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MG ff Bleeding Heart pain of love note on 69 -14 jan (Page 16)

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Posted: 04 February 2015 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
awesome update beautifully written maan is in pain he cant save his wife sad 4 maaneet how they get alone god give maaneet courage

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impoojaverma IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 February 2015 at 1:40am | IP Logged
nice part.

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 February 2015 at 11:57am | IP Logged

Mahi these incidents are very cruel for a girl  and I hate to read stories based on real horrible incidents of anybody's personal life...

humein inn real life incidents ka use nahin karna chahiye...making story is like making mockery of someone's life...some time back one writer wrote story on Delhi rape victim Nirbhaya...many readers oppose that also...

here we all are women who are reading this story so what is the use of sharing it with will be useful if u share it in forum where men read this and realize the pain of a woman...

these are my personal thoughts...u r not bound to my thinking...but I can't read this story...

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Posted: 10 February 2015 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
Nice pro... Continue soon

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Posted: 12 February 2015 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
Waitin for dis oneDay Dreaming

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Mahimaan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 February 2015 at 4:54am | IP Logged

Big smile

Edited by Mahimaan - 19 February 2015 at 5:12am
Mahimaan IF-Rockerz

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part  2


He  is   crying   his   heart  his   cry  make   cry  to  stone  also  so  much  pain , in  his  cry dono   ne  dekha   hua    ek  chota sa    sapana  aise    bhiker   gaya  kuch  hi  minto  main   he  so  much  wanted  to  rewind   time  and go  back  kaash    wo  yaha   aata  hi  nahi   pal  bhar    main  kya  se  kya  ho  gaya   ...wo   aise   ek  beautiful   doll   aise   bikharker   reh   gayi  





His   tear  not  stopping   same  time  his  phone   start  to   ring   he  don't  want  to  talk  anyone   now   but  mobile  is  not   stopping   at  last    with  anger  he  took  call   and  its   from hospital    she gain   her  hosh  and  calling  him   he   run  like  manic   tear  falling   from   eyes  ...he  somehow   reach  to  her  room  which number   he  get  on  call




He    open   door   but  his   hand    froze  on their   itself  how  he  going   to   face  her  how  no  its  not  possible  ,  when  he  fully  fail  to  protect  her  how  he   will show  his   cowered   face  to  her  jisne   uski   raksha   karneki    oath   li  thi  wo  aise  fail  ho  gaya   how   he   going  to  show  his   face  to  that  innocent   soul






He   feel  lifeless himself  and  he  took  some  step back  and   start  to   walk  outside  of  that  hospital   ,nurse   get  that  he  don't   want  to

Went   inside   ...






She   enetered  in  room   and  found   that  girl   looking  to  door, jaise    dhoond   rahi   ho  kisiko    nurse  feel   bad  for  her  and  say  unka  mobile   nahi lag   raha    aa  jayenge  till  than  u  finish   your  juice 






Other  side  maan  come  out   from   hospital   ans   sit   near  one   tree  little  away  from   he  closed  his  eyes   ...he   feel  so helpless he   want  to  see  and  avoid   same  time ,big   question   is  hammering   in his   head  how   he  going  to   face  her 




Same   time   his  phone   bippp  its  from  his  near   one  he  took  deep  breath   and  mummer   hallo



Maan - hospital  ,  how  u  know ,




Ok   this   xyz  and  he   cut  call  tear  again   start  to  run  from  his    eyes 10 min  went  like  this   and  someone  put  hand  on  his   shoulder   and  mummer    maannn




He  know  who  is  that  he  trun  and   sobbed     diii  sab  khatam  ho  gaya   di   main   ,I   can  not  able  to    save  her  di   ...wo   toot  gayi   like  doll  di  kaise  jodunga   main  ab  usko  how   di   kya karu   di 




That  person  also   sob  with  him  and  cup    his   face  in  plam  and  say   look   at   me   mere  taraf    dekho 




Tum  mile   usase  ,hosh  main   aa  gayi  kya  bolo  ...



Maan  look  to  her  and  mummer   main   dar   gaya   uska   samna    karne   se , I   feared   to  face  her  and   next  moment he   get  tight   slap   he  look   her   with  shock   and  mummer   di 




Di  -  kya   kar   diya   tume  maan   ab   sabse  jada   usko  tumari   zarrort   hai    wo  wiase  hi  mehssos   karegi  jaise  tum   react  kroge  maan  ...ku   smaje  nahi  pa   rahe  ho  tum   a  woment   fight  with all  odd   but  she  need   support   of  her  husband,  ku   samje   nahi  pa   rahe   ho 





Maan  closed  his  face  with  his  own  plam  and  mummer   wo  mujse   nafrat  karegi   di  nafrat  karegi  ...main  kaise  jau  uske   samane   di




Di   took  him  in hug  and   say  in  firm   voice  u  have    face  this  ,tume  hi  usko   smbhalna  hoga   usko  pata  bhi   nahi  chalna  chiye   ke   hum  log  yaha  hai   tumare   pass   samje    bacha  please  ,mere   taraf    dekho  maan   mere  taraf   dekho






Maan   look  to  her  ,kya  ye   sab  mere  sath   hota  to  tum  muje   avoid    karte   maan  put  his   palm   on di  mouth  and mummer  aise  mat  bolo  app  di  aise  mat  bolo  and  he  hug   his  di  ,like   small   kid   who  searching   peace   in  mother   Aram  ,away  from  all  tension   worry  pain 



When  he   gather  himself  somehow  and  again  look  to   di ,di  nodded  in  yes    and  maan  went   to   geet   room  to   face   a  new  storm    ...







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Mahimaan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 February 2015 at 5:09am | IP Logged
bahot   jada   serious   and   subject  lake  main
ye    sotry   start  kiya  hai    comment   bhi   bahot
ache   mile  hai   jo  muje  kuch   sikha   gaye 
aim  behind  this   ff  is   to talk 
with  u  all  about   this 
abuse ,virginity    and  all
koi  hume   chuta     hai   to   hum
ku   apne   ko  takleef   dete  hai  koi 
ku  nahi  bhool  jate    ek  accident   samje  ke
I  know   ye  bhool  na  bahot   muskil   hota  hai 
lakin  hum  try  to   kar   sakte hai 
now   think  about   following  point 
koi   humare  samne  kisiko  unnecessary   touch 
karne  ki  koshis   karta  hai   to  ku  hum 
ye  sochte  hai  aree   ye  muje  kaha  touch  kar  raha 
to   main   ku    dakhal   du 
to   kya   ye   souch    sahi  hai 
think   about    hum  khood  kitne  aise inncidance
hone   se  rok   sakte  hai
ek  baar  soch   lena  is   bare   main

Edited by Mahimaan - 19 February 2015 at 5:11am

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