manik jealous!!LOL
do write more..
Humzy IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 3:22am | IP Logged
awsm os
loved it
very nicely written
ToralRas Senior Member

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Posts: 314

Posted: 29 December 2014 at 3:29am | IP Logged
@_keertu_ and @Humzy -Thanks a lot guys.
nil_nil Senior Member

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 3:31am | IP Logged
Awesome do write more
1d_kisses Goldie

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 3:38am | IP Logged
Tarss gai this mein manik ke jealousy wale os ke liye...
Big wala huggie to u
Pls continue soon ...
I love jealous baba a lot
nujhatt Senior Member

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 3:54am | IP Logged
__Aarti__ IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Hey this was amazing ...loved it.
can u plsss continue it and make it into a two shot. plsss

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