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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Hi Guys,
Today I was listening to one my all time favourite Ghazal album "Kaash" by Hariharan. There was this one Ghazal which did not let me go and I had to write a story on Manik based on that. 

The Ghazal is sung and composed by Hariharan and written by Tahir Faraz. 

So here it is.. Please let me know how you liked it.

**

I just had to see her. I was standing right below her window, my usual place, my home, waiting for that one glance which would make my world all right. So much happened in last few days, it was like I lived my entire life in these days. My entire being is filled with so much of regrets that I am unable to breath. May be she can fill it again with peace. It was dark outside, just like what I was feeling from inside. My whole life was scattered, everyone, everything around me falling into pieces.

Just then she came near the window and leaned on the grill closing her eyes as though she was savouring something from her heart and soul. I could hear beginning of sitar strings and a Ghazal being played out from her bedroom. Was this what she was listening to with utmost care and attention? Only she but who else has taste for such music!!

I could hear the poem now, slowly loosing myself into it and remembering.

"Kaash Aisa Koi Manzar Hota

Mere Kandhe Pe,

Tera Sar Hota

Kaash Aisa Koi Manzar Hota

Mere Kandhe Pe,

Tera Sar Hota

Kaash Aisa Koi Manzar Hota"

How apt, I thought. It was as if she knew what I was feeling. Is this what she felt too? "I could not be with you. It was all a game. It was a revenge for the insult you paid with your punch"... I could hear myself saying these again and again to her. "I am sorry. Please come back." Will an apology be enough to erase the hurt I had caused her. I can still hear her painful cries, for it tore my soul into pieces. Can we ever go back to what we were before? For I wish right now, this is the moment when you could rest your head on my shoulder and all of the world would just melt away. Just this one moment.

"Jama Karta Jo Main Aye Huye Sang

Sar Chupane Ke Liye Ghar Hota

Mere Kandhe Pe,

Tera Sar Hota

Kaash Aisa Koi Manzar Hota"

All the time we had together, all the stolen glances, all moments when I had your hand in mine, all the moments when you bought smile to my face, all that I stored them away at the deepest part of my soul. Then I broke your heart and it ripped my soul apart spreading all these memories which held dear into dust. If only hadn't done that, today I would have somewhere to go. For I wish right now, this is the moment when you could rest your head on my shoulder and I would be home. Just this one moment.

"Is Bulandi Pe Bahot Tanha Hoon

Kaash Mein Sab Ke Barabar Hota

Mere Kandhe Pe,

Tera Sar Hota

Kaash Aisa Koi Manzar Hota"

I am at the door step of success, fame and everything I could ask for. I am rich and I have great friends who do anything for me. People listen and clap when I sing. But I am dying of loneliness. The world wants a singer, and a musician. Friends want a leader and someone whom they can depend on. The family wants my favors. You are the only one who wanted me. But I threw that away. If only I was an ordinary man, without these constraints. For I wish right now, this is the moment when you could rest your head on my shoulder and I would be content. Just this one moment.

"Usne Uljha Diya Duniya Mein Mujhe

Varna Ek Aur Kalander Hota

Mere Kandhe Pe,

Tera aa Sar Hota

Kaash Aisa Koi Manzar Hota"

I was angry at this world, with everyone and even you. I bought pain and hurt to others, even while I was in pain and hurt. All this rage in me made me forget who I am. It ate me up from within. If only I hadn't lost you, I would have had my only chance to let go of this anger, hurt and pain. For I wish right now, this is the moment when you could rest your head on my shoulder and I would be at peace. Just this one moment.


Love

MD

INDEX:

PART 2 updated in Page 4.

Last Part updated in Page-8.





Edited by Muggle_Diaries - 08 January 2015 at 12:35am

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 11:55am | IP Logged
wow this is so beautiful and touching... I like this Gazal also... this situation is so matching with the gazal ...trust me I really enjoyed it ...when I was reading i feel like I was watching the scene ...thank you so much for writing these wonderful feelings ...do write more stuff plz...Clap

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
excellent

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
res...*fangirling over itEmbarrassed*
unres
 
Thanks for letting me know about the ghazal. It was such a heart soothing rendition by hariharan sir. 
The OS is beautiful and am simply in awe, as to  how perfectly  the lyrics stay in sync with the current scenario of Manan. You have brought out  his inner turmoil and the accompanied numbing pain of remorse which has clouded his thoughts, in a very astounding manner.
I can still hear her painful cries, for it tore my soul into pieces. Can we ever go back to what we were before? For I wish right now, this is the moment when you could rest your head on my shoulder and all of the world would just melt away. Just this one moment.
These lines are pure brilliant .The realisation , which has struck him regarding his mindless actions that had inflicted so much pain , is again so poignant.
Surrounded by hundreds ,but still feeling a sense of loneliness could be so heartwrenching and added to that, a  sense of inferior complex sums pretty much the guy manik is..
I love the OS mainly for the sheer simplicity and  elegance,, it's him yearning for her love praying for a moment where they could forget the world and just belong with each other.This makes it so  relatable and stays in tune with the characters.,the music again being the link as to what they are feeling is too good to be put into words.


Edited by shefni - 28 December 2014 at 7:58pm

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
This was so beautifully written!!!!! Loved it!!
Tfs!
Thanx for the pm!
Keep writing!

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by manan_flab

res

*unres*

thank god dat song dint let uh go...

warna we wud have never got such work...

 B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L ... as simple as dat... 
great work dear... Big smile

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
lovely os
loved it 
very nicely written

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
This is so damn beautiful! Loved it!! 

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