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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 12:24am | IP Logged
Hi Guys,
I have written the final part of the series...Smile

I tried to find the ghazal which would suit the story I wanted to write, but could not find one.

So I wrote this Ghazal myself. 

Please let me know how you liked my Ghazal and my story. First half is from Manik's POV and second half from Nandini's POV.

Love
MD

Here it is...

 I am again standing here, in front of her window. There she was, leaning on the window grill, just like before. I was here just to see her, for I could not stay away from her even for a night, just like before. She was there, near the window, listening to ghazals, just like before. Only, I have changed and so has she.

So much has happened in the last few days. This new year was like a new birth to me, to her and to us.We just could not stay apart, for it was inevitable that we are together.

I could hear the beginning of a new ghazal and I could not help but think of her, see her and get lost in her.

"Bade dino baad sukoon sa hai aaj seene mein

Jaise koi chaaya hai aaj mere rooh mein"

I am at peace finally. All the torment and turmoil I went through is a mere memory now. She is with me, protecting me, protecting my soul, my entire being. She is the only one who can.

"Hum jahan khade hain, saamne manzil hamari

Koi chaand bhi na de paye

Koi Taara bhi na de paye

Aisi roshni hai jinki

Hum jahan khade hain, saamne manzil hamari"

I am at home finally. I was lost in the crowd, lost my way. I searched for my destiny, my home and I found her. She filled my heart, my soul with her light, the light which could not be compared with either the moon or the stars, for she is my star. She is the only one who is.

I met her eyes, which spoke volumes and we were talking, yet there was silence, but for the music and our souls were singing.

***

He was here again. But this time, he came back to me. There were no regrets, no pain, no torment. After all we went through, we finally found each other.

I was listening to my poem and could not help but think of him, see him and get lost in him.

"Bade dino baad sukoon sa hai aaj seene mein

Jaise koi tofaan aaj thami ho dil mein"

I am at peace finally. All the hurt and pain which was eating my soul, went away like dust. All the raging storm abated and there was only gentle breeze in my heart. For he is here for me.

"Ye lamha yahi ruk jaaye, ki dekhe hum unhe

Ashq hai in aankho mein

Khushi hai ye seene mein

Samaalu is ehsaas ko

Ye lamha yahi ruk jaaye, ki dekhe hum unhe"

I am at this moment finally. I have tears in my eyes, all these feelings are overwhelming. Yet, I am happy too, to have him here. I want to hold on to these feelings and never let them go. I want to look at him and hold on to him, I never want to let him go. For he is here with me.

I met his eyes, which spoke volumes and we were talking, yet there was silence, but for the music and our souls were singing.




Edited by Muggle_Diaries - 08 January 2015 at 12:37am

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 12:44am | IP Logged


awsome update...

Bade dino baad sukoon sa hai aaj seene mein

Jaise koi chaaya hai aaj mere rooh mein

wow...i really loved it...dear .

u penned it beautifully...their emotions , feelings...wow...amazing

thanks a lot for this awsome update and for ur pm...

please try to write more TS...like this...

love to read more from u...

take care

with lots of love & prayers

aavani



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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 1:43am | IP Logged
Res for now
will read later for sure Hug

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aavani



awsome update...

Bade dino baad sukoon sa hai aaj seene mein

Jaise koi chaaya hai aaj mere rooh mein

wow...i really loved it...dear .

u penned it beautifully...their emotions , feelings...wow...amazing

thanks a lot for this awsome update and for ur pm...

please try to write more TS...like this...

love to read more from u...

take care

with lots of love & prayers

aavani




Thanks a lot Aavani..Hug

Love
MD
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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 5:59am | IP Logged
wow lovely update
very beautifully written
loved it

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 6:01am | IP Logged
wow nice yaar. u wrote it urself, very nice. keep writing. Thanks for d pm.

I read it one more time and the silence between them is speaking its own story.
"woh wahaan aur hum yahaan hain,
yun toh milon ka faasla apne darmiyaan hain.
Par jab dekhte hain unki aankhon main hum toh mehsoos hota hai ki ab toh woh humare aandar hi sama hain"
well ur ghazal hd inspired me to write smthng so I hd wrote this. Its nt that good bt its what I feel after reading ur post. They both r together nw they both r so into each other dat nw nothing cn seperate them.

Edited by apardh_ba - 08 January 2015 at 11:14am

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Humzy

wow lovely update
very beautifully written
loved it

Thanks Humzy..Smile

Love
MD
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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by apardh_ba

wow nice yaar. u wrote it urself, very nice. keep writing. Thanks for d pm.

I read it one more time and the silence between them is speaking its own story.
"woh wahaan aur hum yahaan hain,
yun toh milon ka faasla apne darmiyaan hain.
Par jab dekhte hain unki aankhon main hum toh mehsoos hota hai ki ab toh woh humare aandar hi sama hain"
well ur ghazal hd inspired me to write smthng so I hd wrote this. Its nt that good bt its what I feel after reading ur post. They both r together nw they both r so into each other dat nw nothing cn seperate them.

WoW!!! I loved it... Clap

Very well said... no matter how much physical distance is there between them, they are always in each others soul... superb...please write more and post them...

Love
MD

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