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TS - Kaash Aisa Koi Manzar Hota (Final Part-Page 8 updated) (Page 10)

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Posted: 10 January 2015 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
You know replies are in line Choti...Smile

Love
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Originally posted by basket_101

Hey Di!!!
First thing first, that was a beautiful ghazal!
Great job with that :D
You've written it so well!  It's perfect for them <3

-- Thanks a lot.Smile I could not find one to fit them perfectly, I thought, chalo I will only write. Thanks for liking it..

Reading Manik's POV was heart-warming.  Day Dreaming
I felt satisfaction in reading this TS because you've done such a great job putting words to his emotions!
My favourite part of the ghazal was: Hum jahan khade hain, saamne manzil humari
And my favourite part of his bit: I am at home finally
Those two bits really nailed his emotions, bang-on!

--Yeah. For Manik, she has always been a home. A place where he can forget the world, for she will shield him, a place to rest.

Coming to Nandu's POV
My favourite bit was: I am at peace finally
It's a small line but it says so much, means so much.

-- Yup. She got answers finally, all her raging pain, anger finally quietened.  

You've done suuuch a brilliant job!
Seriously!! Clap

--Thanks..I am getting fatter by all your compliments...Embarrassed

Aapki tareef karne ke liye mere paas shabd nahi hai
Ijaazat ho toh hum bhi kuch arz karna chahenge

Kya hua agar hum aapko jaante nahi
Kya hua agar hum aapko jaante nahi
IF pe friends hain, koi rishta hai toh sahi

Waise I know I'm talented, but don't compliment me too much.  ROFL

- Wah Wah! Kya baat hai! This is too good...Big smile Seriously..

Okay that was a random shayaari I made while writing this comment LOL
Aapki ghazal padh kar mujhe inspiration aa gaya :P
hehee

Anyway chalo..
Bahot lamba comment ho raha hai LOL

I really loved the TS!!  Keep writing and flooding my inboxes <3
Sach mein it's a pleasure to read your work (:

Take care di
Love, Hinal HugEmbarrassed

--Thank you...you too take care..
Love you.Hug

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She only wants him that was is so true
Beautiful ClapClapClap

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Posted: 25 March 2015 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
part 1 superb 

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part 2 amazing 

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Posted: 25 March 2015 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
part 3 wonderful 
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nice story 

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loved it 

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Posted: 01 April 2015 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chair1992

She only wants him that was is so true
Beautiful ClapClapClap

Thanks. Smile

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