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ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED (Page 97)

chavvi16 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 11:08am | IP Logged
you deserve all the rest my dear
wow that would explain it
i mean why she chose payal
she is desperate
so taking such steps
but payal isnt happy about it
duh how can she be
after what happened
she is bound to be suspicious of mami
and cant say i blame her
even now i find it bit suspicious
what is wrong with mami
isme khushi ki kya galti
did she ask them to fall for her
and so what she did
she encouraged neither
and does mami really think that khushi will listen to her next time
that was a one time deal
anyway forget her for now
thats how they dealt with their grievances
by beating the other up
well guess it worked
ahhh payal was there for arnav when his own bhai wasnt
isnt that cute
hmmm payash huh
they really need to talk
after all payal isnt happy with mami proposal
and to be fair she is the one marrying akash not her family
so in the end it will be her decision
hmmm mami bahut chalu nikli
ek teer se do nishane maare
waise aman is right about one thing
sheetal is not worth thinking about
awww aman was so mature there
hiding his pain the way he did
but yes cant be easy
what with them both liking the same girl
but the said girl loves only one of them
though she isnt giving him a chance either
guess for now thats best
if their love is true which i know it is
they will end up together
seems guptas are very happy with payash rishta
if only payal will agree
am sure she will
till next time take care

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Barunz4ever Goldie

Joined: 10 February 2012
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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Awesome update!!!
I am impressed with Payal. Behind that soft demeanour is a very sensible ,matured ,understanding and loving individual...A perfect match for Aaksh and a perfect bahu to the Raizada 's..
Loved Aman n Khushi's mending convo.and Aman n Arnavs mending boy fight...LOL..A friend like Aman is hard to find. No wonder Arnav and Khushi don't want to loose him...
Khushis concern hug for Arnav was surprisingly unexpected but very soothing for the parched heartsWink
Why does Manorama have such strong negative thoughts about khushi...Why has she misunderstood her so much??? Hope her dislike towards khushi doesn't come in between Arnav n khushi's future together... dearTongue

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ManKiBaath Senior Member

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 11:15am | IP Logged

Everyone super excited about the proposal from Manorama.  With the kundlis also matched, looks like it's jhat mangni phat shaadi..but the big IF and ONLY IF someone could convince Payal, to...and that can and only can be done by Akash...Gaadi poora ready hai, just need to add some gas/petrol

How many more layers of plans and opinions does Manorama have? Her layers can put even an onion to shame:). Just like an onion, she can bring you to tears but she also seems to be the essential ingredient for every scene and her being invovled also adds a special flavor for every scene. Her googly is still in the air and I am still waiting to see which way its going to turn.

I am glad that our Jai/Veeru are back and reconciled in their own style on expected lines. But, I expected Arnav to be my Jai but was pleasantly surprised that it turned out to Aman. If you are going to make everyone nice and sweet like this, I will be having a hard time managing my favorite list :). The list is obviously extended now but not able to decide who to give the #1 spot to.

Lastly, when reconciliations are all around - what is the hang up for Manorama with Kushi?  Iska jawaab kab milega, Saiyu?

Edited by bhavali4RR - 03 February 2015 at 12:35pm

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Raila1014 Goldie

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Posts: 1668

Posted: 28 January 2015 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Me think that the lady is protesting too much about the proposed marriage.  Payal is not wrong though is doubting Manaroma's sincerity with her offer.  If she does not like her family, why is she doing this?  Well I guess she will find out once she is the bahu rani.  Akash is already onboard and looks like her family has no objection, so Payalia I think you are already spoken for girl.  Time to start packing for the trip across the yard to the big house.  I thought it was kinda cute that Payal supported Arnav during this debacle.  I always enjoyed Payal and Arnav in IPK and wished they had more interaction.  I guess the guys resolved their issue like men and Kushi was able to get everything off her chest as well with Aman.  So Arnav will be wondering what is up her ass for not forgiving him, right?  I also wonder why Mano hates Kushi so much.  Besides her character and Shyam marrying Anjali, what else does Manorama have against Kushi?

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Sweety012345 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Awesome update 

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vibha92 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6749

Posted: 28 January 2015 at 11:25am | IP Logged
superb part!!...
payal-arnav relation is a pleasant surprise!!...loving d bonding as much as i love akash n his choti's!!...
loved aman-khushi convo!!...i m liking dis aman boy quite a lot after dis update!!...Wink
his logic about manorama asking payal for her son,is to the point!!...he is right i guess!!...
manorama really dislike khushi so much!!!...:( why such hatred for her!!...
waiting eagarly for nxt part...

Edited by nirmal1992 - 29 January 2015 at 2:30am

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IronButterfly IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 11:27am | IP Logged
Few steps forward...
Few steps backward...

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just4this Goldie

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 11:30am | IP Logged
Thank uu for the big update
So all is good between everybody that's good
So all goody goody update
Having faith in u and ur love for arhi
Hoping all will be goody goody between our arhi soon 
Eagerly waiting to see how the story unfolds here after 
Be blessed
Thank u for the update

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