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MG ff Bleeding Heart pain of love note on 69 -14 jan (Page 28)

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Posted: 22 April 2015 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
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Maan is all set to see Geet nd see dat she is trying to commit suicide.
A girl came near Geet nd when maan tried to talk her she fainted.
I think she is also rape victim

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Posted: 22 April 2015 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
superbbb start dear..Clap Clap Clap
Congrats to you..
very well written .. Thumbs Up
emotional & sad updt..
geet is raped & is in hospital..
maan is feeling guilty..
Its going to be very hard to
maan to console geet
how maan is going to gather
himself nd geet??
continue dear...
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sad teaser
who is this lil innocent soul.
waiting
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Awesome teaser

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What  is    rape

Iwent  down  to play

After  my  home  work is  done

When is  sung song  mommy u

Give   me  price

Me  n  my  buddy playing  in ground

Our  cloth  and  hand  get  dirty  with  mud


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Same  time  uncle  come  their  and  with  laugh

Say ohh what  is happening here

Me say  uncle   my buddy  your  doughter  also

Get   dirty  in mud

Uncle  say   so   u  stop  here  and  he  took

Me in house  to  give  me  chocolate

And  when  we  entered  in room he  shut  the  door

 


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When  I so  much  involed   in eating  chocolate  

 he start to  caressed  my  front  and  back

I  say  I finish  my  chocolate  now  me  going  home

But  he  say  stop  I  want  to give   u  new  dress

And he  just  pull my  dress  from my  body

And  he  closed  my  mouth  and  make  me  lay  on floor
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Mother    u  and  papa  take  so  many kiss on  my  cheek

But  uncle start to  kiss my  whole  body

When he  press his  body on mine

My  stumock   start  to  pain

Me  cried   please  leave  me  levae me

But  he  shout  on  me  shut  up  or  I will bit  u

 

 




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This   sudden  pain  I can not  bare  mommy

I  want  u  mommy

Now  I  lost   baatel  to  protest  also

And  suddenly  that  uncle  put  cusion  on  my  face

Mommy  I feel  like  whrn  I  get  cough 

All  start  to  run house  ,  fan   and  I  took last  breath 

Under  that   cusions
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Mother   why  uncle trat  me  like  this I  never hurt his

Doughter  than why 

Moomy u  know   ehen once   I get  burn so little  u 

Cry  with  me   but look  now  my  whole

Body   is painining

But  u  never  heard  my  voice
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From  two  days   u  and  all  crying   me 

Calling u  all  but  u all not  looking to  me

U  alwywes    give  me  neckles  on  my  birthday 

Than  why  today  u put   that  on my   Image  my photo  mommy

All  saying  you , your  doughter   went  to  god  house

But  mother  for  going to  god  hose  we  need 

Such  pain  like  that   uncle   give  to  me

 


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Mommy   form  how  many  hours 

I am shouting  and   but  u  r  not  lesioning  me  just   crying

Mommy  my  throat  went  dry  me  need  water 

Please  give  me in water bag  ..i  don't  want it  in glass

 



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Moomy  I  can  not  come  to  u  now

Please  give  all  toy  to my  buddy

But  say   her  don't took chocolate  from her

Own  father  eles they   will hurt  her  also 

Like  me  n send  to  god  house 

 

 

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Moomy   this  nighbour  aunty  what is  saying

That  her  doughter   get   rape 

Mommy   what  is   rape

Say  na  moomy

What  is   rape                        

 

 

 

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Posted: 23 April 2015 at 5:21am | IP Logged

part  3

 
 
 
please   read  it  clammily 
its   request 
it  is  not  for  hurt  anyone  feeling
but  its  for  awareness of  some  fact
 
mahi 
 
 
 

Maan   look  to  her  ,kya  ye   sab  mere  sath   hota  to  tum  muje   avoid karte   maan  put  his   palm   on di  mouth  and mummer  aise  mat  bolo  app  di  aise  mat  bolo  and  he  hug   his  di  ,like   small   kid   who  searching   peace   in  mother   Aram  ,away  from  all  tensin   worry  painWhen  he   gather  himself  somehow  and  again  look  to   di ,di  nodded  in  yes    and  maan  went   to   geet   room  to   face   a  new 

 storm   he  entered  in room  but  so  much  tensions  emotions   passing  in his  heart   he  feel  like  his  brain  going  to  stop  for  while some  tear fall from his  eyes  he clan that  and  took  slow  step  to   geet

 

 

 

Maan   is full  sweating  when  he  entered  in room ... today  is  his  BIG  exam  , of  their  relation  which  going  to  decide future of  them ...maan  ko  na  hi  sirf  khud  ko  usko bhi  sabhalna  tha  ...

 

 

Maan  look  to  her   who's   back  to  maanMaan  took  deep  breath  and   went   near  her  He  try  to  call her  but  voice  is not  coming  from his  mouth  he  closed  his   eyes    di  word  again start  come in his   mind  he  took  more  Courage  and  reach  to her  and   land  slip  from  his  feet  

 

she  holding  knife  in her  hand  and   trying  to  cut  her hand  ...she  murmuring  he  hating  me  unko  mujse  ghin  aa  rahi  hai 

that's   why  he  don't  come  to  meet  me

maan    eyes  winded   in  shock  his  breath  stop  for  while N   maan pull that  knife  from  her  hand  and  before  he  call  her  she lost  her  hosh  and  her  body  ...lump on bed  like  lifless  doll 

maan  cried  in  fear    doc  doc   please  please   and  nurse  march  to  them she  make  lay geet   on  bed  called  other  assistant  and  maan ask   in  hard  tone   how   she   get  knife  here  how 

nurse   get   scare   yes  its  denger   to  patient  maan  eyes  winded   in  anger   ...he   ask   in angery   tone   how 

sis  -  sorry  sir  pata  nahi  how   ...

maan  want  to  say  more   but   geet   start to  gain hosh  and  maan pointed  her  to  went  out  sis   went  from there   and  maan   sit   on bed   near   geet  this  two  minite   shake him  like  hell  ager  geet  ko  kuch  ho  jata  than its  ...

 

geet  open  her   eyes  and saw  maan  sit  near   her   she  hurriedly wake  up  and  sit ...her   face  start  to  show  so  much  emotions  fear  of  reaction , fear , anger  so  much ...she   bite  her  lips  in  agony  to   stop  her   cry  but   eyes   start  to  bitered  her  and   tear  fall  from  it

 

maan  cluth  his    finger  he   so  much  want  to  hold  her   clean  that   tear  stop   her  to  get   cry  ...he  so   much  wanted  to  shoot   her  pain  he  bend  little  to  her   and  hold  her   face  in his  palm  she  try  to  stop  him  but  maan   put   his  lips  on his  forehead  and  mummer   I  am  with  u  always  ... N  don't  try  to  hurt  my life  my  soul , my  wife  like  this

 

n that    broke  geet   silence   she  cried   MAAANNN ku  hua  ye  mere  sath  ku ...muje   ghin aati  hai   khud   se   ku  ...wo  hath  mere   body  pe   maan  acha  nahi  lagata   bilkul acha  nahi  lagata ...muje ye  touch  se  azadi  chiye  maan  and  maan gather  her  in iron hug  he  want to  protect   her   she  so   much  crying and maan  don't   want  to stop  her  he  want  to  her  become  free  from  this  thought   that  she  is  impure   ... sobbing   in maan  hug  geet  get  sleep  because  of  tiredness   and  maan  make  her lay  on bed  properly  and lay beside  her...

 

 

 

 

In morning  geet   wake   up  with  sound  and   found  maan   with   some   bag  he   put  that   in  cupbord  and   say   geet   come  fresh up  me  going to   bring  tea  and  coffee   for  us  and  geeet   nodded   in yes

After   get  fresh geet  standing  near  window ...she   found   one   girl  age  around  8  in hospital  ...running  like  she  hiding  from  anyone   and  next  moment  she  dash  in  room  and  hide  behind  geet  and  mummer  di  di   bacho   wo  fhir   se  sui  laga  denge

 

Same  time   maan  entered   in  room   Maan  heard  some   voice  and  look  source   their   a  girl  hiding  behind  geet  ,  he  like  that  innocent  soul  and  he  call   who is  hiding  their   ...come  out  and  next  moment that   small   girl   cried  in horrified   voice   na  na   pass  mat    aana  please  pass   mat   aana...and  she  fainted   their  itself ... and   before   she   touch  ground  maan   run  to  her  and   catch  on time  but  in next  moment  his  eyes  winded  in shock  his   hand  get   socked   with  sticky  blood  ...he  himself  feel frozen  puri  taraha  wo  sunn  ho  gaya  like   someone  snach  his ability  of  thinking

 

 

Other   side    geet  try  to  called  sis  by  phone  in front  of  that   small girls  she  forget   her   own  pain    and  sorrow

 

 

precap


'What  is    rape

Iwent  down  to play

After  my  home  work is  done

When is  sung song  mommy u

Give   me  price

Me  n  my  buddy playing  in ground

Our  cloth  and  hand  get  dirty  with  mud
 

Same  time  uncle  come  their  and  with  laugh

Say ohh what  is happening here

Me say  uncle   my buddy  your  doughter  also

Get   dirty  in mud

Uncle  say   so   u  stop  here  and  he  took

Me in house  to  give  me  chocolate

And  when  we  entered  in room he  shut  the  door

 

When  I so  much  involed   in eating  chocolate  

 he start to  caressed  my  front  and  back

I  say  I finish  my  chocolate  now  me  going  home

But  he  say  stop  I  want  to give   u  new  dress

And he  just  pull my  dress  from my  body

And  he  closed  my  mouth  and  make  me  lay  on floor


Mother    u  and  papa  take  so  many kiss on  my  cheek

But  uncle start to  kiss my  whole  body

When he  press his  body on mine

My  stumock   start  to  pain

Me  cried   please  leave  me  levae me

But  he  shout  on  me  shut  up  or  I will bit  u

 

 This   sudden  pain  I can not  bare  mommy

I  want  u  mommy

Now  I  lost   baatel  to  protest  also

And  suddenly  that  uncle  put  cusion  on  my  face

Mommy  I feel  like  whrn  I  get  cough 

All  start  to  run house  ,  fan   and  I  took last  breath 

Under  that   cusions

 

Mother   why  uncle trat  me  like  this I  never hurt his

Doughter  than why 

Moomy u  know   ehen once   I get  burn so little  u 

Cry  with  me   but look  now  my  whole

Body   is painining

But  u  never  heard  my  voice 
 


 

From  two  days   u  and  all  crying   me 

Calling u  all  but  u all not  looking to  me

U  alwywes    give  me  neckles  on  my  birthday 

Than  why  today  u put   that  on my   Image  my photo  mommy

All  saying  you , your  doughter   went  to  god  house

But  mother  for  going to  god  hose  we  need 

Such  pain  like  that   uncle   give  to  me

 


Mommy   form  how  many  hours 

I am shouting  and   but  u  r  not  lesioning  me  just   crying

Mommy  my  throat  went  dry  me  need  water 

Please  give  me in water bag  ..i  don't  want it  in glass

 

 

Moomy  I  can  not  come  to  u  now

Please  give  all  toy  to my  buddy

But  say   her  don't took chocolate  from her

Own  father  eles they   will hurt  her  also 

Like  me  n send  to  god  house 

 

 

 

Moomy   this  nighbour  aunty  what is  saying

That  her  doughter   get   rape 

Mommy   what  is   rape

Say  na  moomy

what  is   rape

                       

this   poem  is  not  mine  I  get it  by  massage  on 

gmail   and  want  to  share   with  u  all 

read   and think  for  while

 

 

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